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Happy to see you back, Al! There's obviously more to the story and I'll get round to it after I've finished the next Monomyth chapter and the next Hanakio chapter

swampie2 wrote:This was a very nice chapter. Rin felt like VN Rin, something that I have yet to perfect, good job on that.

Thanks, I'm glad to hear that. It's hard to write some established characters, Rin being the hardest for me personally. Glad that you think I got it right.

Folks, we found the true Master of Romance, not that sarcastic joke of one like Hisao. Turns out Suzu was right all along! The harem is nearing completion... :lol: Yes, your Taro somehow understands Rin despite barely having interacted with her before. I thought this might come up and I hold my han...

Chapter Twenty-Seven: Bauhaus Bonds http://i199.photobucket.com/albums/aa129/Sharp-O/hospitalhallway_zpsydfiaohn.jpg I rest my head against my arched hands as the din of the hospital around us continues unabated while an eerie silence engulfs myself, Emi and Miki. The doctors have been working on R...

Wow, some serious Nomiya-bashing here. While I agree he is not really empathetic towards Rin's feelings - though to be honest most people aren't - he is still a teacher and at a school like Yamaku. He would notice one of his students falling physically apart like this. The scene you described is ob...

First up - https://1-media-cdn.foolz.us/ffuuka/board/foolz/image/1359/74/13597442902652.gif NEW CHAPTER KITAAAAAAAAAA~! It's great to see this fic updated! You had some great scenes in here (and one in particular I had an idea for that you took in the complete opposite direction, kudos!) Mysterious ...

Finally got the time to read this. Glad to hear you got 100% on your writing assignment because anything less and you'd have been robbed!

I'd say that you've done a pretty cool adaptation here, Xil and I've enjoyed reading what you put up so far Keep up the good work!

Girls are going missing all over the place recently!

Another fantastic chapter, Swamp! Hanako seems perfectly fine to me and I'm still loving Jun's bluntness

This took an interesting turn. Considering what Rin's neutral ending implies they may very well have saved her life. The Fray is playing in the background of that scene :) And I still need to see Kingsman! I feel the impact of the wall through Takashi Maeda’s body as I grip his collar tight. “Tell ...

Chapter Twenty-Six: Craquelure Couleur “What do you mean you can’t find Rin?” I quickly put some pants on in the bathroom before emerging to console the worried Emi. “Didn’t she go home to her parents’ or go with your for break.” “No… I thought she was going home but her parents told me she stayed ...

["Snap your fingers."] I ask, and she complies, before wincing due to the immense cracking sound. [Why did you never tell me it was that loud?] ["I thought you knew."] I chuckle. Fried gold! :lol: This interaction is fantastic and the whole Hisao/Shizune portion of is the sweetest, most heartwarmin...

HoneyBakedHam wrote:Lieutenant Dan x Emi confirmed

You're going to Hell and I'm going right along with you because I thought the exact same thing.

swampie2 wrote:Perhaps Rin is with Hisao?

As much as I'm loathe to say it, Hisao would probably be the better alternative to what I've written...

The colour is a little muted and the girls wear the blazers instead of blouses but I think there's a definite similarity.

Worry Tree, I bet. That or the dandelion field. http://i199.photobucket.com/albums/aa129/Sharp-O/ozpzwc1x_zpsaq5hixbl.jpg "This isn't the Art Club room..." I don't get it. I know the picture is from Haganai (I love Sena), just not what you're referring to. Rin got lost, not only winding up in a dif...