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by Sharp-O
Sun Jun 21, 2015 4:20 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Monomyth: Taro Arai's Story [Complete]
Replies: 555
Views: 81025

Monomyth: Taro Arai's Story [Update: 21/6/15]

Chapter Two: Nemesis The final bell rings, bringing me out of my own thoughts. I blink and shake my head as I readjust to the now, realising I have no idea what this lesson was. Hope Ritsu will let me borrow her no-- “Aaaah! You drew the newbie!” Ritsu announces excitedly, having crept up behind me...
by Sharp-O
Sun Jun 21, 2015 10:01 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Monomyth: Taro Arai's Story [Complete]
Replies: 555
Views: 81025

Re: Monomyth: Taro Arai's Story

Good writing. Nice chemistry between your characters, too and interesting dialogue. You might be surprised how common thrown-in English phrases are in Japan, but it doesn't detract from the story to pretend otherwise. Thanks, Mirage! I don't think I'm pretending otherwise, I'm just drawing more att...
by Sharp-O
Sun Jun 21, 2015 7:50 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Phantom Pains: Mirror Shoujo
Replies: 85
Views: 13373

Re: Phantom Pains: Mirror Shoujo [Updated 21/6/15]

I don't know how thoroughly you tried pacing but I found that I could quite easily take a slow read of the performance while the music played. Scripting something like that must be incredibly difficult so I applaud you for that :)
by Sharp-O
Sun Jun 21, 2015 7:38 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Monomyth: Taro Arai's Story [Complete]
Replies: 555
Views: 81025

Re: Monomyth: Taro Arai's Story

I like this. I really do. For once, we have a protagonist that is on the heavier side. Cheers, HBH! :D Okay, I was prepared for having to point out a load of spelling errors 'n stuff, but I got nothing. THIS IS AWESOME! :D Oh, I'll slip up from time to time but since I write a lot, I don't think sp...
by Sharp-O
Sat Jun 20, 2015 8:40 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Phantom Pains: Mirror Shoujo
Replies: 85
Views: 13373

Re: Phantom Pains: Mirror Shoujo [Updated 20/6/15]

You've set up a neat twist on the world and I've really been enjoying the ride so far!
by Sharp-O
Sat Jun 20, 2015 8:33 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (Updated 1/12)
Replies: 1056
Views: 290231

Re: Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (Updated 6/17)

Really digging this route, it's been a fantastic read. :D
by Sharp-O
Sat Jun 20, 2015 8:31 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Gravity: A Molly Pseudo- Pseudo Route. Updated as of 11/03/2019
Replies: 113
Views: 30244

Re: Gravity-Molly pseudo route [05/04/15] Update*

Been following this since I came to the site, since I've finally joined thought I'd say that I LOVE this route and Molly is fast becoming a favourite.
by Sharp-O
Sat Jun 20, 2015 8:00 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Monomyth: Taro Arai's Story [Complete]
Replies: 555
Views: 81025

Re: Monomyth: Taro Arai's Story

Chapter One: Identity The night air is good for me, and the darkness is even better. Within the cloak of night, I can operate with complete impunity. I protect this school and the town below. Yamaku cries out to me. She whispers my name like a siren song. I heed her call. I am Taro Arai but the wor...
by Sharp-O
Sat Jun 20, 2015 7:43 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Monomyth: Taro Arai's Story [Complete]
Replies: 555
Views: 81025

Monomyth: Taro Arai's Story [Complete]

Hello, everyone! I'm Sharp-O: long-time lurker, first-time poster. I played and finished KS earlier this year and once I'd read Summer's Clover, I found that I hadn't quite had my fill of this universe just yet! I came here and started reading through a few fics and some were absolutely astounding. ...