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by Gajzla
Sat Feb 27, 2016 8:08 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Flutter - Level Twenty One: Footsies [25/3/17]
Replies: 258
Views: 52860

Re: Flutter - Level Three: Hitboxes [27/2/16]

Nice chapter once again. I was confused as well by what actually happened in the pool, but I guess thats the perils of writing while drugged. :) Hope you're feeling better.
by Gajzla
Sat Feb 27, 2016 4:49 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Miki: Fragments (Complete)
Replies: 204
Views: 49765

Re: Miki: Fragments (Ch.35 Posted 18th January 2016)

I’m so sorry it’s taken me this long to update. If it’s any consolation the story is nearly complete, and I believe I should be able to get the last five chapters out in a bit more reasonable a time frame. Thanks as always to Mirage for his proofreading skills and Enjoy. The final call “I love you ...
by Gajzla
Fri Feb 19, 2016 3:08 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Birthday!
Replies: 927
Views: 101551

Re: Birthday!

Happy Birthday Miki. :D
by Gajzla
Sun Feb 14, 2016 7:47 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Flutter - Level Twenty One: Footsies [25/3/17]
Replies: 258
Views: 52860

Re: Flutter - Level One: The Haunted Hall [13/2/18]

Ohhh, a story from the girls point of view. Always prefer those to Hisao’s. Also, as everyone else has said this is a really cool Rika, not quite my headcannon but a damn sight better than any others I have read. I look forward to you making me feel bad with the frequency and quality of your updates...
by Gajzla
Wed Feb 03, 2016 8:28 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Hikari, inukashi
Replies: 4
Views: 1276

Re: Hikari, inukashi

I really like this. It’s completely unapologetic in being fanfiction, the reader is simply given a small hint or clue and trusted to know who we are dealing with. The only thing I find slightly confusing is the age of the main character. At the start of the story she is celebrating her six birthday ...
by Gajzla
Tue Jan 19, 2016 6:29 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Miki: Fragments (Complete)
Replies: 204
Views: 49765

Re: Miki: Fragments (Ch.35 Posted 18th January 2016)

I haven't commented in a while, but I think this is an apt opportunity to interject and say FUCKING FINALLY, MIKI! :D I've been hoping she'd actually tell someone for the better part of the whole story. Oh, and good chapter and all that jazz. Well, good things come to those who wait... Though, not ...
by Gajzla
Sun Jan 17, 2016 8:36 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Miki: Fragments (Complete)
Replies: 204
Views: 49765

Re: Miki: Fragments (Ch.34 Posted 23rd December 2015)

Happy New Years everyone! Glossy Brochures A puddle explodes around my shoe as I sprint through the torrential rain. The lights of the boys’ dormitories glow invitingly through the haze and twilight - a distant sanctuary from the first storm of autumn. I pull my coat tighter around me as I run, kee...
by Gajzla
Fri Jan 01, 2016 3:40 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Favourite artworks - reprise.
Replies: 4037
Views: 420890

Re: Favourite artworks - reprise.

You know... That might just be my favourite Miki artwork =D
by Gajzla
Wed Dec 23, 2015 8:53 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Miki: Fragments (Complete)
Replies: 204
Views: 49765

Re: Miki: Fragments (Ch.34 Posted 23rd December 2015)

It would be hard to picture Mrs Komaki - respondent in her jewels and fancy dress I think you meant "resplendent." There's some other mistakes too, but this one was the most glaring to me for some reason. Fixed, thanks for pointing out. I will have another read see if I can see any more mistakes. (...
by Gajzla
Wed Dec 23, 2015 6:14 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Miki: Fragments (Complete)
Replies: 204
Views: 49765

Re: Miki: Fragments (Ch.33 Posted 28th November 2015)

I probably got more enjoyment out of Miki being terrified on the horse than I should have, but I couldn't help it. It was hilarious. Hehe, yeah that was lots of fun to write. I think Miki will be sticking to less lively forms of transport for the foreseeable future. :D On a more serious note, I rea...
by Gajzla
Wed Dec 23, 2015 6:03 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Miki: Fragments (Complete)
Replies: 204
Views: 49765

Re: Miki: Fragments (Ch.33 Posted 28th November 2015)

Merry Christmas everyone. Sorry for the long delay but hopefully this chapter will make up for it, it’s one of my recent favourites. As always a big thank you to Mirage_GSM for his proofreading and I hope you all enjoy! Wine, Scandalous Advice and Moonlight Ikuno settles herself uncomfortably in th...
by Gajzla
Sat Dec 12, 2015 5:46 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Gajzla's One Shots: The Legendary Rust Bucket
Replies: 14
Views: 3865

Re: Gajzla's One Shots: The Legendary Rust Bucket

Even though this was only tangentially related to KS, it was still a pretty decent read. I'm interested to see how you're going to tie this into the world of KS if you do continue it. Thanks! :D Don’t worry I have a plan to how this all fits together once I start on the main story. :) However I did...
by Gajzla
Sat Dec 12, 2015 1:20 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Gajzla's One Shots: The Legendary Rust Bucket
Replies: 14
Views: 3865

Re: Playtime - Hanako One Shot

Don’t panic! Not giving up on Fragments! However, the concept for my next story has been rolling around my head for ages, and in a mad moment of inspiration I decided to write up a prologue for one of the characters. As always i’m immensely grateful to Mirage_GSM for his proofreading skills. :D Thi...
by Gajzla
Sat Dec 05, 2015 9:23 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Yamaku Book Club (20191111 Two Old & Colourful Pieces)
Replies: 1806
Views: 250632

Re: Yamaku Book Club (Meeting Resumes—[Akira/Lilly])

How do the sample fan-fictions demonstrate or define this? Take, for example, Oddball's 'Red Fish Blue Fish'. Sorry, i’m an awful awful slacker. If it’s any excuse BWL came out on the WoW sever I play on =P Red Fish Blue Fish: Other than nearly killing me off with unexpected feels this story demons...
by Gajzla
Mon Nov 30, 2015 9:40 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Yamaku Book Club (20191111 Two Old & Colourful Pieces)
Replies: 1806
Views: 250632

Re: Yamaku Book Club (Meeting Resumes—[Akira/Lilly])

That's one of the most fascinating things to explore, actually—the sibling relationships that aren't fully explored in the VN. What does everyone think about Akira (besides 'cool elder sister') and her relationship with Lilly? I think that she enjoys the position of cool older sister, and doesn’t/d...