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Potato wrote:

Uri Comradev wrote:None of the above, Asexual male.

...Being asexual has nothing to do with gender.

I have a hidden a-gender.

Actually, Secret Garden's Dreamcatcher album from 2001 (I think) is one of my favourites when going cross-cultural on KS. It has appropriate moods for every part of KS.

Potato wrote:I (Don't) See What You Did There: On Lilly's route, over the course of a week, enter the classroom and nonchalantly kiss a different girl (who isn't Lilly) each day before sitting down like nothing's unusual about it.

It's especially invisible because Lilly's in a different classroom.

Apologies. Don't know how this confidential material got into the main plot line.

Rin: Tetrad

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This is the second part of Rin's arc in 'After the Dream', my post-Lilly-neutral-end mosaic. If you should ever want to know how Sae and Nomiya's story ends, you can find that diversion here instead. Rin 2: Indignation (T -12) Who is this person 'Rin'? Her name is everywhere on the boards downstair...

For what it's worth, it's just Sae, not Saé. Yes. I don't know why I have problems with that vowel combination. I hear it in my head and I can't get it on paper without some kind of accent mark. Sigh. Just imagine it's a "y". Actually it's more like Saè. Gah. Never mind, I've used the straight 'e',...

bhtooefr wrote:For what it's worth, it's just Sae, not Saé.

Yes. I don't know why I have problems with that vowel combination. I hear it in my head and I can't get it on paper without some kind of accent mark. Sigh.

Ah, and so Rin's arc begins. Looking forward to what you have in store. One small stylistic thing I'd like to comment on, if I may: When was the last time you had a f—ing meal? See, I'm not sure what Miki is actually saying when you write her dialogue as such. It comes off one of two ways: either s...

I catch sight of the mat on the floor where she probably slept last night if I was on the bed and I think that perhaps this time I have new friends but I do not know if they want to be my friends or not. Having Rin's scatterbrained internal monologue come through in the writing style is fine, but t...

Saw a picture once of a man with an imaginary hand. He was using it to smoke while typing. She never asked for this. I've been enjoying the series thus far, thanks for the work. I like the scattered timeline, but especially the wide-ranging... veracity? of the narrators in use. The wider spectrum o...

Rin's arc is currently in play as of 31 Mar 2014 (IRL), for the information of anyone interested in following the progress of this mosaic. The index will continue to be updated appropriately.

This is the first part of Rin's arc in my post-Lilly-neutral-end mosaic, ' After the Dream '. There is a sort of 'prequel' to it here , but you don't need to read that. It has a companion in Miki's arc , which you can read after Rin's if you wish There's also a short side-story set in 2012-2014, ' ...

Xaredian wrote:I see more of a determination to show the one you love, you love them. Just calling them up to tell them you love them, doesn't have the same effect (And, in some cases, it does the opposite).

Showing a girl you'd rather die than not be with her forever—classic trope.

That's an important aspect to this series in my opinion: Tale of Manliness is a slice of life vignette series at it's core, which I think works perfectly for both Danja's sense of humor and his overall writing style. I think that's true. Perhaps that's why Helbereth suggested reading only the first...

Thank you for your work. Always a great experience to receive creative work from other members of the KS community!