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by Puncyclopedia
Sun Jan 03, 2016 3:35 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Benefit of Hindsight (updated 4/16!)
Replies: 175
Views: 45027

Re: The Benefit of Hindsight (updated 1/3!)

Ooooo, it's alive again. And it has retained its snarky, self-aware semi-gallows humour. Wunderbar! Good to have you back, Pun! :) That much will never go away, it's the only way I know how to write Hisao. ;p It took me quite a while to completely place this story... An extended hiatus will do that...
by Puncyclopedia
Sun Jan 03, 2016 12:17 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Benefit of Hindsight (updated 4/16!)
Replies: 175
Views: 45027

Act 2, Chapter 3 - An Unwanted Legacy

Yes, it's been almost six months. It's a long story. Suffice it to say I'm back and planning to update on a more sane schedule. I'll update the first page later today. For now, the long overdue Act II, Chapter III! ------------------------ The last bell for the day rings as I sit down in my chair, e...
by Puncyclopedia
Sun Jul 19, 2015 9:15 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Yamaku Book Club (20210104 Red Fish Blue Fish)
Replies: 1894
Views: 347784

Re: Yamaku Book Club (Meeting Resumed: July—Iwanako)

That's a very strong criticism, one I haven't heard before, and one I can't effectively argue with. I honestly don't know that I would have written those scenes if I were starting this story today—in a sense, I probably could have time-skipped all the way to Scene Six and covered them with a bit of...
by Puncyclopedia
Sun Jul 12, 2015 11:33 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Yamaku Book Club (20210104 Red Fish Blue Fish)
Replies: 1894
Views: 347784

Re: Yamaku Book Club (Meeting Resumed: July—Iwanako)

I'm only through three and four (and was busy most of the week), so much of this is going to focus on the two chapters. They're very well written, but at the same time, I think they defang (or at least sandpaper away some of the sharpness of) scenes that could happen later in the piece to greater ef...
by Puncyclopedia
Wed Jul 08, 2015 2:43 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Benefit of Hindsight (updated 4/16!)
Replies: 175
Views: 45027

Re: The Benefit of Hindsight (updated 7/4!)

Nicely written as always. I've mentioned before that while I don't like Lilly, I'm okay with this Lilly, and this latest chapter perfectly illustrates why. I'd hate to feel self-important for no reason, but I can't help but wonder how much of this chapter was created as a direct result of, or at le...
by Puncyclopedia
Sun Jul 05, 2015 9:31 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Benefit of Hindsight (updated 4/16!)
Replies: 175
Views: 45027

Re: The Benefit of Hindsight (updated 7/4!)

Hoooray feedback! @Sharp-O: Thank you very much for the kind words. Alpaca hit most of the reasons for the collar - there's one other one that will likely become more apparent in time, too, but that time's not quiiiite now. @Alpaca: I think it's safe to call this a Lilly route at this point, yes. Th...
by Puncyclopedia
Sat Jul 04, 2015 7:09 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Benefit of Hindsight (updated 4/16!)
Replies: 175
Views: 45027

Act 2, Chapter 2 - Road Construction

Sometimes, I wonder why the world works in the ways that it does. It's truly mindboggling. If you'd told me seven years ago, for instance, that I would be waiting outside the apartment of my girlfriend's hated rival/cousin to walk with her to work, I would have called you insane, and probably tried ...
by Puncyclopedia
Sat Jul 04, 2015 7:02 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Benefit of Hindsight (updated 4/16!)
Replies: 175
Views: 45027

Re: The Benefit of Hindsight (updated 6/30!)

Thanks for reading, Blank. xD

"Initiative" and "Hisao" are generally not things that always go together, though you may appreciate his behavior in the next chapter a bit more.

Which will be posted rather shortly, as I'm done editing~
by Puncyclopedia
Sat Jul 04, 2015 6:45 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Yamaku Book Club (20210104 Red Fish Blue Fish)
Replies: 1894
Views: 347784

Re: Yamaku Book Club (Meeting Resumed: July—Iwanako)

Hooray, discussion. Some replies to Blank and the Wildecat, which make me feel bad as they're mostly about Hisao and not Iwanako, though Iwanako discussion will get in there. @Wildecat - I've read the social chameleon theory on these forums a handful of times (possibly from you), and I don't particu...
by Puncyclopedia
Sat Jul 04, 2015 8:59 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Yamaku Book Club (20210104 Red Fish Blue Fish)
Replies: 1894
Views: 347784

Re: Yamaku Book Club (Meeting Resumed: July—Iwanako)

With notes written down for how I'd handle writing Iwanako if I ever get around to it (in hopes that I won't be colored too badly by MTtB), I have read the Prologue. FROZEN SOPOR: Very well written, hard for me to comment on because it's obviously meant to be her perspective of the novel's opening s...
by Puncyclopedia
Tue Jun 30, 2015 7:33 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Yamaku Book Club (20210104 Red Fish Blue Fish)
Replies: 1894
Views: 347784

Re: Yamaku Book Club (Meeting Resumed: July—Iwanako)

I'll start with Finality and Something Different , as they're the first two I read. xD I thought Finality was excellent. You say a lot in very few words - it's an efficient piece that doesn't *feel* efficient because of the emotion the piece conveys. I liked the working in of the Fukushima disaster ...
by Puncyclopedia
Tue Jun 30, 2015 7:18 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Benefit of Hindsight (updated 4/16!)
Replies: 175
Views: 45027

Re: The Benefit of Hindsight (updated 6/30!)

First off, Silent's absolutely correct, so I've edited the fic. I had reasons that, I assure you all, made sense to me when I posted it this morning - but now with the chance to think about it more make very little sense at all. Changes made. I appreciate the support re: my post times. I like writin...
by Puncyclopedia
Tue Jun 30, 2015 8:57 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Benefit of Hindsight (updated 4/16!)
Replies: 175
Views: 45027

Act 2, Chapter 1 - Point of View

To reflect popular opinion, dialogue (and only dialogue, not letters or notes and such) occurring in written form will be indicated with < > from here on out. I've updated the first post with an author's note on this as well. ---- There's no alarm to wake me on Sundays, but a week of getting up earl...
by Puncyclopedia
Sat Jun 27, 2015 9:29 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Yamaku Book Club (20210104 Red Fish Blue Fish)
Replies: 1894
Views: 347784

Re: Yamaku Book Club (Iwanako Rising)

You're right. I'd entirely forgotten about that ending - largely, I think, because of just how out of character it does feel, versus the neutral ending, which seems the much more likely negative ending for the two of them. The fact that those moments stand out so glaringly, I think, supports my over...
by Puncyclopedia
Sat Jun 27, 2015 8:45 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Blank Slate - (Updated 12-26) A Christmas Council
Replies: 131
Views: 30374

Re: Firing Blanks - (Updated 6-27) Scrapped Routes

This makes me want to write a Katawa Shoujo-Zero Escape crossover, but I'm pretty sure I'd create a time paradox somehow in the process.

Fun read!