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by Hesmiyu
Sat Jul 02, 2016 5:37 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Flutter - Level Twenty One: Footsies [25/3/17]
Replies: 258
Views: 53827

Re: Flutter - Level Seventeen: Tag-Out [2/7/16]

I'm not gonna lie, when I first started reading this and it said they were going to meet, I had visions of both Rika and Hisao having their heart flutters, Hisao because of Iwanako, and Rika's because of Hisao's. Yes that's probably cliches. What you wrote is good and can't wait for next chapter. Ke...
by Hesmiyu
Sun Jun 26, 2016 2:45 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Flutter - Level Twenty One: Footsies [25/3/17]
Replies: 258
Views: 53827

Re: Flutter - Level Sixteen: Rushdown [25/6/16]

“You’re going to be the death of me, Hisao Nakai.” Flag number 1. :wink: Glad to see I wasn't the only one who thought that. And knowing Sharp, he's gonna ruin all of us by having Hisao actually lead to Rika's death. A mean, sadistic boy he is, that one. A Rika death? :O instead of a Hisao T-shirt ...
by Hesmiyu
Sat Jun 25, 2016 4:02 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Flutter - Level Twenty One: Footsies [25/3/17]
Replies: 258
Views: 53827

Re: Flutter - Level Sixteen: Rushdown [25/6/16]

Excellent chapter as always Sharp-O. I like that some hanky was pankied :P. Keep up the good work with future chapters :D
by Hesmiyu
Thu Jun 09, 2016 1:23 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Flutter - Level Twenty One: Footsies [25/3/17]
Replies: 258
Views: 53827

Re: Flutter - Level Fourteen: New Challenger [8/6/16]

I don't think I quite get those "inside jokes" either... One accidental past tense: ...to where the excitable Mai stood cockily. And how many guesses do we get as to Iwanako's boyfriend? :-D Interesting. I think this is the first tim e I see a story where Iwanako has moved on so quickly. I'm sure I...
by Hesmiyu
Mon May 30, 2016 8:37 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Swim Story [OC] - Chapter 11: Wake Up (24/07/2018)
Replies: 48
Views: 12967

Swim Story [OC] - Chapter 6: Conditions (Part 2)

== Ryuunosuke's P.O.V == Several days pass by with me going swimming with Akemi in the morning followed by my daily classes. I wake up and notice there’s no alarm sound. I take a look at my digital alarm clock next to me and see it says “08:23”. Seven minutes? Well, crap. I quickly get up and out of...
by Hesmiyu
Sat May 28, 2016 3:40 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Flutter - Level Twenty One: Footsies [25/3/17]
Replies: 258
Views: 53827

Re: Flutter - Level Thirteen: Encounter Rate [28/5/16]

TubaMirum wrote:Indeed, very much Slice of Life but...

Rika and Hisao used Kiss!

A critical hit!

It's super effective!

FATALITY :D
With their conditions, it actually could be :P
by Hesmiyu
Tue May 24, 2016 3:49 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Swim Story [OC] - Chapter 11: Wake Up (24/07/2018)
Replies: 48
Views: 12967

Swim Story [OC] - Chapter 6: Conditions (Part 1)

Three chapters within a month, an absolute record :). Not even a failing hard drive that's caused a blue screen and numerous freezes has deterred me. A 7 year old hard drive has done well regarding what it's been through. Enough of my rambling. Here's chapter 6 :D Current Chapter Word Count: 4,887 C...
by Hesmiyu
Mon May 16, 2016 12:46 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Sharp-O's One-Shots! "Lost & Found" 16/5/16
Replies: 339
Views: 56916

Re: Sharp-O's One-Shots! "Lost & Found" 16/5/16

Congratulations on finding an acronym that worked with the bane and made sense, I may have laughed a bit when I read the name :P. Quiteliked this one shot.
by Hesmiyu
Fri May 13, 2016 2:26 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (Updated 1/12)
Replies: 1056
Views: 287783

Re: Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (Updated 5/11)

TubaMirum wrote:
brythain wrote:Well... those aren't displays of public affection, y'know? :D
What, you mean don't like being seen when they're doing the nasty? Has my entire life been a lie?
Well, now we know what TubaMirum does in their spare time.

Enjoyable chapter as always EBJ, look forward to the next ones :)
by Hesmiyu
Tue May 03, 2016 1:44 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Regrets - A Post-Bad End Musing (Updated 1/25/17)
Replies: 28
Views: 6804

Re: Regrets - A Post-Bad End Musing (Updated 5/3/16)

Spot the crossover?

My guess is Kaori from Shigatsu wa kimi no uso, am I right? :)


I quite liked this chapter, did have to rack my brains what other two were but that's my fault :P.

Have fun with the future chapters :).
by Hesmiyu
Sun May 01, 2016 4:00 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Swim Story [OC] - Chapter 11: Wake Up (24/07/2018)
Replies: 48
Views: 12967

Swim Story [OC] - Chapter 5 - Impromptu Meeting

Current Chapter Word Count: 4,216 Chapter 1-5 Count: 21,933 --------- Act 1, Chapter 5: Impromptu Meeting [/size] *Akemi’s P.O.V* As I exit Yasuko's room, the image of her reddened face looking down stays in my head. I wheel myself to my room and push my door so it will close but before it does so, ...
by Hesmiyu
Thu Mar 31, 2016 1:45 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Sharp-O's One-Shots! "Lost & Found" 16/5/16
Replies: 339
Views: 56916

Re: Sharp-O's One-Shots! "Snowblind Part IV" 31/3/16

I'm assuming I'm not the only one who's liking Noriko. I like this 'one-shot' seems to have grown into another Sharp-O story. Also can't wait to see which stories Miki'll tell :)
by Hesmiyu
Tue Mar 29, 2016 6:14 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Flutter - Level Twenty One: Footsies [25/3/17]
Replies: 258
Views: 53827

Re: Flutter - Level Eight: Heart Piece [29/3/16]

stahp! I may die from too much adorableness. This Rika is quickly becoming my favourite Sharp-O character, of not already. Looking forward to the challenges you'll no doubtlessly add :).

p.s. Don't actually stop :)
by Hesmiyu
Mon Mar 14, 2016 7:36 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Flutter - Level Twenty One: Footsies [25/3/17]
Replies: 258
Views: 53827

Re: Flutter - Level Five: Gaining Meter [13/3/16]

Yeah, I have to admit that I'm having this trouble as well. I'm sure it's easier for people who are more familiar with these characters. However, I'm pretty new to the whole KS fanfic universe, so the "expanded universe" of characters often used in fanfiction is often hard for me to keep track of. ...
by Hesmiyu
Wed Mar 09, 2016 8:36 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (Updated 1/12)
Replies: 1056
Views: 287783

Re: Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (New Art 3/8)

Nice art there, kinda reminds me of Yui and Ui from K-On