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by Gajzla
Mon Nov 30, 2015 9:20 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Favourite artworks - reprise.
Replies: 4037
Views: 420890

Re: Favourite artworks - reprise.

Not that I have a vested interest in her or anything :wink:, but i’m really enjoying all the Miki art. Nice work Req. :D
by Gajzla
Sat Nov 28, 2015 6:20 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Miki: Fragments (Complete)
Replies: 204
Views: 49765

Re: Miki: Fragments (Ch.33 Posted 28th November 2015)

rimvydasm wrote:interesting chapter,i really like Miki and Hisao as a couple,also really like Ikuno and Ryouta ,and once again i can't wait for the next update,keep up the good work! :)
Thanks! :D
by Gajzla
Sat Nov 28, 2015 6:18 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Favourite artworks - reprise.
Replies: 4037
Views: 420890

Re: Favourite artworks - reprise.

Valjean Lafitte wrote:Sequel to Rtil's earlier Summer's Clover pic:
RiP Suzu's arm =(
by Gajzla
Sat Nov 28, 2015 4:27 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Miki: Fragments (Complete)
Replies: 204
Views: 49765

Re: Miki: Fragments (Ch.32 Posted 11th November 2015)

So with chapter 36 completed I think it’s about time I posted the first part of Miki’s adventure to Ikuno’s small summer retreat. As always feedback is greatly appreciated, thanks for being so patient with me. Enjoy. Sea Salt, Blackmail and a Horse Named Kuri “Why, oh why, did Ikuno’s parents think...
by Gajzla
Mon Nov 23, 2015 8:23 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Good Things Not to Feel [Misha]
Replies: 10
Views: 2627

Re: Good Things Not to Feel [Misha]

This is great. You can really empathises with the feelings of the main character. Although, I will be honest i’m not sure who the main character is after this line: The sound of school buses outside my window, cramming in sleepy kids who want to go back to bed. Perhaps that is intentional? Either wa...
by Gajzla
Thu Nov 12, 2015 7:50 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Miki: Fragments (Complete)
Replies: 204
Views: 49765

Re: Miki: Fragments (Ch.32 Posted 11th November 2015)

so glad that I had Veterans Day off so I could read this update. Always look for your new stuff. Always good. Thanks! Happy to hear your enjoying the story! Even on your day off. :D THAT.....went much differently than I expected. A slow clap for you. Is that a slow clap like: Shit son, you dun goof...
by Gajzla
Wed Nov 11, 2015 3:53 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Miki: Fragments (Complete)
Replies: 204
Views: 49765

Re: Miki: Fragments (Ch.31 Posted 24th October 2015)

A Hostile Environment Green and scaled the alien’s massive foot hurtles towards my face… with a wet crunch the world goes black. I wake with a start, instinctively raising my arms to cross in front of my face. It was just a dream, just a stupid dream. I let out a slow breath, feeling my heart thund...
by Gajzla
Wed Oct 28, 2015 7:23 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Miki: Fragments (Complete)
Replies: 204
Views: 49765

Re: Miki: Fragments (Ch.31 Posted 24th October 2015)

Wow Hisao's mom is a bitch. At least his dad is nice. Hopefully Hisao confronts her about how she's treating Miki some point soon, because I'd rather not have her act that way the entire time Miki is there. You'd think she'd stop seeing how much it's bothering her son, but I guess his feelings aren...
by Gajzla
Sun Oct 25, 2015 8:44 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Favourite artworks - reprise.
Replies: 4037
Views: 420890

Re: Favourite artworks - reprise.

Steinherz wrote:Req, why you do dis?

[Many boobs, Handle it.jpg]
For some reason the look on Shizune and Miki’s face makes me laugh. I can imagine Misha saying something along the lines of: “You promised we could do anything I wanted on date night.” :)
by Gajzla
Sun Oct 25, 2015 8:39 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Miki: Fragments (Complete)
Replies: 204
Views: 49765

Re: Miki: Fragments (Ch.31 Posted 24th October 2015)

brythain wrote: Well, my Miki is a cop's daughter, so it's appropriate! :D
And mine is the daughter of a criminal, lol. Funny how they both ended up with a certain weakness for drink. :)
by Gajzla
Sun Oct 25, 2015 8:24 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Miki: Fragments (Complete)
Replies: 204
Views: 49765

Re: Miki: Fragments (Ch.31 Posted 24th October 2015)

This chapter was great. I really like the sense of anxiety you've written into the story. One of my problems with the original VN was that even in its most tense moments, nothing really felt urgent to me, whereas reading this, I've constantly felt on edge, even in the story's happiest moments. Some...
by Gajzla
Fri Oct 23, 2015 6:49 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Miki: Fragments (Complete)
Replies: 204
Views: 49765

Re: Miki: Fragments (Ch.30 Posted 7th October 2015)

Sorry it’s been awhile since the last chapter, I hope this one is worth the wait. As always feedback is greatly appreciated. Enjoy. Disclaimer: I’ve been informed that this chapter shares some themes with Dewelar’s Developments. I haven’t read Developments yet (I know, i’m sorry), so i’m not sure h...
by Gajzla
Tue Oct 13, 2015 4:17 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Favourite artworks - reprise.
Replies: 4037
Views: 420890

Re: Favourite artworks - reprise.

Req wrote:Thanks, I do try to put little things in there, like the difference between Hisao's and Miki's clothes being put away,
Hehe, I hadn't noticed that (Something distracted me ^^). I bet Hisao is the kind of person who neatly folds the tea towel once he's done drying up. :roll:
by Gajzla
Tue Oct 13, 2015 3:23 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Favourite artworks - reprise.
Replies: 4037
Views: 420890

Re: Favourite artworks - reprise.

*69ing Miki and Suzu picture* What a sight Suzu gets to randomly wake up to. ^^ Also, I like Req's art because it shows Miki with a stump about the same thickness as her arm, which would happen if she lost the hand recently. Some people draw it thiner, like it was missing from birth. It's the littl...
by Gajzla
Sun Oct 11, 2015 12:58 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Miki: Fragments (Complete)
Replies: 204
Views: 49765

Re: Miki: Fragments (Ch.30 Posted 7th October 2015)

Sorry i’ve not been able to reply sooner, I’m an awful slacker. :( It being Miki's thought process there was of course some ominous parts, Well, wouldn’t be Miki without a head full of self doubt and worry. ^_^ The kiss was well done. Thanks, it’s really short but it’s one of the favourite things i’...