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by Zerebos
Tue Feb 21, 2017 2:52 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Hanako's Love and Hisao's Regret (Chapter 5 Added 2-28-2016)
Replies: 33
Views: 9864

Re: Hanako's Love and Hisao's Regret (Chapter 5 Added 2-28-2

This is very unique continuation of Hanako's good end, not something I've seen before. I really like it, it definitely seems like a real possibility in canon too!
by Zerebos
Tue Feb 21, 2017 1:58 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (Updated 1/12)
Replies: 1057
Views: 294436

Re: Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (Updated 1/19)

Hoping everything works out for you, Eurobeat!
by Zerebos
Mon Feb 20, 2017 12:49 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Dancing: A Miki pseudo-route (Update 7/30/17)
Replies: 227
Views: 70293

Re: Dancing: A Miki pseudo-route (Update 2/20)

Fluffy is a good way of putting it, acquireTigris, but I really liked the chapter. It still felt like their was some unspoken progress in their relationship as hinted by the old lady.
by Zerebos
Sun Feb 19, 2017 4:18 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Teach Me To Dance - A Natsume Ooe Pseudo-Route(Updated 4/8)
Replies: 74
Views: 16838

Re: Teach Me To Dance - A Natsume Ooe Pseudo-Route(Updated 2

Great chapter, I wonder how the fireworks go :wink:
InSaiyan wrote:"Ha! It's okay Hisao. What's u-?" Natsumes cheerful voice cuts off with a small gasp as her eyes lock on to the unicorn on my hands.
Pretty much how I pictured Natsume:
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by Zerebos
Thu Feb 16, 2017 5:56 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Teach Me To Dance - A Natsume Ooe Pseudo-Route(Updated 4/8)
Replies: 74
Views: 16838

Re: Teach Me To Dance - A Natsume Ooe Pseudo-Route(Updated 2

You're such a tease :wink: but I really like where this is headed so far. I wonder what this 'research' is really gunna be.

One more that I think Mirage didn't get:
Her hands are locked together in front of hips
Her hands are locked together in front of her hips?
by Zerebos
Thu Feb 16, 2017 10:42 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Infinite Promises - A Lilly Epilogue [updated 6/8]
Replies: 51
Views: 12166

Re: Infinite Promises - A Lilly Route Epilogue [updated 2/11

gibzx wrote:I mean, how many times have we seen Hisao's parents being depicted as generic japanese businessmen? :P
That and all the times I see Mrs. Nakai hate on the girl he brings home. That got old really fast.
by Zerebos
Thu Feb 16, 2017 10:37 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Cup and Saucer: A Rika Fan Route
Replies: 35
Views: 7457

Re: Cup and Saucer: A Rika Fan Route

This story is really cool so far, and its good to see Rika finally branching out in the latest installment!
by Zerebos
Thu Feb 16, 2017 3:49 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Can You Accept Your Fate? - Saki Pseudo Route (Ch. 8, 15/02)
Replies: 75
Views: 23415

Re: Can You Accept Your Fate? - Saki Pseudo Route (Ch. 8, 15

I cannot verify the medical accuracy of this chapter so I'll just smile and nod :wink: This is a pretty decent chapter, finding out more about Hisao's conditions. We also learn more about Nakata as a person... he's unique? Definitely interesting to read through, it's odd to see the 'good-guy' Hisao ...
by Zerebos
Thu Feb 16, 2017 3:42 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Headlines: Ch 11 [Updated 19/7/15]
Replies: 55
Views: 11604

Re: The Headlines: Ch 11 [Updated 19/7/15]

Your depictions of the characters are definitely unique, but I like it. I don't think Hanako is too OOC here, she does join the newspaper club normally anyways, and she didn't seem overly social here to me anyways.
by Zerebos
Thu Feb 16, 2017 2:39 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Mask Off: A Molly Route (Update 3/8)
Replies: 72
Views: 21085

Re: "Can you open your mind?" A Molly Route (Update 10/21)

The chapter was good overall, but the shopping section dragged on a bit - with four or five stores and listing what everyone was looking at for each of them. While I can understand this to a point, I feel like this helps us understand the characters in this fic a bit better in terms of who they are...
by Zerebos
Wed Feb 15, 2017 12:15 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Footsteps Of A Friend
Replies: 19
Views: 3593

Re: The Footsteps Of A Friend

Pretty good read and definitely very unique. I must agree with Silentcook about the walls of text however, I recommend taking a look at Mirage's tips in the fanfic tips topic. Edit: I'd also like to say this made me rather sad to read through and figure out what happened. Especially the death of His...
by Zerebos
Wed Feb 15, 2017 1:29 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Can You Accept Your Fate? - Saki Pseudo Route (Ch. 8, 15/02)
Replies: 75
Views: 23415

Re: Can You Accept Your Fate? - Saki Pseudo Route (Ch. 7, 7/

ComeWhatMay wrote:
I just got roasted by Silentcook. Fitting, I suppose.
Well at least you predicted it right?

Love the writing by the way!
by Zerebos
Tue Feb 14, 2017 11:18 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Infinite Promises - A Lilly Epilogue [updated 6/8]
Replies: 51
Views: 12166

Re: Infinite Promises - A Lilly Route Epilogue [updated 2/11

I've read a lot of Lilly/Hisao epilogues and fanfics, but I think this one is rather unique, I'm really liking it. Also your portrayal of Hisao's parents seems much different than what I'm used to, it's a nice change of pace.
by Zerebos
Tue Feb 14, 2017 9:34 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Regrets - A Post-Bad End Musing (Updated 1/25/17)
Replies: 28
Views: 6924

Re: Regrets - A Post-Bad End Musing (Updated 1/25/17)

I was honestly not a big fan of the concept when I first read what it was. But your writing immediately drew me in and I read everything you've written. This is really unique and I'm very curious to see where you'll take it.
by Zerebos
Tue Feb 14, 2017 7:45 pm
Forum: Fan Art
Topic: Emi's Art
Replies: 22
Views: 7002

Re: Emi's Art

Oh well perfect then! Awesome work, Emi! :D