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I, too, vote for some way to more clearly identify the pov character for each chapter. The way it's now you have to eliminate every possibility as they are mentioned until only one is left over... I'll go through every chapter tonight and sort that out :) Hanako The WorstWolf I'm glad people seem t...

Chapter 09: Blossom ----- Shiina ----- Kenji’s jaw drops and I have to nudge him in the ribs to get him to stop staring. Molly takes a closer look and Hanako does a little twirl, her skirt flaring at it’s hem. “ Eyes back in your head, Kenny …” I tease in a whisper and he gulps hard. “S-sorry…” He ...

Ah, I should have asked if you wanted to keep the original hair and eye colours

A good introduction to Taiki and I look forward to more of this story. The characters are a blast and you're doing good work with them! (Good luck with your uni prep work, sir)

This... this is the kind of irreverent off-the-wall alternate universe action slice-of-life fic that I can really sink my teeth into. I like how you've not shied away from really tossing everyone's personalities up in the air. Eagerly I await the next installment, even if this incredibly adorable H...

As a RWBY fan, my first thought was Hanako was now a Faunus rather than a werewolf when you posted the other pic of her. Though I think her cuteness jumped more like 50%. And yeah, her uniform is pretty awesome. I'm halfway tempted to just write a RWBY cross-over chapter in this series, you have no...

I love the idea that Hanako could be a double-agent. Out of everyone in the Nexus, Hanako is the most suspicious

Well, even if we got zero plot progression this one was quite good! I enjoyed the part with Kenji and Molly, mostly because I appreciated that you gave more weight to their past. As for Hanako in her new outfit, it's not the Yamaku uniform but it surely is goddamn cute and I'll give you props for t...

That was a very refreshing read. I'm liking the new Hanako, I just hope her character will stay the same puppy-dog Hanako that you started with. CUUUUUUTTTEE HANAKOOOOOO OH MY GOOOOOOOD I dunno... I think I can make her 20% cuter... http://i199.photobucket.com/albums/aa129/Sharp-O/werenako_final2_z...

Chapter 08: Battle Scars ----- Kenji ----- God, my head is killing me… Yuuko did a great job of patching up the bump on my head but the painkillers must have worn off while I slept. Looks like Shiina heeded Lilly’s warning to let me get some bed rest alone since she’s not trying to hog the covers l...

That's sadistic genius and I love it. Gonna have to listen to that on a loop now.

And holy shit, the UK has its own Yamaku http://www.bbc.co.uk/news/blogs-ouch-33734515 On the one hand, that's pretty damn awesome, on the other I think the name "National Star" is a bit condescending, like they're children receiving a primary school award. Maybe that's just me though... It also so...

Hey Rogue, welcome to the boards mate! I agree with Mirage, I think the first chapter would have been a little nicer if it was a conversation with Hoshiyo but for your first chapter, it wasn't too bad. Hope you post those character designs eventually. For OCs especially, it's nice to have an idea of...

Well I would like my continuity to be good so if anything crops up, please don't hesitate to call me out on it

P.S.: where are the scars? Werwolf regen abilities or? Obviously, this Hanako was never in a house fire but she does have scars (if you look carefully at the sprite) , along the right side of her chest and left abdomen, caused by the werewolf that killed her family and passed the curse to her. Ther...

Well you did an astounding job.