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by Hesmiyu
Fri Jun 22, 2018 4:19 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (Updated 10/13)
Replies: 1028
Views: 270678

Re: Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (Updated 6/22)

Lovely chapter once again :).

When saki rang and she was crying I remembered about her father taking her somewhere. My first thought was quite possibly an arranged marriage candidate, until another reviewer mentioned tests. Both could/would in her being dismayed.
by Hesmiyu
Tue Jun 05, 2018 3:47 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A Roadside Picnic: Iwanako Pseudoroute
Replies: 10
Views: 1555

Re: A Roadside Picnic: Iwanako Pseudoroute

Interesting.

Is Iwanako about to give poor old Hisao another flutter? :P

I like the premise and hope to read more :). says the guy whose taken an 11 month hiatus lol
by Hesmiyu
Sat Jun 02, 2018 4:11 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Swim Story [OC] - Chapter 11: Wake Up (24/07/2018)
Replies: 48
Views: 12486

Re: Swim Story [OC] - Chapter 10: Pain (28/07/2017)

It's been over a year? Whoops lol. I have notes for all upcoming chapters. Distracted by jobs, YouTube channel and 3 other stories (non fan fiction) I've got in the works. I should really continue it :)
by Hesmiyu
Tue Sep 19, 2017 4:09 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Help me please!
Replies: 6
Views: 1354

Re: Help me please!

I know of the story you're on about, but I also can't remember the name. It could possibly be on fanfiction?
by Hesmiyu
Fri Aug 11, 2017 3:57 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: People-Watching: A Naomi Inoue Pseudo-Route
Replies: 51
Views: 11715

Re: People-Watching: A Naomi Inoue Pseudo-Route

I have an inkling that the culprit will be Naomi :P
by Hesmiyu
Fri Jul 28, 2017 12:23 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Swim Story [OC] - Chapter 11: Wake Up (24/07/2018)
Replies: 48
Views: 12486

Re: Swim Story [OC] - Chapter 10: Pain - Part 2 (28/07/2017)

Previous Post I think back to her seizure and the show we were watching. I had never noticed until now, but there seems to be a similarity between myself and Tsukushi Makino. If Akemi and I were in that show and I was Tsukushi, then would that mean Akemi would be Sakurako? Well, except for the betr...
by Hesmiyu
Fri Jul 28, 2017 12:16 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Swim Story [OC] - Chapter 11: Wake Up (24/07/2018)
Replies: 48
Views: 12486

Re: Swim Story [OC] - Chapter 10: Pain - Part 1 (28/07/2017)

Again, months between chapters. This time there are two main reasons. One; I got distracted my Steam games >.> , and two I was busy writing out future notes and rewriting what was already written: I have 40+k worth of notes for the upcoming chapters. ---- Chapter 10: Pain *** Ryuunosuke’s PoV *** As...
by Hesmiyu
Thu Jul 20, 2017 3:59 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Slippery Slope (A Post-Lilly Neutral Ending Fic)
Replies: 7
Views: 1588

Re: Slippery Slope (A Post-Lilly Neutral Ending Fic)

Well, later on I do imply that those words stung, and that she is trying to prove him wrong about her. Still trying to work out the details of this fic. And the chess games are those he played off screen in Lilly's route, It's a counter of how many times they've won or lost against each other total...
by Hesmiyu
Tue Jul 04, 2017 12:20 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: People-Watching: A Naomi Inoue Pseudo-Route
Replies: 51
Views: 11715

Re: People-Watching: A Naomi Inoue Pseudo-Route

Finally, if you're looking for a replacement proofreader, just drop me a PM. All the stories I proofread at the moment are apparently on hiatus :-) Hey now, it's not my fault someone's proofreading has caused a butterfly effect requiring a story rewrite :P QuietlySomething, which is I am enjoying t...
by Hesmiyu
Sun Jul 02, 2017 2:58 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Akira-te Kid - An Akira Satou Fan Route
Replies: 35
Views: 9037

Re: The Akira-te Kid - An Akira Satou Fan Route

Not sure if you can write cursive Kanji... You can. Cursive kanji range from illegible to completely illegible to "possibly legible to people who have a specialist's knowledge of kanji but it's not a sure deal". It's great. Well, yes, but that's not exactly the same as what we understand as "cursiv...
by Hesmiyu
Sat Jul 01, 2017 12:59 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: COM(promise) - A Miki Route (Updated Sep 29th, 2019)
Replies: 204
Views: 52086

Re: COM(promise) - A Miki Route (Updated Jun 28th, 2017)

It seems Miki's curse has a second part; topics of her get revived a long while later :).

Reading through this the only issue I had was as others have stated, and the choices part. I I actually ended up reading the bad end twice even after I thought I I did opposite choice.
by Hesmiyu
Wed Jun 28, 2017 10:54 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Teach Me To Dance - A Natsume Ooe Pseudo-Route(Updated 4/8)
Replies: 74
Views: 15537

Re: Teach Me To Dance - A Natsume Ooe Pseudo-Route(Updated 4

After having caught up with fics I was part reading, I saw this and read it, took 2 or 3 days. May have been in one of your "Baby Steps " chapters but you misspelt miscellaneous good sir. I would spell it the way you did but on mobile so is a tad harder to refind it. My heart said ouch when she say ...
by Hesmiyu
Mon Jun 26, 2017 3:23 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Visionary's Writing - Everything, Nothing, Red, and Green
Replies: 18
Views: 2652

Re: One Little Day and A Call to Yamaku

Oddball wrote:A decent enough read for what it was, I guess. I'm not big into medical drama though so I might be the wrong person to judge.

I have some interest, and watch some programs, such as House. M. D. Oh god, imagine House as a doctor at Yamaku.
by Hesmiyu
Wed Jun 21, 2017 4:46 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (Updated 10/13)
Replies: 1028
Views: 270678

Re: Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (Updated 5/18)

Somehow I missed the 2nd half of the chapter where Chisato steals Mitsuru's chips . Sure glad the forum has a read and unread feature :P Really well done chapter, again :) I wonder if or when Hisao meets her parents, how'd they react. Also I came across this while trying to find out if Saki IS in th...
by Hesmiyu
Fri Jun 16, 2017 5:43 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Flutter - Level Twenty One: Footsies [25/3/17]
Replies: 258
Views: 52521

Re: Flutter - Level Twenty One: Footsies [25/3/17]

And so another arises
A phoenix, from the ashes.

Welcome back Sharp-O. Sometimes struggle with words so I'll say just this; great chapter 😊