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by TubaMirum
Mon Mar 21, 2016 10:55 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Flutter - Level Twenty One: Footsies [25/3/17]
Replies: 258
Views: 53137

Re: Flutter - Level Six: Cooldown [21/3/16]

Author's note: Bit of a shorter, slower paced one this time around, just to explore Rika and Fuuka's friendship a little more before I go any further and probably forget her But Fuuka is my favorite :cry: Well, at the very least this chapter exists now and I won't be able to complain too much about...
by TubaMirum
Sun Mar 20, 2016 7:00 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Valse Sentimentale - OC Drabble (Updated 4/10/16)
Replies: 63
Views: 10927

Re: Valse Sentimentale - OC Drabble (Updated 3/20/16)

Much better pacing than previously (though I'm not quite sure where the rewrite begins...) I think you should clarify the extent of Kyouko's blindness soon. She can't be very blind the way she acts. (finding her way around on her second day and walking faster than the sighted person next to her...)...
by TubaMirum
Sun Mar 20, 2016 11:42 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Valse Sentimentale - OC Drabble (Updated 4/10/16)
Replies: 63
Views: 10927

Chapter 12: Bydlo

Chapter Twelve Part Two Rather than find something productive to do, I just spend the 20 minute-long period lying on my back, groaning from pain every now and again as I rerun last night’s trip with Dr. Tadamichi through my head. As it turns out, my concerns for Seto were unwarranted as the van was ...
by TubaMirum
Sun Mar 20, 2016 11:28 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Valse Sentimentale - OC Drabble (Updated 4/10/16)
Replies: 63
Views: 10927

Chapter 12: Bydlo

Chapter 12: Bydlo Part One A loud ringing buzzes in my ears and nearly shocks me upright. My eyes dart open, but even so all I can comprehend is utter darkness. The detail of my room in the morning comes into focus moments later, but something is keeping me from turning toward my alarm clock to sto...
by TubaMirum
Thu Mar 17, 2016 9:28 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Valse Sentimentale - OC Drabble (Updated 4/10/16)
Replies: 63
Views: 10927

Chapter 11: Orient et Occident

Chapter Eleven Part Two “Hey!” Now it seems like it’s Souma’s turn to be ribbed on, but the chance to laugh is lost on me. Two of my seniors are very close, both touching me in fact, and they’re both making light of a feature of mine I’d never noticed before on my own. Now it’s all I can notice. “Se...
by TubaMirum
Thu Mar 17, 2016 9:13 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Valse Sentimentale - OC Drabble (Updated 4/10/16)
Replies: 63
Views: 10927

Chapter 11: Orient et Occident

Chapter 11: Orient et Occident Part One There’s a leap in my chest as recognition sets in. I’m witnessing a recruitment spot tailor-made to me. I have to give Kyouko and Mrs. Sakamoto some props; this is pretty clever of them. The melody that comes out of the instrument is strange, clearly lyrical,...
by TubaMirum
Sun Mar 13, 2016 4:13 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Birthday!
Replies: 927
Views: 102182

Re: Birthday!

It's a very happy birthday for Rin indeed!

Sad that it's raining all day here (I swear it's only rain though. It's salty but it's rain), but I suppose it has to somewhere in the world :D
by TubaMirum
Wed Mar 09, 2016 1:10 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Valse Sentimentale - OC Drabble (Updated 4/10/16)
Replies: 63
Views: 10927

Re: Valse Sentimentale - OC Romance (Up to Date 3/2/16)

You really should have skipped telling us who the characters where and what the story was about before you started telling the story. You completely spoil the revelation that both girls where crippled in concrete incidents. That could have been a nice plot point too but the revelation of it was les...
by TubaMirum
Fri Mar 04, 2016 10:30 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Valse Sentimentale - OC Drabble (Updated 4/10/16)
Replies: 63
Views: 10927

Re: Valse Sentimentale - OC Romance (Up to Date 3/2/16)

I wasn't thinking about doing too much beyond the latest chapter, but I do need to make it a lot clearer that this is actually an uncomfortable and confusing situation and that Kyouko is overstepping her bounds in a massive way. I did take a more convenient route than is appropriate, but the way I'v...
by TubaMirum
Fri Mar 04, 2016 1:34 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Valse Sentimentale - OC Drabble (Updated 4/10/16)
Replies: 63
Views: 10927

Re: Valse Sentimentale - OC Romance (Up to Date 3/2/16)

The more and more I re-read the less and less defensible it all becomes. I'm going to look into another rewrite, a major one this time around. For now, things will stay up because there's no reason to hide from this. Growing pains and the like
by TubaMirum
Thu Mar 03, 2016 10:07 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Valse Sentimentale - OC Drabble (Updated 4/10/16)
Replies: 63
Views: 10927

Re: Valse Sentimentale - OC Romance (Up to Date 3/2/16)

I've been waiting to get eviscerated on this for a while. Things are moving way too fast on one end rather intentionally, and it's for a really dumb reason that could (read: probably will ) fall apart on a whim. But you're right that Sora is probably getting too easily thrown into this. There's a li...
by TubaMirum
Wed Mar 02, 2016 10:43 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Valse Sentimentale - OC Drabble (Updated 4/10/16)
Replies: 63
Views: 10927

Chapter 10: Piano Concerto no. 4 in B-flat Major

Chapter Ten Part Three “Sounds fine to me!” Kyouko smiles and starts back into the room, her cane tapping rhythmically as I follow tentatively. There are a few wayward looks, but nobody seems all that bothered. In fact, it seems as if a good number of the students here are first-years without an ins...
by TubaMirum
Wed Mar 02, 2016 10:34 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Valse Sentimentale - OC Drabble (Updated 4/10/16)
Replies: 63
Views: 10927

Chapter 10: Piano Concerto no. 4 in B-flat Major

Chapter Ten Part Two “Akiyama?” I’m suddenly shocked from my stupor by an unexpected, yet vaguely familiar voice. The clamor of the hall is a bit too intense for me to make out a direction very quickly, so it’s a little relieving that the owner of the voice cuts in front of my vision. It’s relieving...
by TubaMirum
Wed Mar 02, 2016 10:32 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Valse Sentimentale - OC Drabble (Updated 4/10/16)
Replies: 63
Views: 10927

Chapter 10: Piano Concerto No. 4 in B-flat Major

Chapter 10: Piano Concerto No. 4 in B-flat Major Part One “You sure you don’t want to come by?” Anja turns idly towards me when there’s a break in our Physics lecture. “Where again?” I narrow my eyes to try and remember exactly what it was we had been talking about. The tonkatsu had been a huge hel...
by TubaMirum
Tue Mar 01, 2016 6:39 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Valse Sentimentale - OC Drabble (Updated 4/10/16)
Replies: 63
Views: 10927

Chapter 9: Children's March: "Over the Hills and Far Away"

Chapter Nine Part Two “Ah, Junko! Glad you could make it.” Anja winks while I offer a bare-minimum acknowledgement. “Of course! You’ve already met Anja then, huh?” She turns to me as I start to struggle out of my seat. Hunger is starting to be my only driving instinct at this point. “Yeah… You two k...