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Heh, clever. You doing marketing on the sly now, Swamp?

swampie2 wrote:

Sharp-O wrote:...but there's other events that should play out...

Oh no...

We've had the party, but we haven't had the birthday itself... Not to mention the scar scene...

I totally hold my hands up to it being a semi-quick resolution. I get halfway through writing something like this and I just don't want to write anymore. I like the idea of doing it, I'm just no good at it.

Glad you enjoyed it at the very least!

There is one thing that worries me. This universe seems to roughly follow the VN, like Rin going comatose via art, so will Hanako have her classroom panic attack? pls no. Well, something like that might be skipped because I can't see her freaking out like that in this timeline but there's other eve...

I don't think they actually kissed, just traded lipstick for the sake of making the guys think they kissed. That's what I figured too. Purple lipstick seemed like the obvious choice to me, but I don't wear lipstick as a guy so perhaps that was silly? I'll never know :lol: Purple is Hana's colour bu...

Glad you enjoyed it, Anton!

Believe me, I'm tempted to write up another right now, just to get the taste of the latest Monomyth chapter out of my mouth. Maybe something with Molly too.

Author's Notes: I'll be honest, I'm not completely happy with this chapter, mostly because I've found that I'm shit at writing drama, or interpersonal drama anyway. It's not my best work and probably my least favourite chapter but it means I can change shit up and get back to the light-hearted shen...

I agree. I's on its own is definitely wrong but "Lilly and mine's last hurrah" sounds wrong too. Grammatically correct or not, I feel my original wording is fine but if it bothers you that much, I'll change it to "our". Sound good?

I would have thought it were a bit over the top if you didn't include the bit about stealing the tea room ones, that made it reasonable. I think Akio custom ordering two pieces would have made it seem like you just wanted to use the idea, but it works. At first I thought the half black / half white...

First up, THANK GOD Hisao and Shizune are going to go save Misha. I don't think I could take seeing that poor girl hurt more. On the continued adventures of Hanakio. I think you did a pretty good job with their characterisation! Personally Shizune and Hanako fake-kissing was a little much but not mo...

I can’t believe he managed to get Lilly to play a game of pool with me. He just kept pushing, in that way that he does, until she relented and did it. It was hilarious. And sweet. [/size] Oh god this sounds great. Just like the party, I gave some thought to what Akio would do in Hisao's place at th...

Sorry if this one runs long, I just ended up writing cuter and cuter scenes and couldn't stop myself… Goodbye, Helloooo~ ~~~~ Hanako ~~~~ Today’s the day. The day I say goodbye to my best friend. I’m… “Ready?” Akio asks, holding out his hand to me. Dear, sweet Akio. He’s been amazing during all thi...

I don't expect people to go back and look, it's just for my own little system and for new readers.

I hope the next few chapters do not disappoint.

I actually agree with the direction you took this. Without somebody like Hisao, who genuinely cared for her (I think) visiting almost every day, Rin would have been in a very, very bad state in the atelier. The chapters here captured that really well - also, Nomiya is indeed an arsehole. Fuck Nomiy...

I'm curious which scene you mean? What was your take on it going to be? Many thanks, I'll try not to disappoint. :cry: The Molly/Emi scene breakfast scene. I had one in mind but it was going to be much friendlier than how yours turned out :lol: Much in the same vein as the Taro/Miki friendship, two...