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by swampie2
Sat Jul 18, 2015 2:31 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Swampie's Stories : Writings of a mad-man 3
Replies: 179
Views: 65705

Re: Swampie's Stories: Shizune in the snow: Finale? 16/7/15

A collection of suspicious events: Yesterday and never, drink every radio ever. Warning: Character Death --- BEEPBEEP BEEPBEEP BEEPBEEP. My alarm clock blares loudly, awakening me from my slumber. I wave my arm around wildly, hoping to find the damn thing. Eventually I succeed in knocking it off the...
by swampie2
Sat Jul 18, 2015 12:38 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Monomyth: Taro Arai's Story [Complete]
Replies: 555
Views: 162510

Re: Monomyth: Taro Arai's Story [Update: 18/7/15]

I actually quite like this chapter. Mostly I find that these heavy scenes seem to go on forever, but the way you have written it here works quite well. It explains the situation and how Taro is feeling without lingering for too long. I like that, a lot actually. Nice work Sharp, even if I was shouti...
by swampie2
Sat Jul 18, 2015 12:29 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Sharp-O's One-Shots! "Lost & Found" 16/5/16
Replies: 339
Views: 117720

Re: Sharp-O's One-Shots! "Goodbye, Helloooo~" - 18/7/15 Upda

There is one thing that worries me.

This universe seems to roughly follow the VN, like Rin going comatose via art, so will Hanako have her classroom panic attack?

pls no.
by swampie2
Sat Jul 18, 2015 12:26 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Swampie's Stories : Writings of a mad-man 3
Replies: 179
Views: 65705

Re: Swampie's Stories: Shizune in the snow: Finale? 16/7/15

First up, THANK GOD Hisao and Shizune are going to go save Misha. I don't think I could take seeing that poor girl hurt more. I know man, it was difficult to write those scenes :cry: On the continued adventures of Hanakio. I think you did a pretty good job with their characterisation! Personally Sh...
by swampie2
Sat Jul 18, 2015 1:21 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Swampie's Stories : Writings of a mad-man 3
Replies: 179
Views: 65705

Re: Swampie's Stories: Shizune in the snow: PT 4. 16/7/15

Shizune in the snow: Part 5 (Finale) ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ POV: Hisao ["What do you think?"] I sign after straightening out my suit, a cheap 3 piece suit I found online. It fits well e...
by swampie2
Fri Jul 17, 2015 11:29 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Sharp-O's One-Shots! "Lost & Found" 16/5/16
Replies: 339
Views: 117720

Re: Sharp-O's One-Shots! "Goodbye, Helloooo~" - 18/7/15 Upda

The chess piece was one of the first ideas I developed and I thought it might be a bit much but I'm glad you liked it. I would have thought it were a bit over the top if you didn't include the bit about stealing the tea room ones, that made it reasonable. I think Akio custom ordering two pieces wou...
by swampie2
Fri Jul 17, 2015 9:18 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Sharp-O's One-Shots! "Lost & Found" 16/5/16
Replies: 339
Views: 117720

Re: Sharp-O's One-Shots! "Goodbye, Helloooo~" - 18/7/15 Upda

I can’t believe he managed to get Lilly to play a game of pool with me. He just kept pushing, in that way that he does, until she relented and did it. It was hilarious. And sweet. [/size] Oh god this sounds great. I'm liking the italics thoughts and normal observations, works just like the colored ...
by swampie2
Fri Jul 17, 2015 7:13 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Gravity: A Molly Pseudo- Pseudo Route. Updated as of 11/03/2019
Replies: 115
Views: 74882

Re: Gravity-Molly pseudo route [07/26/15] Update*

Very interesting chapter, it's strange to see Taro and Suzu acting so differently to how I imagine them, but it works really well. I enjoyed it! :D Thank you very much, not your head cannon characters then? :wink: [/size] Sharp-o's version of the characters have become my head canon since I read hi...
by swampie2
Fri Jul 17, 2015 12:06 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Monomyth: Taro Arai's Story [Complete]
Replies: 555
Views: 162510

Re: Monomyth: Taro Arai's Story [Update: 17/7/15]

This was a very nice chapter. Rin felt like VN Rin, something that I have yet to perfect, good job on that.
by swampie2
Thu Jul 16, 2015 5:58 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Swampie's Stories : Writings of a mad-man 3
Replies: 179
Views: 65705

Re: Swampie's Stories: Writings of a mad-man: Part 2! [8/7/1

[Because deaf people speaking sounds dumb.] Haha. Wait… Was that intentional? That's quite an impossible sentence I've gotten there. :lol: Blame it on Shizune's sarcasm. as we continue towards the best hot chocolate vendors. So... is she just allowed to keep the prototype? I thought this was suppos...
by swampie2
Thu Jul 16, 2015 8:35 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Headlines: Ch 11 [Updated 19/7/15]
Replies: 55
Views: 19914

Re: The Headlines: Ch 10 [Updated 16/7/15]

That's a lie, Lilly asked for me, That must have raised some eyebrows... Hahaha, I'm sure the photography class were nice enough to not raise in issue if Lilly said it was for a freind. ...but he didn't help them out in this story... He gave them the slip right away and Shizune signed him up for th...
by swampie2
Thu Jul 16, 2015 8:19 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Gravity: A Molly Pseudo- Pseudo Route. Updated as of 11/03/2019
Replies: 115
Views: 74882

Re: Gravity-Molly pseudo route [07/26/15] Update*

Very interesting chapter, it's strange to see Taro and Suzu acting so differently to how I imagine them, but it works really well.

I enjoyed it! :D
by swampie2
Thu Jul 16, 2015 7:03 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Monomyth: Taro Arai's Story [Complete]
Replies: 555
Views: 162510

Re: Monomyth: Taro Arai's Story [Update: 16/7/15]

Sharp-O wrote: You don't get to come over here with 'saddening chapter' after what you wrote about Misha, you monster :lol:
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by swampie2
Thu Jul 16, 2015 1:27 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Headlines: Ch 11 [Updated 19/7/15]
Replies: 55
Views: 19914

Re: The Headlines: Ch 9 [Updated 15/7/15]

✩ ★ The Headlines ★ ✩ Chapter 10: Natsone and the newspaper girls POV: Hanako I think this is the right room. I quickly check my notes to make sure, then check again less than a second later. I think I'm just subconsciously trying to find excuses to not walk in there and introduce myself. It's only...
by swampie2
Wed Jul 15, 2015 9:57 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Monomyth: Taro Arai's Story [Complete]
Replies: 555
Views: 162510

Re: Monomyth: Taro Arai's Story [Update: 16/7/15]

I feel the impact of the wall through Takashi Maeda’s body as I grip his collar tight. “Tell me where Rin is!” I growl. What happened between these two? This seems a little over the top to me. “Why the fuck was no one watching her!?” I scream at the woman, who drops her cigarette. Taro got some ang...