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by brythain
Wed Aug 26, 2015 8:21 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Fanfiction: Fractures (Completed 07/11/15)
Replies: 148
Views: 47082

Re: Fanfiction: Fractures

You need longer chapters. I keep going 'how nice, how well-written, how in-character... how short. :( '.
by brythain
Tue Aug 25, 2015 1:30 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Shit that Pisses Lilly Off
Replies: 43
Views: 22554

Re: Shit that Pisses Lilly Off

A guy who won't indulge her healthy adolescent sex drive when she knows he wants it.
by brythain
Mon Aug 24, 2015 9:29 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Yamaku Book Club (20220124 Dish Washing)
Replies: 1945
Views: 573205

Comment from the Chair

I love this discussion as much as I loved having Leaty around last month. We're seeing nuts-and-bolts, comparisons, learning points... wonderful!

I'll just throw in a little question here:
What short Hanako fiction do you like most, or has made the greatest impact (good or bad) on you—and why?
by brythain
Sun Aug 23, 2015 8:16 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Yamaku Book Club (20220124 Dish Washing)
Replies: 1945
Views: 573205

More Hanako Readings from the Chair

As a service to discussants new and old, here are links to some of the larger/longer Hanako pieces mentioned so far. More Readings: Hanako's Story by Trivun (18 Aug 2014) The Purest Form of Love by BlackWaltzTheThird (30 Apr 2014) Hanako & Hisao: Road to Tokyo by Hoitash (28 Aug 2013) Mendacium by B...
by brythain
Sun Aug 23, 2015 6:06 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Can You Accept Your Fate? - Saki Pseudo Route (Ch. 8, 15/02)
Replies: 76
Views: 40228

Re: Can You Accept Your Fate? - Saki Pseudo Route (Ch. 4, 8/

It's a fun read so far, but some word choices need to be altered, I think. Like 'diminutives' for 'euphemisms'. Otherwise, good job. :) I was going for "diminutive" as in the second definition here , which is specifically a euphemism that denotes smallness, or otherwise diminishes somethings meanin...
by brythain
Sun Aug 23, 2015 5:32 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Can You Accept Your Fate? - Saki Pseudo Route (Ch. 8, 15/02)
Replies: 76
Views: 40228

Re: Can You Accept Your Fate? - Saki Pseudo Route (Ch. 4, 8/

It's a fun read so far, but some word choices need to be altered, I think. Like 'diminutives' for 'euphemisms'. Otherwise, good job. :)
by brythain
Sat Aug 22, 2015 2:44 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Yamaku Book Club (20220124 Dish Washing)
Replies: 1945
Views: 573205

Comment

Would anyone like to compare Sisterhood with other Hanako works? Or is this the best Hanako of all worlds?
by brythain
Fri Aug 21, 2015 10:43 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Fanfiction: Fractures (Completed 07/11/15)
Replies: 148
Views: 47082

Re: Fanfiction: Fractures

Maybe it's the quiet one with osteoporosis who sits at the back of the class and watches everyone succeed while he thinks he's living a lousy life. Cut Akio some slack, man. His father was a drinker. ... And now my characterisation of Akio totally makes him The Joker. :lol: "Hanako, you wanna know ...
by brythain
Fri Aug 21, 2015 10:27 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Fanfiction: Fractures (Completed 07/11/15)
Replies: 148
Views: 47082

Re: Fanfiction: Fractures

Maybe it's the quiet one with osteoporosis who sits at the back of the class and watches everyone succeed while he thinks he's living a lousy life.
by brythain
Fri Aug 21, 2015 9:49 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Yamaku Book Club (20220124 Dish Washing)
Replies: 1945
Views: 573205

Re: Yamaku Book Club (Meeting Update: Aug/Sep—Hanako)

The first version of Sisterhood was great and I'd highly recommend it. It really feels like a good strong continuation of the game. Where can we get that, these days? :) I thought he left it on the forum and made a new topic for the new version, but I could be wrong. The old thread leads only to th...
by brythain
Fri Aug 21, 2015 9:33 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Yamaku Book Club (20220124 Dish Washing)
Replies: 1945
Views: 573205

Re: Yamaku Book Club (Meeting Update: Aug/Sep—Hanako)

Oddball wrote:The first version of Sisterhood was great and I'd highly recommend it. It really feels like a good strong continuation of the game.[/spoiler]
Where can we get that, these days? :)
by brythain
Fri Aug 21, 2015 12:16 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Yamaku Book Club (20220124 Dish Washing)
Replies: 1945
Views: 573205

Yamaku Book Club (Meeting Notice: Aug/Sep—Hanako)

Discussion on the character, life and times of Mr Mutou is of course ongoing. However, for the rest of August and the month of September, we'll be discussing the first girl that Hisao focusses on in Yamaku... Yes, the one who is hiding behind a veil of hair... Miss Hanako Ikezawa. The 'big text' for...
by brythain
Fri Aug 21, 2015 2:36 am
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Could you?...In real life?
Replies: 186
Views: 80229

Re: Could you?...In real life?

Another part everybody leaves out when they say they wouldn't mess up like Hisao did, is that they wouldn't necessarily successes where Hisao did either. Messing up and being socially awkward are one of the reasons (at least some of) the girls are interested in him in the first place. Another take ...
by brythain
Fri Aug 21, 2015 1:53 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Alt Dreams [One-Shots] (#71—'Returns')
Replies: 322
Views: 178246

Alt Dreams [One-Shots] (36—'Cabin Fever') (20150821)

This is a tongue-in-cheek but nonetheless sincere tribute to our colleague dewelar on the conclusion of his masterpiece, Developments . Cabin Fever Hanako arrived at the tea-room only a few minutes after lunch, as usual. What was unusual for her was arriving alone—these days Hisao normally accompan...
by brythain
Fri Aug 21, 2015 12:37 am
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Could you?...In real life?
Replies: 186
Views: 80229

Re: Could you?...In real life?

Another part everybody leaves out when they say they wouldn't mess up like Hisao did, is that they wouldn't necessarily successes where Hisao did either. Messing up and being socially awkward are one of the reasons (at least some of) the girls are interested in him in the first place. Another take ...