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by brythain
Thu Jun 18, 2015 3:16 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (Double Update 3/14)
Replies: 1140
Views: 572115

Re: Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (Updated 6/17)

I couldn't come up with a name for this chapter until I went to post it. Google was open on my second monitor and I saw how absolutely horrifically perfect it was. :mrgreen: Horrific is the right description, poor guy. Next up: how to distinguish between the varieties--Hisao spends the night worryi...
by brythain
Wed Jun 17, 2015 11:14 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Katawa DLCs
Replies: 290
Views: 85032

Re: Katawa DLCs

Megumeru wrote:Is that a piano wire...?
Not quite... [WIKILINK]
by brythain
Wed Jun 17, 2015 11:12 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Benefit of Hindsight (updated 4/16!)
Replies: 175
Views: 67086

Re: The Benefit of Hindsight (updated 6/17!)

That's a great way to end Act One. Feels very natural, the unnatural bits are explained away, these are still the characters we know, although 'made weak by Time and Fate'. Good job!
by brythain
Wed Jun 17, 2015 12:39 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: The Official KS Headcanon Thread
Replies: 2006
Views: 456153

Re: The Official KS Headcanon Thread

So you expect a then 19 year old guy who hasn't even left the batter's box to be the sober filling for a drunken makeout sandwich which could lead to God know what? A sandwich where not only do you live with the slices, but you've meet both of their boyfriends (one of which who has now been promote...
by brythain
Wed Jun 17, 2015 8:28 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Human Cyborg [OC]
Replies: 7
Views: 3182

Re: The Human Cyborg [OC]

Let's start with a minor problem: The name. Okakura is not a given name but a last name - though I question why he would have a Japanese name at all since his father is clearly not Japanese. His mother might have been, though. He's got a Spanish last name, apparently. That was a little confusing to...
by brythain
Tue Jun 16, 2015 11:03 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: The Official KS Headcanon Thread
Replies: 2006
Views: 456153

Re: The Official KS Headcanon Thread

Yes, this happened to me in my first year of Uni and I also declined. I was living in the same flat as the girls in question and I knew that it would make the rest of the year awkward. Besides, one of the girls was Irish and had a boyfriend called Paddy. You don’t fuck about with an Irishman called...
by brythain
Tue Jun 16, 2015 7:22 am
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Katawa DLCs
Replies: 290
Views: 85032

Re: Katawa DLCs

Munchenhausen wrote:
Negativedarke wrote:The improvised dildo DLC. With this installed you have the option of grabbing a nearby object during any h-scene and using it as a dildo.
"H-Hisao, what are you planning on d-d-doing with that candelabra?"
"Um, I might ask you the same, Hanako, about that concertina wire."
by brythain
Tue Jun 16, 2015 1:18 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Alt Dreams [One-Shots] (#71—'Returns')
Replies: 322
Views: 178246

Alt Dreams [One-Shots] (25—'Leaving') (20150616)

This is partly inspired by thoughts over at the Yamaku Book Club of what an alternate KS might have looked like. Leaving Friday, 6 April 2007 Lilly’s hands deftly manoeuvre the cup beneath the kettle’s spout as she settles back in the tea room. A skilled observer might have noticed Lilly’s nervous ...
by brythain
Mon Jun 15, 2015 11:29 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Yamaku Book Club (20220124 Dish Washing)
Replies: 1945
Views: 573206

Re: Yamaku Book Club (Meeting/Hisao Final Week Approach)

For those new to the Hisao Big Fic (or ' Hisao Nakai: his life and times ') discussion... I would like to introduce our twin curmudgeon pundits, StatLeaty ( http://i.imgur.com/2PQyP2U.png ) and deweldorf WalDewelar ( http://i.imgur.com/kOTWV0i.png ). Cackling coupled curmudgeons can create conspicuo...
by brythain
Mon Jun 15, 2015 10:01 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Yamaku Book Club (20220124 Dish Washing)
Replies: 1945
Views: 573206

Re: Yamaku Book Club (Meeting/Hisao Final Week Approach)

I've actually been trying to remind myself not to obnoxiously monopolize this thread when that time rolls around. http://i.imgur.com/2PQyP2U.png You've actually done well to not-obnoxiously monopolise that character. :) But the general question I suppose I've found myself asking in this part of YBC...
by brythain
Mon Jun 15, 2015 1:50 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Yamaku Book Club (20220124 Dish Washing)
Replies: 1945
Views: 573206

Re: Yamaku Book Club (Meeting/Hisao Final Week Approach)

Blank Mage wrote:
brythain wrote:Next month (we might start a little earlier), it's Iwanako!
At which point we might as well make Leaty the Club President for a month.
I would be glad for that. :D
by brythain
Mon Jun 15, 2015 1:10 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Yamaku Book Club (20220124 Dish Washing)
Replies: 1945
Views: 573206

Yamaku Book Club (Meeting/Hisao Final Week Approach)

So far we've had a look at five Hisaos, and after a lot of research, I think we have about 2-3 more reasonably complete ones to look at.

I'll post those soon.

Next month (we might start a little earlier), it's Iwanako!
by brythain
Mon Jun 15, 2015 1:04 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Yamaku Book Club (20220124 Dish Washing)
Replies: 1945
Views: 573206

Re: Yamaku Book Club (Meeting Continuing 11 June 2015)

Perhaps the lack of "finish" is due to its nature as part of a mosaic. Had I a shred of sense and adequate time, I would have clicked the link and gone on to the story of the gravestone. (Plus, some good advice.) Actually, I had no idea about such conventions because when I first started the mosaic...
by brythain
Sun Jun 14, 2015 10:55 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Yamaku Book Club (20220124 Dish Washing)
Replies: 1945
Views: 573206

Re: Yamaku Book Club (Meeting Continuing 11 June 2015)

Dang, with a few well-chosen broadsides (or very broad asides), Leaty breached my hull and exposed my secret pretensions to novel-writing. Yes, I agree A Walk in the Park could have been longer. I wanted it to be longer. It's just that at the time I wrote it, I wasn't sure I could sustain being that...
by brythain
Sun Jun 14, 2015 8:34 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: The Official KS Headcanon Thread
Replies: 2006
Views: 456153

Re: The Official KS Headcanon Thread

Our headcanon's gone so deep we have headcanon about the headcanon KS's characters have WE MUST GO DEEPER So you think Hanako writes fan-fiction about people writing fan-fiction about her witting fan-fiction? Because theres an off-chance this chain of thought could become confusing. :lol: HERE'S TH...