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That's a lovely realistic Hanako. Great job.

freddy753 wrote:

Please forgive me, sempai

senpai*

Those are the same thing. [LINK]

Umber wrote:I'm actually really excited to see Munch's work when he finishes because he could take this three ways to Monday off of whatever he wants to go off of, since, well, it's Munch.

Yes, we could all end up biting off more than we could Munch.

And there was one other who was her friend for a long time, but he was a broken soul, so they were never more than that.

You kind of nailed it hard on the head with the sentences. I like to think of it as just a part of my style, though sometimes I really do have to try and force myself writing smaller. Short sentences feel naked to me I suppose is the reasoning. It also helps that my thoughts flow in such long strea...

I like the tone and the rhythm of the writing so far. You seem like a musical sort; what I think might help is if you consider not just putting a comma in wherever there should be a 'rest' in each sentence, but possibly using semi-colons or breaking up some of the sentences. Some of your sentences g...

"That's unusual, Miss Miura," I say. For once, I've not been caught by surprise. When they visit me, they often do so on their birthdays. But it is unusual. She's wearing a black silk yukata with pale pink and silver sakura blossoms on it. It's Tanabata Festival dress, and this is six months away. S...

So, felt sorta wrong to not drop in here and say hi on Valentine's Day. Don't want to derail this though, as general as it is, so anybody doing anything relevant to what one of the girls might especially like for the occasion? Hi Spunky! Welcome back, even if only just dropping in. Am working on a ...

This fragment was extracted from Disk 1 and is labelled Fragment 01-39. It contains three sections, only one intact and displayed below. The other two seem to be about blueberries with salmon and wasabi prawns with pineapple, but not enough has been recovered yet. To: Self Re: Raspberry & Yellowtai...

I think dewelar's done an excellent summing-up as well as (in the Developments thread as well as in this one) provided a lot of insight into the mind of the author. For me, what's notable about Developments is its ensemble cast — everyone with extras. While even dewelar admits a little of it looks a...

Kenichi: Mistaking Identify (T -17) Chapter 6—A Day With The Neighbour Saturday, 28th April 2007 Three days left in this month of April, then comes May, and then I’m gone. If I were a character in a visual novel, what should I do to ensure maximum chance of success? That’s what I’m thinking about. ...

So, felt sorta wrong to not drop in here and say hi on Valentine's Day. Don't want to derail this though, as general as it is, so anybody doing anything relevant to what one of the girls might especially like for the occasion? Hi Spunky! Welcome back, even if only just dropping in. Am working on a ...

Editor's Note : Dear readers, as I have hinted earlier, it was not originally the case that my god-daughter's words were ever to have seen the light of day. Grief has filled her for a long time, and joy is sparse within her. Yet, she offered her thoughts freely, with bits of crumpled paper and worn...

It was her tutor actually. She turned those other confessions down purely for him despite knowing confessing to him was out of the question due to the age difference and teacher/student relationship. Wait what? Can you confirm this my friend? Lilly Route, Act 4: Lilly and Hisao are sharing confiden...

Next up: Emi Ibarazaki—Fastest Thing On No Legs

But before that, we'll allow dewelar to get his last licks in.