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by ComeWhatMay
Sat Nov 28, 2015 12:24 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Can You Accept Your Fate? - Saki Pseudo Route (Ch. 8, 15/02)
Replies: 75
Views: 23365

Re: Can You Accept Your Fate? - Saki Pseudo Route (Ch. 5, 9/

I tried not to get too specific about certain details, but I think the shrapnel is buckshot, and I don't think steel degrades or causes blood poisoning.

Regardless, sorry about your grandfather. My grandpa is one of the most down to earth people I know, I couldn't imagine growing up without him.
by ComeWhatMay
Tue Nov 24, 2015 5:12 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: NEW HANAKO ROUTE KEEP THE LOVE ALIVE OC CHARACTER
Replies: 15
Views: 3580

Re: NEW HANAKO ROUTE KEEP THE LOVE ALIVE OC CHARACTER

Interesting start. Very short though, so unless you're going for a sort of "flash fiction" vibe, you might want your posts to be a bit longer. Sammy is certainly a far cry from Hisao, his demeanor could definitely be entertaining! Some quick constructive criticism, your dialogue (at least to me) fee...
by ComeWhatMay
Sun Nov 22, 2015 7:28 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Can You Accept Your Fate? - Saki Pseudo Route (Ch. 8, 15/02)
Replies: 75
Views: 23365

Re: Can You Accept Your Fate? - Saki Pseudo Route (Ch. 5, 9/

Incredible where researching your stories can take you. With Rebecca's condition in mind, I just had beers with a survivor of the 2012 Aurora theater shooting. Guy still has shrapnel in his body for fucks sake. Enlightening, to say the least.
by ComeWhatMay
Thu Sep 17, 2015 5:12 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: You have been playing too much KS when...
Replies: 2404
Views: 231172

Re: You have been playing too much KS when...

When you dream about meeting the girl you're writing about. Last night I dreamed I was at Yamaku, during the fireworks at the school festival, talking with Saki. She was the only one from KS though, other people were in the dream, but they were friends from my real life. It also wasn't exactly Yama...
by ComeWhatMay
Thu Sep 17, 2015 1:34 am
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: You have been playing too much KS when...
Replies: 2404
Views: 231172

Re: You have been playing too much KS when...

When you dream about meeting the girl you're writing about. Last night I dreamed I was at Yamaku, during the fireworks at the school festival, talking with Saki. She was the only one from KS though, other people were in the dream, but they were friends from my real life. It also wasn't exactly Yamak...
by ComeWhatMay
Mon Sep 14, 2015 2:25 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Can You Accept Your Fate? - Saki Pseudo Route (Ch. 8, 15/02)
Replies: 75
Views: 23365

Re: Can You Accept Your Fate? - Saki Pseudo Route (Ch. 5, 9/

All caught up and the last two chapters were fantastic. I love the divergent path Hisao is taking with these characters. Makes him less of a schmuck and more likable in a way. Your OCs are engaging and likable and I'm really digging the story so far. Looking forward to more, CWM! Hey sharp! I'm gla...
by ComeWhatMay
Fri Sep 11, 2015 6:42 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Can You Accept Your Fate? - Saki Pseudo Route (Ch. 8, 15/02)
Replies: 75
Views: 23365

Re: Can You Accept Your Fate? - Saki Pseudo Route (Ch. 5, 9/

For anyone following this story, many thanks for being patient. Classes recently started, and between that, moving, NDK, and a host of other real life complications, made writing this chapter an arduous process. For once though, I'm happy with it. If I'm honest, I haven't exactly been ecstatic about...
by ComeWhatMay
Fri Sep 11, 2015 6:24 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Can You Accept Your Fate? - Saki Pseudo Route (Ch. 8, 15/02)
Replies: 75
Views: 23365

Re: Can You Accept Your Fate? - Saki Pseudo Route (Ch. 4, 8/

Chapter 5 ~ At Once Jaunty and Circumspect A ray of warm sunlight rests on my face. I come to around nine o'clock, thankfully much less frantic than the day before. I roll over, and try in vain for the next half hour to fall back asleep. It's a wasted effort though, the world is in full swing aroun...
by ComeWhatMay
Mon Aug 24, 2015 3:09 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Can You Accept Your Fate? - Saki Pseudo Route (Ch. 8, 15/02)
Replies: 75
Views: 23365

Re: Can You Accept Your Fate? - Saki Pseudo Route (Ch. 4, 8/

Yes, but 'unique' doesn't denote smallness nor diminish anything. It could be intended as an understatement, although 'unique' can't be used that way since a thing is either unique or it isn't. Gotcha. What I was going for was that since "unique" doesn't imply the full extent of what the school's p...
by ComeWhatMay
Sun Aug 23, 2015 5:47 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Can You Accept Your Fate? - Saki Pseudo Route (Ch. 8, 15/02)
Replies: 75
Views: 23365

Re: Can You Accept Your Fate? - Saki Pseudo Route (Ch. 4, 8/

It's a fun read so far, but some word choices need to be altered, I think. Like 'diminutives' for 'euphemisms'. Otherwise, good job. :) I was going for "diminutive" as in the second definition here , which is specifically a euphemism that denotes smallness, or otherwise diminishes somethings meanin...
by ComeWhatMay
Sun Aug 23, 2015 5:17 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Can You Accept Your Fate? - Saki Pseudo Route (Ch. 8, 15/02)
Replies: 75
Views: 23365

Re: Can You Accept Your Fate? - Saki Pseudo Route (Ch. 3, 8/

Chapter 4 ~ Disapproval (Part 2) My alarm clock blares. I hit the snooze button without a second thought. I literally do not have the energy to get up right now. ~~~~~ 15 minutes later, it intrudes upon my rest once again. An uncoordinated flop of my arm later, it gives me another few minutes of gl...
by ComeWhatMay
Mon Aug 17, 2015 10:30 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Can You Accept Your Fate? - Saki Pseudo Route (Ch. 8, 15/02)
Replies: 75
Views: 23365

Re: Can You Accept Your Fate? - Saki Pseudo Route (Ch. 3, 8/

I wont say "you have no idea", because I'm sure most every other writer on this forum feels the same way, but I can't tell you guys how stoked I get every time I see someone other than myself has commented on this story :D. I'm gonna try to keep up and reply with comments, it's the least I can do to...
by ComeWhatMay
Sun Aug 16, 2015 5:00 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Can You Accept Your Fate? - Saki Pseudo Route (Ch. 8, 15/02)
Replies: 75
Views: 23365

Re: Can You Accept Your Fate? - Saki Pseudo Route (Ch. 2, 8/

Chapter 3 ~ Normalcy I can't do this anymore. They're running me ragged. Two days ago, after the stern talking too Shizune gave me after learning of my supposed descent into delinquency, the Student Council duo asked me to join them for lunch. Naturally, I obliged. They're definitely the people I k...
by ComeWhatMay
Sat Aug 15, 2015 6:30 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (Updated 1/12)
Replies: 1057
Views: 293698

Re: Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (Updated 8/9)

Do they have vicodin in japan? that's a very powerful pain killer drug for Saki to be on. It's only a level below methadone in how powerful it is and if someone overdosed on either it could be fatal. From the research I've done for my own story, no. Of the opiate painkillers, Hydrocodone/paracetamo...
by ComeWhatMay
Tue Aug 11, 2015 2:09 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Can You Accept Your Fate? - Saki Pseudo Route (Ch. 8, 15/02)
Replies: 75
Views: 23365

Re: Can You Accept Your Fate? - Saki Pseudo Route (Ch. 2, 8/

Characters Since this fan-fiction has a large cast of original characters, some recommended that I create a character section to keep everything organized, so here it is! Further characters and additional information about existing ones will be added as the story progresses. Only original character...