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Jeez, man, you're pumping out chapters fast . Well, I'm not complaining :lol: Akio has now entered the pantheon of "Sarcastic people whom I would totally love to meet IRL", currently populated by Skulduggery Pleasant, GLaDOS, the Stanley Parable Narrator and... that's about it, off the top of my hea...

Saki is adorable - the world is now at peace! I also really like that particular piece of art - surprisingly appropriate for that scene, too. Shizune's speech problems are weird - I was going to point them out as spelling errors. Then I noticed that they were supposed to be intentional :lol: I'm not...

I played the same scene but with Saki and Hisao instead. No... you stop that. You go right back to Hell, you. Why would you give me that current-head-canon?! Because it's going to happen either way. Sorry to say it, but for any relationship with Saki, it's basically the best-case scenario (unless t...

text s books Caught one, boss! Anywho, I was right, this is awesome! :D Some specific things I loved: (╯°□°)╯︵ ┻━┻ This freaking emoji or whatever it's called - once I realised what it was, I laughed like a madman. :lol: Akio being sarcastic Your Akio is rapidly becoming my favourite deadpan snarke...

Exams now being over, I managed to get something written in between playing unhealthy amounts of Dark Souls. Fuck Blighttown, it is the worst Thanks to ChaosSummons01 and Blank Mage for feedback while writing. Without further ado, commence the words! *** Sour Note Standing outside the door to the li...

It's adorable!

I do like your cast of characters, they're great! I especially liked that little bit at the end where the kids start bickering.

Nice work, Hoitash!

Saki showed up; this is relevant to my interests (you can probably guess what I voted for )

Anyway, much fewer mistakes here. I didn't notice any, but it is 9am here and I haven't had breakfast yet (next on my to-do list)

Pretty good, this - continue.

Okay, I was prepared for having to point out a load of spelling errors 'n stuff, but I got nothing. THIS IS AWESOME! :D You've set this up so well. Taro's quirk of speaking English is actually kinda amusing to me, since I do the same thing with German (hazard of doing it for 5 years of secondary sch...

I caught one, boss! much better then when "than" Anyway, can't be bothered to look for any more, this is great! :D I'd dance as a pawn if this is what I'm dancing to. damn, really need to get on and read H&K: Master Detectives Also, I'd rise for that school song - then I'd air-guitar to it. Thanks f...

Whoo, we get more of this thing! :D I'm enjoying this quite a lot. Please keep going. And now, your regular broadcast of errors wot I found: the nurse was very exited, no? "Excited" noticing my bawled up fist "Balled-up", "bawled" means something different That's all I got right now. May edit this w...

I'm glad that you don't intend to go for cheap drama by handing Hisao some idiot ball Agreed. http://1.bp.blogspot.com/-ReYJRK5v81E/TyOJM2bQz-I/AAAAAAAAD3Y/tsbtY2SptV0/s1600/CRISIS-AVERTED.jpg And yeah, it does come across that the mix of emotions Hisao is feeling is complex. That's probably why we...

That... that is awesome

Rtil has blessed you, Munch. Be thankful for this *insert godly choir music*

But can I mention that as a writer, how happy I am that my writing skill has gotten to the point where it starts discussion like this? Yes. Yes you can. :D Which is why he actually hasn't internalised and processed all the clues that EBJ has dropped in front of him during the story... Fair 'nough. ...

There are plenty of perfectly good reasons to want to know about a friend's condition - nures mentioned that buddy-system in this very chapter - and the most surprising thing in this chapter to me would be that he didn't look it up as soon as she told him about her condition. I'm not saying that it...

Either way, it looks like she wants space, not questions. Isn't that one more reason to look it up instead of asking her about it directly? A better idea would be to wait until she's ready to answer his questions (didn't clarify that :P ). That way, she's able to explain how she feels about it - so...