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I'm not quite sure this is a thing Hanako would think

“Tit for tat, Akio. And since you’ve seen my tit…”

Wahaha, I'm loving this version of Hanako right now.

Nice little chapter, love to see Hanako come out of her shell.

Sharp-O wrote:Don't have to tell me pal. I want to get this latest one-shot done but I'm flagging. Migraine doesn't help matters...

Any huge errors that stood out to you? I know that feeling all too well, this chapter just didn't want to be written

Sharp-O wrote:Eh, I don't think Emi is too bitchy in this. I little more aggro perhaps but not bitchy. I'd recommend another run through to deal with the SPaG errors when you have time. Otherwise, another great chapter

Will do, I did publish this at 1am

Thanks bud!

Iwanako's week off: Tuesday morning: Lilly left shortly after we finished our drinks and her sister dropper her off at the airport, or so I'm told. Hisao seemed okay but Hanako was really torn up, we did our best to comfort her but I think she depends on Lilly quite a bit. At least Hisao won't be a...

I through his hoodie on Found a mistake. :mrgreen: "I threw his hoodie on." He’s my… friend Is he though Miki? :wink: “I-I-I’ll c-c-c-come b-b-b-b-back laterrrrr!” Nooooo! Scared Hanako worst Hanako. ...Remember when you tried that with Misha? Tarisha? Mishao? Doesn't really work as well. :lol: At ...

Nope, I just fucked up :lol: Any others, I can't see any more but fresh eyes might. Can't see anything else glaring right now, but it is 1am :lol: Become ? She's initiated most of the sexual happenings in the series! True, but I think this chapter made that click in my head for some reason, somethi...

Munchenhausen wrote: God only knows how I'll be able to finish this without said yuri...

That's a good quote if ever I've heard one.

Noticed a couple of errors this time round, like "I grimly admits. " I think you wrote this chapter for a different POV and changed it? Ritsu has become nymphomaniac. I don't know what do think of this. :lol: "Make you a deal: We study for three hours straight or until we finish the science assignme...

This is exactly how I imagine Miki wound confess.

Great job!

"Without a body", essentially. Made it up on the spot for Shin's... unique condition. Ahh, I see, looking forward to how this pans out. It might be an interesting concept to continue but I don't know how much staying it has or what else I could do with it. Thought it was a neat dea for a charter th...

"Without a body", essentially. Made it up on the spot for Shin's... unique condition. Ahh, I see, looking forward to how this pans out. No, this is a true stand-alone but boy do I wish I could use this in Monomyth haha. Nice to see you branching it, wouldn't want you to be stuck in one universe for...

Corporeal Absentia...

Cannot find a thing about it. I suppose i'm just as in suspense as Hisao is.

Does this take place in the same universe as Monomyth?

Either way, it was a nice little piece. Written very differently, that's good given we're seeing the world through a different characters eyes.

It was a bit strange that Hanako left the school with Akio and was at the Shanghai with Lilly... Akio walked her to the exit, Iwanako was already inside school grounds by then. :mrgreen: Is this a separate story or does it borrow from other stories? Aside from taking the general premise of Iwanako ...

Sharp-O wrote:Proto-Hanakio!

Sharp-O wrote:Another fantastic chapter, Swamp. Looking forward to seeing where this goes!

Thanks sharp! Means a lot.

"How long have you been at Yamaku?" I ask, giving the conversation one last chance to live. "A... a w-while." She stutters. I feel so sorry for her. That'll do :lol: And Leaty is headcanon, duh. Leaty is love, Leaty is life. Well at least where I live, there are two schools between elementary and h...