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by Hesmiyu
Sat Jan 21, 2017 8:03 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Regrets - A Post-Bad End Musing (Updated 1/25/17)
Replies: 28
Views: 6872

Re: Regrets - A Post-Bad End Musing (Updated 1/21/17)

Oooo, another fic revived. I had forgotten I was even subscribed to this :P. Guess I'll reread it after finished others on list :)
by Hesmiyu
Thu Jan 19, 2017 1:05 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (Updated 1/12)
Replies: 1056
Views: 290231

Re: Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (Updated 1/19)

"big bang" is that Hisao's heart, the consummation or his heart during consummation? :P
by Hesmiyu
Thu Jan 19, 2017 5:42 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (Updated 1/12)
Replies: 1056
Views: 290231

Re: Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (Updated 1/19)

Things are certainly spicing up and I like it! I have actually read up on cystic fibrosis, albeit 8 years ago for my school course and it is a nasty condition where you feel like you're drowning even out of water (weirdly fitting that our two main characters swim). Can't wait till the next 7.5k word...
by Hesmiyu
Thu Jan 05, 2017 12:32 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Swim Story [OC] - Chapter 11: Wake Up (24/07/2018)
Replies: 48
Views: 13091

Re: Swim Story [OC] - Chapter 9: Epilepsy (20/11/2016)

Which of your stories are you on about? I have read probably 90% of the fics here (too much free time Freaks and Freinds. As of my posting this, the story is only a few topics below this one. Oh yes, I'm enjoying that story :) A good note; The dead hard drive has semi-come back to life so I can now...
by Hesmiyu
Fri Dec 30, 2016 9:15 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (Updated 1/12)
Replies: 1056
Views: 290231

Re: Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (Updated 10/31)

Regarding BlackMamba's comment about Hisao and a rock and a driving force(forgot what they fully wire despite just reading it), I suddenly had a thought what his science driving force could be; We are seeing Saki's condition hindering her and we know it will only get worse for her. This could be tha...
by Hesmiyu
Fri Dec 16, 2016 8:05 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Swim Story [OC] - Chapter 11: Wake Up (24/07/2018)
Replies: 48
Views: 13091

Re: Swim Story [OC] - Chapter 9: Epilepsy (20/11/2016)

Thank you for your comment Oddball. Which of your stories are you on about? I have read probably 90% of the fics here (too much free time :P) The reason for the Hisao like introduction to Yamaku is because this is my first fic and that was based on Hisao's introduction. The start of the story was se...
by Hesmiyu
Sun Nov 20, 2016 1:17 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Swim Story [OC] - Chapter 11: Wake Up (24/07/2018)
Replies: 48
Views: 13091

Re: Swim Story [OC] - Chapter 9: Epilepsy (Part 2)

Arriving outside the head nurse’s door, I knock and wait. I quickly hear a muffled reply telling me to wait a moment. I look round and immediately spy a seat close to the door. As I sit, my ribs scream at me. After what feels like a long time, I hear the door open. I stand up and immediately regret ...
by Hesmiyu
Sun Nov 20, 2016 1:13 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Swim Story [OC] - Chapter 11: Wake Up (24/07/2018)
Replies: 48
Views: 13091

Re: Swim Story [OC] - Chapter 9: Epilepsy (Part 1)

Sorry it has been so long between these two chapters. I've been busy with 3 part time jobs as well as slowly getting my YouTube and Twitch stuff started back up. I am also working on my house at the same time. Current Chapter Word Count: 5,767 Chapter 1-9 Word Count: 45,759 ---- Chapter 9: Epilepsy ...
by Hesmiyu
Tue Nov 01, 2016 5:43 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Dancing: A Miki pseudo-route (Update 7/30/17)
Replies: 227
Views: 69773

Re: Dancing: A Miki pseudo-route (New art 11/1)

It took her around 3 or 4 days, I suppose. And she's never ever heard of the game. Having her draw this for me was a good opportunity to introduce her. It takes about that long for me to do my drawings (the style that's in my display picture). I assume she enjoyed the game and will she do more or i...
by Hesmiyu
Tue Nov 01, 2016 12:21 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Dancing: A Miki pseudo-route (Update 7/30/17)
Replies: 227
Views: 69773

Re: Dancing: A Miki pseudo-route (New art 11/1)

Sugoi!

That must have taken a while to do by the looks of it. Also, are they a fan of the game?
by Hesmiyu
Wed Sep 14, 2016 8:31 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Tomorrow's Doom ~ Up: 04/30/16 ~ recommitted to completion.
Replies: 850
Views: 210102

Re: Tomorrow's Doom - Aiko Kurai (OC)

Nice start. Only a few typos, but you misspelled Mutou twice. A few other things: Hisao wouldn't wear sweaterwests to classes. Yamaku has uniforms for that. So Emi wouldn't have seen him in one at that point either. Heterochromia is okay, but does she really need another disability in addition to h...
by Hesmiyu
Mon Sep 12, 2016 9:39 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Gravity: A Molly Pseudo- Pseudo Route. Updated as of 11/03/2019
Replies: 113
Views: 30244

Re: Gravity-Molly pseudo route [09/07/16]

brythain wrote:Apologies. Editor sleeping at the wheel.
So you were driving the car Molly was in then?
by Hesmiyu
Sat Aug 27, 2016 12:28 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Swim Story [OC] - Chapter 11: Wake Up (24/07/2018)
Replies: 48
Views: 13091

Re: Swim Story [OC] - Chapter 8: Talk (Part 2)

As we are swimming the last lap before our break, my mind starts to think back, and it is only just now I realise Akemi’s stutter while, encouraging me, had seemingly disappeared, only rarely rearing its head. Several times during the swim, she swam close to me and even bumped into me purposefully. ...
by Hesmiyu
Sat Aug 27, 2016 12:22 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Swim Story [OC] - Chapter 11: Wake Up (24/07/2018)
Replies: 48
Views: 13091

Re: Swim Story [OC] - Chapter 8: Talk (Part 1)

While I was waiting for this chapter to be proofread and edited by Mirage, my computer's hard drive to finally completely fail (to the point where Windows wouldn't boot up) Thankfully I had backed up the hard drive a week before so only lost a few hundred words of notes instead of several thousands ...
by Hesmiyu
Fri Aug 26, 2016 10:30 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (Updated 1/12)
Replies: 1056
Views: 290231

Re: Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (Updated 8/9)

Big thanks! It's kindof daunting for me because I know where I want to go with this act, but right now there's more than one way to get there. I'm having a hard time choosing which way to go with it. I have to say this is something Mirage warned me about a long time ago, but its a fun challenge to ...