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Ummm, 'cut little denim jacket' I think was meant to be 'cute'. Maybe a couple instances of 'freind' and some other general grammatical errors. I'm sure you'll catch them

Don't have to tell me pal. I want to get this latest one-shot done but I'm flagging. Migraine doesn't help matters...

Eh, I don't think Emi is too bitchy in this. A little more aggro perhaps but not bitchy. I'd recommend another run through to deal with the SPaG errors when you have time. Otherwise, another great chapter

Holy cow! I'd never considered this scenario before but it's fantastic! Apart from SPaG errors, it's an amazing story. I loved it!

...Remember when you tried that with Misha? Tarisha? Mishao? Doesn't really work as well. :lol: Yeah... Miki doesn't grasp the concept of good shipping names. :lol: (Other potential ships included Taruno, Natsuro and Tarolly) At first I thought Akio was talking, and I thought about Akisha / Mishaki...

Winter’s Lover II I have one last shiver up my spine and gently fall backwards onto Taro’s bare, heaving chest. He curls his good arm around my stomach and holds me. It’s weirdly nice. I’m not one for cuddling but this feels … “… Amazing .” Taro’s hot breath tickles my ear and I smile. “You liked t...

Call me Akane. How very unprofessional... Less so than the Nurse banging Emi's mum :lol: Is she going to issue him a pass after he's finished with treatment? Hue know she will. http://i199.photobucket.com/albums/aa129/Sharp-O/vlcsnap-2013-07-27-22h57m16s2122_zpsxdv8qix1.png This chapter was allot o...

Here I was, looking forward to the almost daily chapter releases :P When you get back to it I hope it will still be as good as what it has been :) although I am sure it will be. I've really enjoyed this story in its entirety. Ritsu is my favourite character from K-On!, and to see her finally get a ...

Noticed a couple of errors this time round, like "I grimly admits. " I think you wrote this chapter for a different POV and changed it? Nope, I just fucked up :lol: Any others, I can't see any more but fresh eyes might. Ritsu has become nymphomaniac. I don't know what do think of this. :lol: Become...

Twenty-Nine: Reverse/Re:birth “I think you did well today, Taro. Very well.” Miss Tsunemori compliments me but I don’t exactly feel like I’ve accomplished anything. Today, at least. “Thank you, Miss Tsunemori. I really do appreciate you doing this during the summer.” I smile politely out of habit b...

Hm, I gotta admit, I kinda saw that one coming. An interesting concept, methinks. Also, have a cookie for being the only guy besides Brythrain to do anything with that random guy! :wink: Personally, I think it works as a stand-alone, though - not really sure where you'd go with it, to be honest. An...

"Without a body", essentially. Made it up on the spot for Shin's... unique condition. Ahh, I see, looking forward to how this pans out. It might be an interesting concept to continue but I don't know how much staying it has or what else I could do with it. Thought it was a neat dea for a character ...

Corporeal Absentia... Cannot find a thing about it. I suppose i'm just as in suspense as Hisao is. "Without a body", essentially. Made it up on the spot for Shin's... unique condition. Does this take place in the same universe as Monomyth? Either way, it was a nice little piece. Written very differ...

Nice little story, Munch! Drunk Hana is one of the best Hanas.

Author's Note: I don't know if there's an actual name for the guy who replaced Lelouch Lamperouge but I figured I'd give him one that's fitting. Enjoy! Foregone Conclusion I guess I should introduce myself to the new guy. Not like I have anyone else to talk to. The classroom is all but empty except...