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by CloudGrain
Sun Nov 02, 2014 8:10 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A Crimson Route [Act Two, Scene Eight Up]
Replies: 70
Views: 15655

Act One, Scene Four;

Act One, Scene Four; Normalcy I cut getting lunch in the cafeteria today close, having decided to stay back in class for just a little while longer to complete most of the work that Mutou assigned us. The line to pick up food was nonexistent, and the cafeteria was nearly deserted when I got there, ...
by CloudGrain
Sat Nov 01, 2014 9:41 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: After the Fall [Undergoing Major Rework]
Replies: 45
Views: 8805

Regarding Major Rework.

After the Fall is going to likely be out on a fairly major hiatus for an indeterminate amount of time. My concern about varying in my quality as I go along through this seems to be somewhat validated, going from around a 1.000 word introduction to the story, all the way up to major [and more frequen...
by CloudGrain
Sat Nov 01, 2014 12:26 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A Crimson Route [Act Two, Scene Eight Up]
Replies: 70
Views: 15655

Act One, Scene Three;

Act One, Scene Three; Long Walks I'll have to admit that yesterday definitely tired me out, even getting a good night's sleep after my walk into town with Minako. Misha and Shizune were still all over me, trying to get me to join the Student Council. I feel like it's a new pet-project of theirs, an...
by CloudGrain
Thu Oct 30, 2014 9:35 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A Crimson Route [Act Two, Scene Eight Up]
Replies: 70
Views: 15655

Act One, Scene Two

Act One, Scene Two; Out on the Town I think that my initial impression of Shizune and Misha managed to just scratch the surface. Today, the pair had been pretty hell-bent on trying to recruit me into the Student Council, through whatever means they could. Starting off immediately with just pleading...
by CloudGrain
Wed Oct 29, 2014 5:16 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A Crimson Route [Act Two, Scene Eight Up]
Replies: 70
Views: 15655

A Crimson Route [Act Two, Scene Eight Up]

Katawa Shoujo; A Crimson Route - An Original-Character Psuedo Route [/size] http://darwinsrightleftwing.files.wordpress.com/2014/01/ecg-kenz-love.jpg?w=672&h=372&crop=1g Table of Contents Act One, Life Expectancy Current Word Count: 19.103 Act One, Scene One; - Mondays Act One, Scene Two; - Out on ...
by CloudGrain
Sun Oct 26, 2014 4:17 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: After the Fall [Undergoing Major Rework]
Replies: 45
Views: 8805

Re: After the Fall [Alternate-Ending, Update 8a]

Had a city trip myself to take, no opportunities to write down the story in mind. Long-update to make up for it. :D _______________________________________________ I've never been a big fan of bus rides. You sit down, hope that the seats are somewhat comfortable and just wait. Sometimes, you've got ...
by CloudGrain
Thu Oct 23, 2014 8:09 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: After the Fall [Undergoing Major Rework]
Replies: 45
Views: 8805

Re: After the Fall [Alternate-Ending, Update 7a]

Waking up to an alarm on a Sunday is a lot harder than waking up during the rest of the week. Without the implication that I'll miss school if I just hit the sleep button a few more times, I can't actually help but revert to a little bit of my previous laziness as I smack the sleep button twice, man...
by CloudGrain
Thu Oct 23, 2014 4:40 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: After the Fall [Undergoing Major Rework]
Replies: 45
Views: 8805

Re: After the Fall [Alternate-Ending, Updated Oct 22]

I really, really like the explanation you give for the tea room. It makes perfect sense and just fits really nicely. there was a nice upbeat, hopeful tone to this piece and it was sweet enough to make me consider checking myself for diabetes. As always cloud, excellent writing and another piece tha...
by CloudGrain
Wed Oct 22, 2014 12:11 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: After the Fall [Undergoing Major Rework]
Replies: 45
Views: 8805

Re: After the Fall [Alternate-Ending, Update 6a]

The tearoom seems to have an entirely different air around it from the rest of the classrooms here at Yamaku. It's almost like it was someplace that'd been... forgotten, except for the visits that Lilly, Hanako, and occasionally myself had to it. It's not entirely unlike the one table that I'd found...
by CloudGrain
Tue Oct 21, 2014 10:41 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: After the Fall [Undergoing Major Rework]
Replies: 45
Views: 8805

Re: After the Fall [Alternate-Ending, Update 5a]

I can't help but think that staying around to help would be something of a mistake. I could try to help Misha and Shizune, sure... but Shizune's nearly done already and would probably be just as able to explain the work to Misha when she finishes up. The rest of my classmates, I really can't say tha...
by CloudGrain
Mon Oct 20, 2014 7:30 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: After the Fall [Undergoing Major Rework]
Replies: 45
Views: 8805

Re: After the Fall [Alternate-Ending, Updated Oct 20]

My fault entirely, SilentCook, I will update a portion of the post to reflect. *bounces on the spot* Nice! Like this part as well, I can really feel Hisao's internal struggle with his choices. Hehe I could see this as part of a route for several of the girls, depending on the choice made by Hisao! H...
by CloudGrain
Mon Oct 20, 2014 4:53 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: After the Fall [Undergoing Major Rework]
Replies: 45
Views: 8805

Re: After the Fall [Alternate-Ending, Update 4]

Well... I've suddenly come to find myself in possession of an ordinate amount of free time, with a temporary job having come to an abrupt and somewhat unexpected end. ____ Wednesday went by almost normally as far as things seem to go at Yamaku. Plenty of people seemed content to stare, whisper, goss...
by CloudGrain
Sun Oct 19, 2014 7:29 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Learning the blues. Act 3: Scene 2 revives from the grave
Replies: 162
Views: 31731

Re: Learning the blues. Act 2 Scene 12 up!

Oh... The potential train wreck of feels, physical conditions coming to the forefront in traumatic ways, and generally being made to loathe Ayane's assholes of a family beyond her sibling/half siblings. http://i0.kym-cdn.com/photos/images/newsfeed/000/293/590/6f6.gif This is a great lead-up, buildin...
by CloudGrain
Sun Oct 19, 2014 3:20 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: After the Fall [Undergoing Major Rework]
Replies: 45
Views: 8805

Re: After the Fall [Alternate-Ending, Update 3]

Despite the calm off the room, it feels like we're all on edge. All being taken just far enough out of our comfort zones to make things awkward. Lilly's silence is almost deafening as I visibly see something of the conflict between politeness and actually addressing the elephant in the room. Hanako'...
by CloudGrain
Fri Oct 17, 2014 2:56 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: After the Fall [Undergoing Major Rework]
Replies: 45
Views: 8805

Re: After the Fall [Alternate-Ending, Updated Oct 16]

Looks like Hisao is slowly allowing himself to become at least a little closer to the girls. I have to remember that this is the Hisao the closed himself away from everyone. Not sure how long this is going to go, or if he's going to end up dating anyone, though to be honest he probably just needs a...