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by Hesmiyu
Sun Aug 02, 2015 4:28 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Monomyth: Taro Arai's Story [Complete]
Replies: 555
Views: 80839

Re: Monomyth: Taro Arai's Story [Update: 1/8/15]

Eh, probably some equality stuff :P
by Hesmiyu
Sat Aug 01, 2015 6:15 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Monomyth: Taro Arai's Story [Complete]
Replies: 555
Views: 80839

Re: Monomyth: Taro Arai's Story [Update: 1/8/15]

Hasn't got the hips to pull off that skirt though. :lol: Turns out to be Kenji who sold him it :P, and Taro says its for recon :P The last time I even suggested Kenji would make an appearance, HoneyBakedHam threatened violence :P If that's the case, then he'd hate a planned for of my planned story :P
by Hesmiyu
Sat Aug 01, 2015 5:04 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Fanfiction: KS: Rumbling Hearts (Post Hanako Bad Ending)
Replies: 33
Views: 7927

Re: Fanfiction: KS: Rumbling Hearts (Post Hanako Bad Ending)

HoneyBakedHam wrote:You're cold, unlike that ending.
Heyy, Hanako may now be even on the face once she's recovered, I'm sorry :P. Hanako's my 2nd favourite route in the game :).
by Hesmiyu
Sat Aug 01, 2015 5:02 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Monomyth: Taro Arai's Story [Complete]
Replies: 555
Views: 80839

Re: Monomyth: Taro Arai's Story [Update: 1/8/15]

I'll be honest, I didn't plan it that way! :lol: It was initially going to focus on the main trio (mainly Taro) but as the story went on and I wrote some of the one-shots, the group evolved over time, incorporating more characters until we have the cast now. In Reverie , Miki lamented that no one t...
by Hesmiyu
Sat Aug 01, 2015 3:49 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Monomyth: Taro Arai's Story [Complete]
Replies: 555
Views: 80839

Re: Monomyth: Taro Arai's Story [Update: 1/8/15]

My suggestion would be: Pick some crisis and then have it resolve over the rest of the story. Maybe break up Ritsu and Taro. Maybe write some stuff from Ritsu's perspective. Work towards some sort of narrative goal. Your writing is pretty nice, so just pick a destination and go for it! Perhaps that...
by Hesmiyu
Sat Aug 01, 2015 3:41 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Monomyth: Taro Arai's Story [Complete]
Replies: 555
Views: 80839

Re: Monomyth: Taro Arai's Story [Update: 1/8/15]

Thanks, Swamp. Suzu is probably going to be the crux of this arc but everyone is going to get more of a spotlight. Like I said, Monomyth has become an ensemble cast so I'll be giving everyone their share of "screen time". 8) You make it sound like it wasn't initially planned out that way :P. In eve...
by Hesmiyu
Mon Jul 20, 2015 8:19 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Monomyth: Taro Arai's Story [Complete]
Replies: 555
Views: 80839

Re: Monomyth: Taro Arai's Story [Update: 21/7/15]

Here I was, looking forward to the almost daily chapter releases :P

When you get back to it I hope it will still be as good as what it has been :) although I am sure it will be.
by Hesmiyu
Mon Jul 20, 2015 7:52 pm
Forum: Fan Art
Topic: Hesmiu's Art
Replies: 8
Views: 4879

Re: Ryuunosuke Shibanuma [OC]

Oddball wrote:My immediate thought was X-force's Shatterstar.
And yet I haven't seen any manga nor anime for around a decade. I am planning on fixing that.
by Hesmiyu
Mon Jul 20, 2015 2:36 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Miki: Fragments (Complete)
Replies: 204
Views: 50733

Re: Miki: Fragments (Ch.24 Posted 20th July 2015)

I'm no longer a lurker!

I like this chapter mainly because it made me smile :P. Good job on it. I would say more but no ides what to type.
by Hesmiyu
Wed Jul 15, 2015 10:19 am
Forum: Fan Art
Topic: Hesmiu's Art
Replies: 8
Views: 4879

Re: Ryuunosuke Shibanuma [OC]

Munchenhausen wrote:Inspired by Rurouni Kenshin, by any chance? :p
I actually have no idea who that is :P I do see the similarities though.
by Hesmiyu
Tue Jul 14, 2015 7:05 pm
Forum: Fan Art
Topic: Hesmiu's Art
Replies: 8
Views: 4879

Hesmiu's Art

Ryuunosuke Shibanuma is an original character and main protagonist in a fan fic I am planning and writing. I may have slightly messed up his left hand unfortunately. This is actually my very first art thing I have created. After working on this for days, I have only just realised it looks like he ha...
by Hesmiyu
Mon Jun 22, 2015 5:16 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Human Cyborg [OC]
Replies: 7
Views: 1737

Re: The Human Cyborg [OC]

I decided to do the hospital scene a tiny flashback scenes. Also the name Akahito Saionji works right? I did try some research but I an not good with Japanese names. Whe I came up with that name (random name generators) I had completely forgotten about Sae Saionji who is in the actually game.
by Hesmiyu
Mon Jun 22, 2015 12:07 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Human Cyborg [OC]
Replies: 7
Views: 1737

Re: The Human Cyborg [OC]

Sorry I haven't replied sooner, I kinda lost internet for few days. I will try by best to incorporate the tips that have been suggested. I have changed names to ones I think are the right way round (I'm far from familiar with Japanese names. I have removed the names that was The Human cyborg (It was...
by Hesmiyu
Wed Jun 17, 2015 7:23 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Human Cyborg [OC]
Replies: 7
Views: 1737

The Human Cyborg [OC]

I have started working on a fan fic. This is my very first one so I have no idea how good or bad it is. Here is the first chapter, I do have more written but I want to see what needs improving first. Okakura Padilla was involved in a serious traffic collision while exploring his new surroundings on ...