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If you or other people can provide constructive criticism and tips without coming across as condescending (your not, at least not yet) I would appreciate it. I truly do not intend to condescend. I think I have a few problems with reading your material. Here are the two main ones: 1) You don't use c...

Well, thinking about protection the first time won't do them much good, if they already forget about it the second time... Also... A H-scene already? Really? Mirage, please, please do your usual editing job. It's painful to read. :) I thought I might get some comments like this, lol. Oh well. Im no...

Mirage_GSM wrote:Well, thinking about protection the first time won't do them much good, if they already forget about it the second time...
Also... A H-scene already? Really?

Mirage, please, please do your usual editing job. It's painful to read.

Not a Lillybro myself, but it seems kind of sad that more people aren't wishing Lils a happy birthday...

So... HAPPY BIRTHDAY, Lilly Satou!

Any child of Kenji's would certainly be interesting. That is, of course, assuming that he remains the same as he gets older. For all we know, he finally gets a dose of reality and becomes normal....or maybe he's the one who's normal and we're the ones who can't see the bigger picture? Glad you enjo...

The distance between the town and city are fictionalised. During development, and without real regard for the actual geography of Sendai Castle, we decided to make three distinct game locations: Yamaku campus (at the top of the hill), the unnamed local town (at the foot of the hill, within walking ...

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Leaty wrote:As a celebrated Iwanako historian, I've actually suspected that about her name for a long time. It's basically the name "Yvana" with a child radical.

.... that makes a lot of sense honestly.

Maybe she's a foreign heiress and her gaijin name is Ivanka...

Trufflez wrote:I tried.

So did I, once... [LINK] — Hisao's daughter and Kenji's son.

Hey, man, you need to separate the Naomi/Hisao/Hanako bits more clearly. I had to re-read lines a bit just to get that. Otherwise, a great job of starting a kind of KS2!

All you have to do is add more perspectives and you'll have a tapestry fic...

That's sweet. All the nice stuff and not a hint of sad stuff anywhere! Yes, it is a little corny, but it isn't corny -and- incompetent. I liked it.

That's not population density, that's rate of evacuees per resident. It correlates well. See this map and think of the population density. Also the terms "suburb" or "city-ward" don't appear in the VN even once. When they go shopping they don't go "downtown"; they go to the city. It's pretty unambi...

They always walk down to the town below the hill. They always take the bus when they go to the city for shopping or to visit Meiko. The city and the town are two distinct locations in the VN. It's something we paid a lot of attention to in the translation. They are described differently. For exampl...

Well, that location does not really fit what we see in the VN. There the town below Yamaku and the city are two seperate locations that are not in walking distance of each other. So if the locations in the VN are based on this it's likely that the town at the foot of the hill was later inserted and...

From Cpl Crud: [Easter Egg Edition] (There's also a mildly annotated Google map.) Sendai Castle. Somehow, in the process of deciding where to base Yamaku High, we decided upon Sendai. I think we thought that having it in a major metropolitan area would be difficult, but it would need to be near a se...

Do you know what sunlight -is- ? It's February in 2016 as I write this, a broad swathe of light falling into the room behind me. I know that this light is composed from an orchestra of photons. The harmony of that bright music is acted on by everything else that has a voice along the path of the sun...