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by Puncyclopedia
Sun May 31, 2015 9:25 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Benefit of Hindsight (updated 4/16!)
Replies: 175
Views: 45029

Act 1, Chapter 4 - Students, Meet Teacher

Chapter 4 has arrived! Before that, though, a quick note. For any dialogue of Hisao's that is both signed and spoken, I will be using "[ ]" to indicate this. I'll add this note to the Table of Contents post eventually likely as well. Enjoy! --------------------- The days have passed quickly. Too qui...
by Puncyclopedia
Sun May 31, 2015 3:32 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Ties that Bind (Shizune x Hisao, one-shot)
Replies: 11
Views: 3103

Re: The Ties that Bind (Shizune x Hisao, one-shot)

azumeow wrote:Wait....an 18-chapter one-shot?

Wat. Not that I'm displeased, far from it, this is good shit, but....wat.
18+ = adult content. Not 18+ chapters.
by Puncyclopedia
Sun May 31, 2015 1:11 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Blank Slate - (Updated 12-26) A Christmas Council
Replies: 131
Views: 30374

Re: Firing Blanks - (Updated 5/20) Basically just Shizune/Ha

WALL OF TEXT, ROUND THREE, FIGHT! Bullet points this time. - Most Importantly - I'm not saying that Lilly ISN'T prideful. She fairly clearly is. I'm simply arguing that pride isn't the reason she keeps people shut out in the ways that she does in the game. "Not wanting to burden people with your tro...
by Puncyclopedia
Sat May 30, 2015 7:59 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Blank Slate - (Updated 12-26) A Christmas Council
Replies: 131
Views: 30374

Re: Firing Blanks - (Updated 5/20) Basically just Shizune/Ha

Back after a day out, so I'll tap three mana, Dragonskull Summit for black, and play my Wall of Text. (Random sidenote - I don't know if anyone's heard of Weiss Schwarz, but I'm slowly using Magic Set Editor to make a Katawa Shoujo set for that TCG - where in Fan Works would be a good place to post ...
by Puncyclopedia
Sat May 30, 2015 9:42 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Ties that Bind (Shizune x Hisao, one-shot)
Replies: 11
Views: 3103

Re: The Ties that Bind (Shizune x Hisao, one-shot)

Fair play. I'll rework that line once I sit down to edit. Risk-playing Shizune IS best Shizune. Before the events of Act 3 would make the premise...awkward, I had a fic idea in mind in which Shizune and Misha actually DID tie down Hisao and "torture" him until he agreed to join the student council, ...
by Puncyclopedia
Fri May 29, 2015 10:59 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Ties that Bind (Shizune x Hisao, one-shot)
Replies: 11
Views: 3103

Re: The Ties that Bind (Shizune x Hisao, one-shot)

Well, it's...it's... Brilliant, absolutely. Your writting has such gravitas to it, I can't really explain. But it's truly artistic. Also, your ideas are brilliant. I'm somewhat glad you didn't divluge into "smut" instantly , but also don't doubt that you'd make that just as beautiful. I think the m...
by Puncyclopedia
Fri May 29, 2015 10:43 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Blank Slate - (Updated 12-26) A Christmas Council
Replies: 131
Views: 30374

Re: Firing Blanks - (Updated 5/20, Love Me, Dammit)

Lilly's problem is, I think, more akin to the others than you're giving it credit for. I would characterize her problem as having no one to confide her problems in - more accurately, she believes she doesn't. This actually dovetails with what you said - her best friend is Hanako, who obviously has d...
by Puncyclopedia
Fri May 29, 2015 7:02 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Ties that Bind (Shizune x Hisao, one-shot)
Replies: 11
Views: 3103

The Ties that Bind (Shizune x Hisao, one-shot)

Sooooo, it's me again! This is considerably different from the Benefit of Hindsight, which I'm also working on here. Nothing's up my sleeve with this one. It's a Shizune x Hisao one-shot fic. It takes place in a nebulous time after Hisao and Shizune have graduated from Yamaku and are presumably in u...
by Puncyclopedia
Fri May 29, 2015 5:42 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Blank Slate - (Updated 12-26) A Christmas Council
Replies: 131
Views: 30374

Re: Firing Blanks - (Updated 5/20, Love Me, Dammit)

Hi! I read the two Shizune/Hanako oriented pieces, and will go back with commentary on the middle piece once I've read it. I'm not a fan of Hanako. At all, for a lot of reasons, but I enjoyed this. The first piece did a good job of establishing their similarities within your universe, and while I qu...
by Puncyclopedia
Fri May 29, 2015 2:46 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Benefit of Hindsight (updated 4/16!)
Replies: 175
Views: 45029

Re: The Benefit of Hindsight (updated 5/28!)

Edits made! Thanks Mirage! And yes, this story won't be featuring Emi, Hanako, or Rin. Lilly and Shizune will be the only two of the main five girls showing up. As for the rest of the cast, we have Kenji and Mutou so far. There's two more members of the cast who will make appearances in the story (e...
by Puncyclopedia
Fri May 29, 2015 7:35 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Benefit of Hindsight (updated 4/16!)
Replies: 175
Views: 45029

Re: The Benefit of Hindsight (updated 5/28!)

Oh, you tease! Why would you do thaaaat. I guessed that making Shizune the mentor would be far too obvious, but I didn't see that coming. (Neither did Lilly! Ha! ) But I'm dying to know what happened with Shizune, and you know it, and I know you know, and aaaaagh. Your writing is really good, I'd t...
by Puncyclopedia
Thu May 28, 2015 8:04 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Benefit of Hindsight (updated 4/16!)
Replies: 175
Views: 45029

Act 1, Chapter 3 - Mind Over Mentor

It is 8:45 AM as I walk through the front gate of Yamaku. At least this time I don't hesitate. For better or worse, most of my nervousness is minimal today. Perhaps I should be thankful I came here yesterday. Now, it's part of my routine, and the routine is less likely to be terrifying than the new....
by Puncyclopedia
Wed May 27, 2015 9:25 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Benefit of Hindsight (updated 4/16!)
Replies: 175
Views: 45029

Re: The Benefit of Hindsight (updated 5/26!)

I occasionally worry that Kenji will, one day, finally kill someone in self defense after they sarcastically claim to be assassins. Like, there has to come a time when his craziness has terrifyingly real consequences. A lot of what makes Kenji work so well (IMO) is that really he's a bunch of sound...
by Puncyclopedia
Tue May 26, 2015 10:00 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Yamaku Book Club (20210104 Red Fish Blue Fish)
Replies: 1894
Views: 347787

Re: Yamaku Book Club (Meeting In Progress 25 May 2015)

As much as I'd love Shizune first, in an effort not to be biased, I'd go with the order of the character's scenes in the library (which I've just realized IS alphabetical order, I fail at creativity), so Emi --> Side Character #1 --> Hanako ---> Side Character #2 ---> Lilly ---> Side Character #3 --...
by Puncyclopedia
Tue May 26, 2015 9:32 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Shizune/Misha Love/Hate Relationship
Replies: 71
Views: 21681

Re: Shizune/Misha Love/Hate Relationship

I think there *is* something to the initial premise of this thread (ie, Shizune being disliked more because of Misha's existence as a character making it easy to compare the two to one another). Misha's lack of a route, ironically, is part of what I think makes her as beloved as she is - you get all...