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by Sharp-O
Tue Oct 06, 2015 11:41 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Miraimyth: The Miniseries - [Concluded!]
Replies: 78
Views: 22118

Re: Miraimyth: The Miniseries - 6/10/15

Glad everyone enjoyed the first chapter, I hope you'll enjoy what's to come! :D Just to clarify: Mono isn't looking for Hana's articles in particular, she just happened to be the originator of Mono's current urban legend research. The fact that she pulled out a newspaper from November 2008 is pretty...
by Sharp-O
Tue Oct 06, 2015 3:24 am
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Favourite artworks - reprise.
Replies: 4044
Views: 968180

Re: Favourite artworks - reprise.

"H-hey, is Akio in here?"

*sees the pictures*

"N-n-nevermind."
by Sharp-O
Tue Oct 06, 2015 3:04 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Blank Slate - (Updated 12-26) A Christmas Council
Replies: 131
Views: 44454

Re: The Blank Slate - (Updated 10-5) Net Gain

What a fantastic piece! The choice of Hanako as her chess opponent was a master stroke. Great job, Blank :)
by Sharp-O
Tue Oct 06, 2015 2:54 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Swampie's Stories : Writings of a mad-man 3
Replies: 179
Views: 65707

Re: Swampie's Stories: Kenjika : 6/10/15

I was half-expecting the mysterious girl to be his female counterpart given the title. :lol:

Not a bad set-up for a possible romance arc for those two.
by Sharp-O
Mon Oct 05, 2015 8:51 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Miraimyth: The Miniseries - [Concluded!]
Replies: 78
Views: 22118

Miraimyth: The Miniseries - 6/10/15

Chapter 01: Rolling Start ~Hikari~ My arms burn as I fold them above my head, free-wheeling to a gradual stop as I cool down. I close my eyes and focus on breathing in through my nose and out through my mouth as I feel my chair stop. The trees rustle in the distance and I allow myself a brief momen...
by Sharp-O
Mon Oct 05, 2015 8:40 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Miraimyth: The Miniseries - [Concluded!]
Replies: 78
Views: 22118

Miraimyth: The Miniseries - [Concluded!]

That's right! The sequel to Monomyth is here! This will be more of a mini-series but I hope you'll all enjoy it as much as the original! Cast: http://i199.photobucket.com/albums/aa129/Sharp-O/miraimyth%20copy_zpsyjjjysxj.jpg Akira Nomura - Acid burns to lower jaw, neck, shoulders and chest. Victim o...
by Sharp-O
Sat Oct 03, 2015 9:03 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Swampie's Stories : Writings of a mad-man 3
Replies: 179
Views: 65707

Re: Swampie's Stories: Shizune in the snow : Finale : 3/10/1

For something like time, dates or fractions, it's better to right them naturally than as words but that's me. I think it was better that you didn't focus on the bar scene, it's just a nice little extra. Gravy on the meat, if you will. It's a nice alternate take to what I did and I'm happy that this ...
by Sharp-O
Sat Oct 03, 2015 8:33 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Swampie's Stories : Writings of a mad-man 3
Replies: 179
Views: 65707

Re: Swampie's Stories: Shizune in the snow : Finale : 3/10/1

Apart from the instance of 'colleges' when I think you meant colleagues and the 'one thirty second of the cost' confusing me a little (did you mean thirtieth or thirty-second?), no real SPaG errors jumped out at me. Good work! Now then... The story itself... If I haven't said it before, I'll say it ...
by Sharp-O
Fri Oct 02, 2015 8:21 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Sharp-O's One-Shots! "Lost & Found" 16/5/16
Replies: 339
Views: 117722

Re: Sharp-O's One-Shots! "Flicker" - 3/10/15

“Thanks, Shinnosuke." :wink: HA! Kind of a happy accident with the new alternate full name since I originally named Shin 'Shin' in Foregone Conclusion because of what I imagined him to be and what I would have revealed in Fixers at some point. Nice little story, even if I don't like the grim realis...
by Sharp-O
Fri Oct 02, 2015 8:05 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Sharp-O's One-Shots! "Lost & Found" 16/5/16
Replies: 339
Views: 117722

Sharp-O's One-Shots! "Flicker" - 3/10/15

Flicker “Nice night for it.” My words swirl into the cool night air, a spectral mixture of smoke and vapour as the tell-tale crunch of autumn leaves underfoot signals the arrival of a friend. “A bit too chilly for my liking.” She mutters, holding her arms tight. Her winter jacket looks plenty warm ...
by Sharp-O
Thu Oct 01, 2015 6:57 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Random KS Discussion
Replies: 3060
Views: 642369

Re: Random KS Discussion

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"I believe my grandfather would call that woman a 'feckin eejit'. I'm inclined to agree."
by Sharp-O
Thu Oct 01, 2015 6:47 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Fixers - "School Daze" 28-9-15
Replies: 232
Views: 59991

Re: The Fixers - "School Daze" 28-9-15

Hurrrrgh, I'm really struggling to write the upcoming chapters. I know the broad strokes but getting from point to point is proving difficult. Nothing seems right . I think I've been far too ambitious with this particular story and between my new work responsibilities and my website review work pick...
by Sharp-O
Thu Oct 01, 2015 6:03 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (Double Update 3/14)
Replies: 1140
Views: 572107

Re: Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (New Art 10/01)

Oh, it'll show up there, the other LTF images have.

Truly an astounding piece of art. The artist is a credit to their craft.
by Sharp-O
Thu Oct 01, 2015 3:07 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: TheDwarfLard's One-Shots (Updated 28/1/2017)
Replies: 49
Views: 27008

Re: TheDwarfLard's One-Shots (Updated 30/9/2015)

Blank Mage wrote: I do have to wonder how well Hanako handles pregnancy, as it's been pointed out that her skin doesn't have as much elasticity as most.
Ouch, yeah... I'll have to bear that in mind.
by Sharp-O
Wed Sep 30, 2015 6:42 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: TheDwarfLard's One-Shots (Updated 28/1/2017)
Replies: 49
Views: 27008

Re: TheDwarfLard's One-Shots (Updated 30/9/2015)

The picnic is a nice little fluff piece! Good work.