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by swampie2
Thu Jul 30, 2015 6:14 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Sharp-O's One-Shots! "Lost & Found" 16/5/16
Replies: 339
Views: 117721

Re: Sharp-O's One-Shots! "Life's a Beach" - 30/7/15 Update

You're bang on, what do you think now? I like it, aside from that you should put a full stop or elipsis after the teasing sentence and the "god damn." Very nice work as always :) On an unrelated topic, do you have a timeline? like of when different chapters happen and overlap? If not then you shoul...
by swampie2
Wed Jul 29, 2015 9:31 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Sharp-O's One-Shots! "Lost & Found" 16/5/16
Replies: 339
Views: 117721

Re: Sharp-O's One-Shots! "Life's a Beach" - 30/7/15 Update

For some reason I read akio's grandparents as old americans with texan accents :lol: They were very well written though, I can easily see how Akio would become as snarky as he is if he was raised by them. I was also very glad to find out that Jōdogahama beach is a real place, +2 point for research. ...
by swampie2
Tue Jul 28, 2015 10:59 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Swampie's Stories : Writings of a mad-man 3
Replies: 179
Views: 65705

Re: Swampie's Stories: Iwanako's week off PT 4: 28/7/15

I see what you did there. I liked it. Another fantastic chapter, Swamp! I recommend going through again to grab some SPaG errors, (I can help with that if you want, sir) and apart from that, I really dug this chapter :D [/size] Glad you're liking it, I was having trouble with it but I'm pretty happ...
by swampie2
Mon Jul 27, 2015 9:11 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Swampie's Stories : Writings of a mad-man 3
Replies: 179
Views: 65705

Re: Swampie's Stories: Iwanako's week off PT 3: 23/7/15

Iwanako's week off: ohmigod update Wednesday morning: "So this is 'keeping a guest' huh?" Hisao ponders as he lays eyes on the large blue building before him. "Right, they have nothing like this nearby Kajiyama." I spin around, taking in the sights and smells. "So you can show me around, riiight?~"...
by swampie2
Mon Jul 27, 2015 8:02 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Sharp-O's One-Shots! "Lost & Found" 16/5/16
Replies: 339
Views: 117721

Re: Sharp-O's One-Shots! "Elementary" - 27/7/15 Update

♪ Love Shack, baby, Love Shack~ ♪
by swampie2
Mon Jul 27, 2015 1:58 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Teaser
Replies: 8
Views: 4527

Re: Teaser

Welcome to the board! You've got a nice set of characters as far as I can tell, I don't think I've read a fic that includes a character with albinism or cluster headaches before, A+ for originality on those. If you plan on making a series out of this then I'd recommend a "character" section in the O...
by swampie2
Sun Jul 26, 2015 7:07 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Sharp-O's One-Shots! "Lost & Found" 16/5/16
Replies: 339
Views: 117721

Re: Sharp-O's One-Shots! "Reverie" - 26/7/15 Update

I can foresee some Hanako vs Suzu powerplay, this could end badly :lol:
by swampie2
Sat Jul 25, 2015 11:03 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Sharp-O's One-Shots! "Lost & Found" 16/5/16
Replies: 339
Views: 117721

Re: Sharp-O's One-Shots! "The Harmonic Heroine" - 25/7/15 Up

Ahh, Justin Timberlake, it's been a while since I've heard of him :lol: I should give drums a try next time... Hahaha! I like it. :wink: I'm actually a musician, played drums for a year in a band. It's not fun even without CT, my wrists were messed up for a while. :lol: Nice little look into how Rit...
by swampie2
Fri Jul 24, 2015 2:58 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Sharp-O's One-Shots! "Lost & Found" 16/5/16
Replies: 339
Views: 117721

Re: Sharp-O's One-Shots! "Twilight Turnabout" - 24/7/15 Upda

Sharp-O wrote:HA! Good callback! :lol: *high-fives*
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by swampie2
Fri Jul 24, 2015 2:38 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Sharp-O's One-Shots! "Lost & Found" 16/5/16
Replies: 339
Views: 117721

Re: Sharp-O's One-Shots! "Twilight Turnabout" - 24/7/15 Upda

Sharp-O wrote:panties
The fact that was italicized made me very suspicious. :shock:
Sharp-O wrote:“I think it’s a night of firsts for both of us…”
God, it's like stuttering in stereo with these two. :lol:

Adorable chapter, I really enjoyed this one!
by swampie2
Thu Jul 23, 2015 8:25 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Monomyth: Taro Arai's Story [Complete]
Replies: 555
Views: 162514

Re: Monomyth: Taro Arai's Story [Update: 21/7/15]

I will never accept any other actor for Ritsu than Cassandra Lee as Ritsu in K-on, my mind has latched onto that voice for her. :lol:

I also just found out that she did Taiga Aisaka... mind blown.

Other than that, the rest fit quite well!
by swampie2
Thu Jul 23, 2015 6:45 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Monomyth: Taro Arai's Story [Complete]
Replies: 555
Views: 162514

Re: Monomyth: Taro Arai's Story [Update: 21/7/15]

No update, but I got the idea to make a chart of the characters in Monomyth and how their voices sound in my head so here's said chart with the voice cast I imagine :D I love this idea, but each actor does so many voices that it's hard to tell what one you mean. Perhaps you could put x AS y or some...
by swampie2
Thu Jul 23, 2015 12:25 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Sharp-O's One-Shots! "Lost & Found" 16/5/16
Replies: 339
Views: 117721

Re: Sharp-O's One-Shots! "Mischief in Shadow" - 23/7/15 Upda

Right? I'm kinda heading that way but from the Monomyth/Hanakio route so if you want to do something different with the idea in the meantime, go nuts! :D I may do something like that with Headliners, I'll writing something and see if I like it. :lol: Random side not: Monomyth made me finally get ar...
by swampie2
Thu Jul 23, 2015 11:58 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Decadent Albatros' oneshots! (Kenji's event, prt. 2)
Replies: 51
Views: 16036

Re: Decadent Albatros' collection of Oneshots!

Nice little story, baking Hanako best Hanako. :D
by swampie2
Thu Jul 23, 2015 11:54 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Sharp-O's One-Shots! "Lost & Found" 16/5/16
Replies: 339
Views: 117721

Re: Sharp-O's One-Shots! "Mischief in Shadow" - 23/7/15 Upda

like with a turf war between the Literature and Newspaper Clubs :lol:
Oh god that's a great idea, why didn't I think of that? :lol: