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Finale: SNAP The discontented murmurs and whispers are summarily silenced as a tall blonde woman and a shorter, navy-haired woman stand side-by-side before the congregation. “Ladies and gentlemen,” Lilly begins with an inherent air of authority that only her and her cousin — Shizune signing beside ...

Alpacalypse wrote:To quote Griff, of Red Vs Blue fame: "Dammit. Dammit! GOD FUCKING DAMMIT! WE WERE SO CLOSE!"
You really are sadistic, sometimes

Why do we fall, Master 'Paca?

Mirage_GSM wrote:Was that supposed to be sarcastic?

Why Mirage, whatever do you mean?

This is a rollercoaster of emotions and I'm not sure if I want to get off Sharp's wild ride. :lol: http://38.media.tumblr.com/231a407807e74bae300421e18c542753/tumblr_mzcolwpcvM1r8z1gdo2_r1_250.gif I'd noticed that you'd written Hanako's stutters into this story where they were missing in the true f...

I don't know what it is, but there's something about Akio calling Taro a murderer that unnerves me and I don't know why...

Still reading here, sir

Author's note: Yup, that last chapter was pretty heavy but fear not! It's smooth sailing from here on out and look! It's that wedding I promised! ~~~~~~ Act 9: “Okay! Okay!” Akio growls as he limps toward the incessant banging on the metal front door. “It’s 7am! What. The hell…” He opens the door wi...

Hmmm. Switching focus to Ritsu's past (I assume) certainly is something, not much to say on that so far but with Taro out of the picture and Hisao joining the gang for group work, methinks the focus on Ritsu is more intentional than just character development... *strokes chin ponderously* Saying I'l...

Um, Misha, are you ok? Did you accidentally swallow half a ton of ecstasy somewhere along the line? Seriously, I don't recall her ever being quite that chipper... That'd be all the Prozac and Monster :lol: If Hisao's feeling fatigued, imagine how the legendarily lazy Misha would handle the work loa...

Act 8: “Oh my goooooooood !” Molly growls angrily as she falls off her plush perch onto the floor. Peering into the darkness of the unfamiliar room, she claws at her jeans to stop the incessant chirping. Pulling her phone free to see who will earn her ire for daring to call at 6am, she sighs. She s...

Glad to see you back, Pun The story hasn't lost any of it's charm since the hiatus and I can't wait to see more.

Your cheque cleared, that's all that matters.

But obviously, I'm interested to see what you do with this. You seem to be approaching some of the stuff that I didn't really expand upon.

Drunken shenanigans! Now comes hungover shenanigans!

I fixed up the time issue and the the whole Miki/Lilly confusion. I'm glad people got a giggle out of this chapter!

Act 7: Taro puts one unsteady foot after another onto the asphalt and pulls himself away from the van, Akio and Hisao at the passenger door talking to Kenji. “Yer not stayin’ for the after-partay?” Akio asks in the kind of cringe-worthy way people do in comedy movies, only for Hisao to follow it up...

Emi-chan wrote:Rin is a Psycho Pass fan (because of the philosophy).

She probably also has a soft spot for the main theme too.

Thanks, guys Glad to know I can still keep people invested without boring them

It's rare to find one of those in your stories : It dredged up all the pent up emotions that both her and Suzu shared. "both she and Suzu" I'm surprised there haven't been more given switch to narration! I'll sort it. Cheers, Mirage :) That's your storytelling as we all know and love it :-) Ramblin...