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by TubaMirum
Tue Mar 01, 2016 6:29 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Valse Sentimentale - OC Drabble (Updated 4/10/16)
Replies: 63
Views: 10926

Chapter 9: Children's March: "Over the Hills and Far Away"

Chapter 9: Children's March: "Over the Hills and Far Away" Part One After a morning like that, class is such a relative and unequivocal bore that it’s all I can do to not sleep through all of the lessons. I was hoping that the excitement Kyouko had infected me with would help inspire me to pay bett...
by TubaMirum
Mon Feb 29, 2016 12:21 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Hanako's Love and Hisao's Regret (Chapter 5 Added 2-28-2016)
Replies: 33
Views: 9596

Re: Hanako's Love and Hisao's Regret (Chapter 5 Added 2-28-2

And if you could, why is it "Hanako and me" rather than "Hanako and I"? If I might interject, "I" is a subject pronoun, while "me" is an object pronoun. To put it simply, you use "I" if you yourself (or the character you're writing as, in this case) are doing the action in the sentence, while you u...
by TubaMirum
Mon Feb 29, 2016 1:20 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Alt Dreams [One-Shots] (#61—'Paralysis')
Replies: 283
Views: 81164

Re: Alt Dreams [One-Shots] (46—'Ghostbusted') (20160229)

Oh that was just a charm :lol:
by TubaMirum
Sun Feb 28, 2016 11:40 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Valse Sentimentale - OC Drabble (Updated 4/10/16)
Replies: 63
Views: 10926

Chapter 8: Introduction, or Sunrise

Chapter Eight Part Two “Do you actually enjoy freezing to death or did something steal your attention?” She smirks, the way she makes light of it both hilarious and frustrating. “Sorry. We’re at the doors now.” I murmur, defeated yet again, as if I ever stood a chance to beat this girl in a game of ...
by TubaMirum
Sun Feb 28, 2016 11:31 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Valse Sentimentale - OC Drabble (Updated 4/10/16)
Replies: 63
Views: 10926

Chapter 8: Introduction, or Sunrise

Chapter 8: Introduction, or Sunrise Part One Dressing myself alone in my room is about as quiet as should be expected. I chance another look in the mirror, nodding along as I confirm that I’m still me once again. My hair has grown damp and is depressingly straight as a result, but everything else a...
by TubaMirum
Sun Feb 28, 2016 11:22 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Valse Sentimentale - OC Drabble (Updated 4/10/16)
Replies: 63
Views: 10926

Chapter 7: Fugue in G Minor "Little"

Chapter Seven Part Two There’s a strange aroma to the bathroom, one that wasn’t there before. At first I decide it’s just the smell of Kyouko’s soap and shampoo, but there’s a musty quality to it that doesn’t make much sense. I don’t really have the time to worry over it as I slide past the stall ho...
by TubaMirum
Sun Feb 28, 2016 11:13 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Valse Sentimentale - OC Drabble (Updated 4/10/16)
Replies: 63
Views: 10926

Chapter 7: Fugue in G Minor "Little"

I'm going to spend tonight getting a couple more chapters posted so I can get to posting real updates as soon as possible rather than re-posting things that are already published elsewhere. Also, this is where things start getting... Weird, to put it bluntly. I have a narrative in mind, but it's tak...
by TubaMirum
Sun Feb 28, 2016 7:15 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Valse Sentimentale - OC Drabble (Updated 4/10/16)
Replies: 63
Views: 10926

Re: Valse Sentimentale - OC Romance

That puts the potential issue a lot better into context! I've amended the dialogue to hopefully be a bit more indicative of what Sora is actually asking about.
by TubaMirum
Sun Feb 28, 2016 2:03 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Benefit of Hindsight (updated 4/16!)
Replies: 175
Views: 35040

Re: The Benefit of Hindsight (updated 2/22!)

Caught up! Times like this are why I'm glad I can just go along for the ride most of the time, but your justifications for others' concerns seem sound. It's kind of shocking that Misha would be able to preserve so much of her "Mishaness" even after becoming a full-time teacher. The scene in 2-5 kind...
by TubaMirum
Sun Feb 28, 2016 11:31 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Valse Sentimentale - OC Drabble (Updated 4/10/16)
Replies: 63
Views: 10926

Re: Valse Sentimentale - OC Romance

These are valid criticisms of how I handle Kyouko during these scenes, but I'm going to clarify before I think about changing anything. The first example is probably about 75% her own pride rather than actual practicality. The rest will become apparent as we go on (though I still haven't gotten to e...
by TubaMirum
Sat Feb 27, 2016 7:19 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Flutter - Level Twenty One: Footsies [25/3/17]
Replies: 258
Views: 53135

Re: Flutter - Level Three: Hitboxes [27/2/16]

Fuuka is my kind of devious! :twisted: I don't know if it's necessarily an issue in style, but it does get a bit difficult to discern who's talking in some of the paragraphs where dialogue is split between different characters. I might just be dumb and trying to attribute dialogue in a single paragr...
by TubaMirum
Sat Feb 27, 2016 4:09 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Valse Sentimentale - OC Drabble (Updated 4/10/16)
Replies: 63
Views: 10926

Chapter 6: O zittre nicht, mein lieber Sohn

Chapter Six Part Three The reason in Kyouko’s room is a lot less dire; it’s simply that decorations can’t really be enjoyed. It’s simple, yet the minimalistic styles are pleasant to look upon, and provide no obstacles for walking. It’s relaxing to the point that I almost don’t catch myself starting ...
by TubaMirum
Sat Feb 27, 2016 3:54 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Valse Sentimentale - OC Drabble (Updated 4/10/16)
Replies: 63
Views: 10926

Chapter 6: O zittre nicht, mein lieber Sohn

Chapter Six Part Two I don’t expect a knock for quite some time, so I set to my desk to begin some writing therapy. A piece of paper is already lying at my desk, a pencil on the left side of it with nothing yet written. It’s all I can manage just getting myself to write very basic characters one at ...
by TubaMirum
Sat Feb 27, 2016 3:51 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Valse Sentimentale - OC Drabble (Updated 4/10/16)
Replies: 63
Views: 10926

Chapter 6: O zittre nicht, mein lieber Sohn

Those edits took far less time than expected! I'm actually all caught up now, including with a chapter that hasn't been published anywhere as of yet. I suppose I'll go ahead and get the rest of the first scene posted here before I can finally start writing again Chapter 6: O zittre nicht, mein liebe...
by TubaMirum
Sat Feb 27, 2016 2:25 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Valse Sentimentale - OC Drabble (Updated 4/10/16)
Replies: 63
Views: 10926

Re: Valse Sentimentale - OC Romance

brythain wrote:I first heard your handle from the Requiem Mass. :)
Good catch :P It's kind of a dumb pun, since "Tuba" is just Latin for "trumpet," but I can still pretend my primary instrument is a part of the Requiem.