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by scratchminus
Fri Jul 28, 2017 8:47 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Ungraceful Reunion - An Emilogue (Chap 4 - Updated 2/20/19)
Replies: 18
Views: 4808

Re: Ungraceful Reunion - An Emilogue (Chap 2 - Updated 7/28/

Very good chapter - and I rarely say that about chapters containing H-scenes. After chapter 1 I was more or less hoping for Hisao and Emi getting back together. Now that I know that would necessitate him frst breaking up with his current girlfriend I changed my mind :-) Thank you, I appreciate it! ...
by scratchminus
Fri Jul 28, 2017 8:29 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Ungraceful Reunion - An Emilogue (Chap 4 - Updated 2/20/19)
Replies: 18
Views: 4808

Re: Ungraceful Reunion - An Emi Epilogue (Back from the dead

Chapter 2 - Thoughts Aflutter “That does not look anything like an elephant.” “C’mon Hisao, you’ve gotta use your imagination!” “No, I think you’ve gotta get your eyes checked, Tsu.” This comment earns me a light punch in the arm and a pout from the woman sitting next to me. I chuckle, savoring her...
by scratchminus
Fri Jul 14, 2017 5:40 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: From Tokyo To Mumbai
Replies: 13
Views: 3793

Re: From Tokyo To Mumbai

I'm already liking where this is going, especially because it feels like something pretty different compared to a lot of other fics out there. Kana seems like she's going to be an interesting character, so I'm looking forward to Hisao's future interactions with her. I also like the subtle nod to His...
by scratchminus
Wed Jun 28, 2017 3:49 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Ungraceful Reunion - An Emilogue (Chap 4 - Updated 2/20/19)
Replies: 18
Views: 4808

Re: Ungraceful Reunion - An Emi Epilogue (Back from the dead

I think it should be "my apartment" or "my apartment complex/building" then "I can see it..." I didn't even notice that while editing, thank you for pointing it out! Overall I thought this was a really interesting read. You say it takes place after Emi's Good Ending, but it feels like the bad one. ...
by scratchminus
Tue Jun 27, 2017 9:00 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Ungraceful Reunion - An Emilogue (Chap 4 - Updated 2/20/19)
Replies: 18
Views: 4808

Ungraceful Reunion - An Emilogue (Chap 4 - Updated 2/20/19)

Fun Fact: Chapter 1 was started on October 28, 2015 and completed on June 27, 2017. Hello hello all! A brief introduction of myself: I'm scratchminus, the writer of Stopping Short , an Emi fan fiction from 2 years ago. At the time I had said that I had another story in the works and would be releas...
by scratchminus
Mon Jun 01, 2015 5:25 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Emi Epilogue - Stopping Short (UPDATED 5/25/2015: CHAPTER 5)
Replies: 83
Views: 19327

Re: Emi Epilogue - Stopping Short (UPDATED 5/25/2015: CHAPTE

Among the routes of KS I liked Shizune's least of all for various reasons, but that choice is not one of them. Interesting, you and I seem to share the same feelings for the KS routes (just didn't feel like quoting the entire post, though). Alright, thank you for sharing, I just wanted to know your...
by scratchminus
Thu May 28, 2015 6:11 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Emi Epilogue - Stopping Short (UPDATED 5/25/2015: CHAPTER 5)
Replies: 83
Views: 19327

Re: Emi Epilogue - Stopping Short (UPDATED 4/8/2015: CHAPTER

Depends on the genre: 'slice of life' tends to not be so fantastical (or 'phantastic' to use a very old word) unless it involves magic realism. The writing itself is fine. My response after reading the two cycles (ha ha) was to laugh, shake my head, and think 'shit happens'. The point I suppose was...
by scratchminus
Wed May 27, 2015 7:27 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Emi Epilogue - Stopping Short (UPDATED 5/25/2015: CHAPTER 5)
Replies: 83
Views: 19327

Re: Emi Epilogue - Stopping Short (UPDATED 4/8/2015: CHAPTER

Because the reasoning that leads to the first choice is a sound one. It's not even hinted at in the story that it is in any way wrong. It just alters his "placement" such that an almost Rube-Goldberg -like chain of events* sets in that leads to his death - and that's what I meant by a "f*** you" to...
by scratchminus
Tue May 26, 2015 5:49 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Emi Epilogue - Stopping Short (UPDATED 5/25/2015: CHAPTER 5)
Replies: 83
Views: 19327

Re: Emi Epilogue - Stopping Short (UPDATED 4/8/2015: CHAPTER

That was nice. A little....unexpected, but nice. Reminds me of the Kenji end, in that your choices actually have little to do with the outcome, just the fact that they put you in position for that outcome. Yeah, that's kinda what I was going for. The world essentially stays the same in both endings...
by scratchminus
Mon May 25, 2015 5:34 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Emi Epilogue - Stopping Short (UPDATED 5/25/2015: CHAPTER 5)
Replies: 83
Views: 19327

Re: Emi Epilogue - Stopping Short (UPDATED 4/8/2015: CHAPTER

Stopping Short – Chapter 5: The Finale Decision 2: Find and talk to Emi Standing here and staring at that arch will solve nothing. I care about her. I want to see her. I want to be there as comfort and reassurance. This isn’t to save her. This isn’t to protect her. This is to show that I love and s...
by scratchminus
Mon May 25, 2015 5:34 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Emi Epilogue - Stopping Short (UPDATED 5/25/2015: CHAPTER 5)
Replies: 83
Views: 19327

Re: Emi Epilogue - Stopping Short (UPDATED 4/8/2015: CHAPTER

Stopping Short – Chapter 5: The Finale Decision 1: Wait for Emi outside Barging in on my white charger to “save the day” can’t be a good idea. I may be able to talk to her and get her to realize that I care, but in the end she’ll probably just see it as me being the hero that protects my so-called ...
by scratchminus
Mon May 25, 2015 5:32 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Emi Epilogue - Stopping Short (UPDATED 5/25/2015: CHAPTER 5)
Replies: 83
Views: 19327

Re: Emi Epilogue - Stopping Short (UPDATED 4/8/2015: CHAPTER

Start Date: April 8, 2015 *NOTE* I will probably continue to refer to Emi's hair as pink. Sorry if that bothers you. Also, sorry for taking so long with this. Exams were killing me. :c Now go enjoy the finale of Stopping Short. <3 EDIT: For the curious, the "special reward" will be revealed in the e...
by scratchminus
Mon Apr 13, 2015 6:40 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Emi Epilogue - Stopping Short (UPDATED 5/25/2015: CHAPTER 5)
Replies: 83
Views: 19327

Re: Emi Epilogue - Stopping Short (UPDATED 4/8/2015: CHAPTER

So, um, I assume no one will assault me if I happily return to referring to Emi's hair as "pink?" Because I'll probably end up doing it subconsciously anyway.
by scratchminus
Sun Apr 12, 2015 10:43 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Emi Epilogue - Stopping Short (UPDATED 5/25/2015: CHAPTER 5)
Replies: 83
Views: 19327

Re: Emi Epilogue - Stopping Short (UPDATED 4/8/2015: CHAPTER

If you slightly adjust the magenta/green balance in any image of Emi, her hair definitively turns pink. Particularly since some people are red/green colorblind and everybody sees color slightly differently, it's not impossible that some people would see Emi's hair color as pinkish. I love you forev...
by scratchminus
Sun Apr 12, 2015 1:31 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Emi Epilogue - Stopping Short (UPDATED 5/25/2015: CHAPTER 5)
Replies: 83
Views: 19327

Re: Emi Epilogue - Stopping Short (UPDATED 4/8/2015: CHAPTER

Just read this thing. My thoughts: Hhmmm. Interesting. Also, stop being so f***ing confusing, Emi :evil: ! Quick mention of two things a) Emi's hair ain't pink. That does annoy me. b) The whole thing with Iwanako does strike me as really contrived. Not to say that I hate where the story is going wi...