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by CloudGrain
Thu Oct 16, 2014 7:58 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Fitting In (A NxN fic) [Chapter 3 complete!][18/1/15]
Replies: 29
Views: 7107

Re: Fitting In (Working Title)

Nicely done. It seems... Morbidly realistic, vibrant even in being a relatively dark and dismal subject. If that makes any real sense. You're making me absolutely thank God that I've never witnessed a grand-mal seizure in person. Giving me a good idea of what it'd be like to watch and understand wha...
by CloudGrain
Thu Oct 16, 2014 7:47 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: After the Fall [Undergoing Major Rework]
Replies: 45
Views: 8804

After the Fall [Alternate-Ending, Update Two]

Last week it hardly took me long to realize that the cafeteria's food was mediocre at best, and that the best way to deal with it was to eat it quickly and be done with it. Today, I think that I learned that knowing you've got people shifting uncomfortably to watch you, considering approaching you b...
by CloudGrain
Wed Oct 15, 2014 2:03 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Learning the blues. Act 3: Scene 2 revives from the grave
Replies: 162
Views: 31723

Re: Learning the blues. Act 2 Scene 11 up!

Alrighty! Time for my apparently anticipated review! I can't wait for what comes next. Damn, waiting and getting two chapters in a row, more than just a few brief minutes worth of my relatively speedy-reading to sit back and enjoy was nice. But it made me feel like I was sitting back with a nice thi...
by CloudGrain
Tue Oct 14, 2014 8:24 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Brownie of Yamaku, -snippets-
Replies: 15
Views: 3094

Re: The Brownie of Yamaku, no longer a one shot...

I blame you cloud >< This has officially turned into my next project now... -sigh-. Updates will take place AFTER I finish learning the blues (which you need to review cloud :P) Anyways, enjoy this small next scene, but this thread will likely go quiet until learning the blues is finished. I can de...
by CloudGrain
Mon Oct 13, 2014 9:41 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: After the Fall [Undergoing Major Rework]
Replies: 45
Views: 8804

After the Fall [Update One]

If what I'd felt entering Mutou's classroom on my first day had been apprehension... Well, what I felt now was something a few levels above it. Yesterday had gone uneventfully, as far as it could have. A call from my parents, who'd thankfully been more happy that I was still alive than angry with th...
by CloudGrain
Mon Oct 13, 2014 7:54 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: After the Fall [Undergoing Major Rework]
Replies: 45
Views: 8804

Re: After the Fall [Alternate-Ending]

To me, it didn't really do anything outside of having Hisao survive the fall. It's a nice concept, but nothing was really done with it, outside of Hisao maybe having a more positive outlook. Very fair analysis, that was pretty much the only thing to happen. Definitely considering expanding upon the...
by CloudGrain
Mon Oct 13, 2014 6:55 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Brownie of Yamaku, -snippets-
Replies: 15
Views: 3094

Re: The Brownie of Yamaku (One Shot)

I feel like there are references I'm missing here. Beyond simply the foodstuffs and the character you're introducing. Regardless, I'm now completely feeling the need to get more explanation of, background for, and interaction with this character. -Shakes thermonuclear warhead detonator in a vaguely ...
by CloudGrain
Mon Oct 13, 2014 6:45 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: After the Fall [Undergoing Major Rework]
Replies: 45
Views: 8804

Re: After the Fall [Alternate-Ending]

Ah, the corrupt Yamaku bureaucracy. I can actually buy that explanation. It'd make for an interesting fic on its own. :lol: At any rate, this piece stands well on its own, I think. It would, wouldn't it? Reminds me of one of the most interesting theories I think I've ever heard on the subject of Ya...
by CloudGrain
Sun Oct 12, 2014 9:58 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: After the Fall [Undergoing Major Rework]
Replies: 45
Views: 8804

Re: After the Fall [Alternate-Ending]

Ooh. This is a concept that's always been on my mind. What would happen if Hisao were to survive his fall? It's perfectly possible, after all. I can only think of one fic off the top of my head in which it happens, though I am sure there are many more. That being said, it's nice to see another pers...
by CloudGrain
Sat Oct 11, 2014 10:17 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: After the Fall [Undergoing Major Rework]
Replies: 45
Views: 8804

After the Fall [Undergoing Major Rework]

-Undergoing Rework-

'Prelude'

Update 1
Update 2
Update 3
Update 4

Hanako's 'Route'

Update 5a
Update 6a
Update 7a
Update 8a
by CloudGrain
Fri Oct 10, 2014 4:29 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Yamaku's Cheshire Cat [Short, Miki and Hanako]
Replies: 7
Views: 1578

Re: Yamaku's Cheshire Cat [Short, Miki and Hanako]

That was fun. I like these little side fics, just sweet enough to put a smile on your face. Thanks! Always glad to hear I made someone a bit happier! :D I agree, but I think this one could have done with a little less backstory. The introduction is about half of the story. Except for that it's a cu...
by CloudGrain
Thu Oct 09, 2014 3:48 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Yamaku's Cheshire Cat [Short, Miki and Hanako]
Replies: 7
Views: 1578

Yamaku's Cheshire Cat [Short, Miki and Hanako]

I preface this by admitting to being somewhat intoxicated at the time of writing it; and make absolutely no guarantees on grammar (though red squiggly-lines shall be corrected appropriately) nor logical progression. Based on some comic I can't link because I can't find but I remembered as being amus...
by CloudGrain
Sun Oct 05, 2014 7:50 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Learning the blues. Act 3: Scene 2 revives from the grave
Replies: 162
Views: 31723

Re: Learning the blues. Act 2 Scene 9 up!

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Currently indisposed to making other comments because booze. But hey, it was fluffy. :lol:
by CloudGrain
Thu Oct 02, 2014 5:54 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Learning the blues. Act 3: Scene 2 revives from the grave
Replies: 162
Views: 31723

Re: Learning the blues. Act 2 Scene 8 up!

Another solid act to add to the collection, definitely enjoyed it. Finally being exposed to at least a tangential bit of the source of Ayane's cynicism (her less-direct family). Having a few little barriers broken down between Hisao and her in regards to their respective conditions. Cool stuff, tear...
by CloudGrain
Sun Sep 28, 2014 6:44 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Learning the blues. Act 3: Scene 2 revives from the grave
Replies: 162
Views: 31723

Re: Learning the blues. Act 2 Scene 7 up!

For the nominal fee of your soul, signed away for eternal servitu- No wait, wrong script. Honestly, quite flattered by your asking me, but I'd have to decline on the basis that I don't think that I have either the grammatical expertise nor the ability to respond in the timeliest manner given your ra...