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- Sat Jul 18, 2015 2:31 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Swampie's Stories : Writings of a mad-man 3
- Replies: 179
- Views: 65705
Re: Swampie's Stories: Shizune in the snow: Finale? 16/7/15
A collection of suspicious events: Yesterday and never, drink every radio ever. Warning: Character Death --- BEEPBEEP BEEPBEEP BEEPBEEP. My alarm clock blares loudly, awakening me from my slumber. I wave my arm around wildly, hoping to find the damn thing. Eventually I succeed in knocking it off the...
- Sat Jul 18, 2015 12:38 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Monomyth: Taro Arai's Story [Complete]
- Replies: 555
- Views: 162510
Re: Monomyth: Taro Arai's Story [Update: 18/7/15]
I actually quite like this chapter. Mostly I find that these heavy scenes seem to go on forever, but the way you have written it here works quite well. It explains the situation and how Taro is feeling without lingering for too long. I like that, a lot actually. Nice work Sharp, even if I was shouti...
- Sat Jul 18, 2015 12:29 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Sharp-O's One-Shots! "Lost & Found" 16/5/16
- Replies: 339
- Views: 117720
Re: Sharp-O's One-Shots! "Goodbye, Helloooo~" - 18/7/15 Upda
There is one thing that worries me.
This universe seems to roughly follow the VN, like Rin going comatose via art, so will Hanako have her classroom panic attack?
pls no.
This universe seems to roughly follow the VN, like Rin going comatose via art, so will Hanako have her classroom panic attack?
pls no.
- Sat Jul 18, 2015 12:26 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Swampie's Stories : Writings of a mad-man 3
- Replies: 179
- Views: 65705
Re: Swampie's Stories: Shizune in the snow: Finale? 16/7/15
First up, THANK GOD Hisao and Shizune are going to go save Misha. I don't think I could take seeing that poor girl hurt more. I know man, it was difficult to write those scenes :cry: On the continued adventures of Hanakio. I think you did a pretty good job with their characterisation! Personally Sh...
- Sat Jul 18, 2015 1:21 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Swampie's Stories : Writings of a mad-man 3
- Replies: 179
- Views: 65705
Re: Swampie's Stories: Shizune in the snow: PT 4. 16/7/15
Shizune in the snow: Part 5 (Finale) ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ POV: Hisao ["What do you think?"] I sign after straightening out my suit, a cheap 3 piece suit I found online. It fits well e...
- Fri Jul 17, 2015 11:29 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Sharp-O's One-Shots! "Lost & Found" 16/5/16
- Replies: 339
- Views: 117720
Re: Sharp-O's One-Shots! "Goodbye, Helloooo~" - 18/7/15 Upda
The chess piece was one of the first ideas I developed and I thought it might be a bit much but I'm glad you liked it. I would have thought it were a bit over the top if you didn't include the bit about stealing the tea room ones, that made it reasonable. I think Akio custom ordering two pieces wou...
- Fri Jul 17, 2015 9:18 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Sharp-O's One-Shots! "Lost & Found" 16/5/16
- Replies: 339
- Views: 117720
Re: Sharp-O's One-Shots! "Goodbye, Helloooo~" - 18/7/15 Upda
I can’t believe he managed to get Lilly to play a game of pool with me. He just kept pushing, in that way that he does, until she relented and did it. It was hilarious. And sweet. [/size] Oh god this sounds great. I'm liking the italics thoughts and normal observations, works just like the colored ...
- Fri Jul 17, 2015 7:13 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Gravity: A Molly Pseudo- Pseudo Route. Updated as of 11/03/2019
- Replies: 115
- Views: 74882
Re: Gravity-Molly pseudo route [07/26/15] Update*
Very interesting chapter, it's strange to see Taro and Suzu acting so differently to how I imagine them, but it works really well. I enjoyed it! :D Thank you very much, not your head cannon characters then? :wink: [/size] Sharp-o's version of the characters have become my head canon since I read hi...
- Fri Jul 17, 2015 12:06 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Monomyth: Taro Arai's Story [Complete]
- Replies: 555
- Views: 162510
Re: Monomyth: Taro Arai's Story [Update: 17/7/15]
This was a very nice chapter. Rin felt like VN Rin, something that I have yet to perfect, good job on that.
- Thu Jul 16, 2015 5:58 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Swampie's Stories : Writings of a mad-man 3
- Replies: 179
- Views: 65705
Re: Swampie's Stories: Writings of a mad-man: Part 2! [8/7/1
[Because deaf people speaking sounds dumb.] Haha. Wait… Was that intentional? That's quite an impossible sentence I've gotten there. :lol: Blame it on Shizune's sarcasm. as we continue towards the best hot chocolate vendors. So... is she just allowed to keep the prototype? I thought this was suppos...
- Thu Jul 16, 2015 8:35 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: The Headlines: Ch 11 [Updated 19/7/15]
- Replies: 55
- Views: 19914
Re: The Headlines: Ch 10 [Updated 16/7/15]
That's a lie, Lilly asked for me, That must have raised some eyebrows... Hahaha, I'm sure the photography class were nice enough to not raise in issue if Lilly said it was for a freind. ...but he didn't help them out in this story... He gave them the slip right away and Shizune signed him up for th...
- Thu Jul 16, 2015 8:19 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Gravity: A Molly Pseudo- Pseudo Route. Updated as of 11/03/2019
- Replies: 115
- Views: 74882
Re: Gravity-Molly pseudo route [07/26/15] Update*
Very interesting chapter, it's strange to see Taro and Suzu acting so differently to how I imagine them, but it works really well.
I enjoyed it!
I enjoyed it!
- Thu Jul 16, 2015 7:03 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Monomyth: Taro Arai's Story [Complete]
- Replies: 555
- Views: 162510
Re: Monomyth: Taro Arai's Story [Update: 16/7/15]
Sharp-O wrote: You don't get to come over here with 'saddening chapter' after what you wrote about Misha, you monster

- Thu Jul 16, 2015 1:27 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: The Headlines: Ch 11 [Updated 19/7/15]
- Replies: 55
- Views: 19914
Re: The Headlines: Ch 9 [Updated 15/7/15]
✩ ★ The Headlines ★ ✩ Chapter 10: Natsone and the newspaper girls POV: Hanako I think this is the right room. I quickly check my notes to make sure, then check again less than a second later. I think I'm just subconsciously trying to find excuses to not walk in there and introduce myself. It's only...
- Wed Jul 15, 2015 9:57 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Monomyth: Taro Arai's Story [Complete]
- Replies: 555
- Views: 162510
Re: Monomyth: Taro Arai's Story [Update: 16/7/15]
I feel the impact of the wall through Takashi Maeda’s body as I grip his collar tight. “Tell me where Rin is!” I growl. What happened between these two? This seems a little over the top to me. “Why the fuck was no one watching her!?” I scream at the woman, who drops her cigarette. Taro got some ang...