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- Mon May 12, 2014 1:00 am
- Forum: Public Discussion
- Topic: What if the 6 girls had attended Hisao's high school?
- Replies: 22
- Views: 6264
Re: What if the 6 girls had attended Hisao's high school?
But also the least likely to function in a normal high school. It's perfectly possible her caretakers didn't even take treatability into account when offering to enroll her at Yamaku. They simply felt that a normal high school would damage her further. I've always wondered where she went in between...
- Mon May 12, 2014 12:57 am
- Forum: Public Discussion
- Topic: Hisao's Hair
- Replies: 14
- Views: 4773
- Sun May 11, 2014 11:50 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: After the Dream—Rika/Mutou/Akira (Updated 20201109)
- Replies: 107
- Views: 90124
AtD—Akira's Arc (Part 3 up 20140512)
This is the third part of Akira Satou's arc from my post-Lilly-neutral-end mosaic, ' After the Dream '. In that continuity, it takes place in 2018. It intersects Mutou's arc here and part of Emi's story here . Caveat: Mutou's account of events and Akira's are parallel but have discrepancies. But on...
- Sun May 11, 2014 10:09 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Yamaku Book Club (20220124 Dish Washing)
- Replies: 1945
- Views: 573193
Re: Yamaku Book Club (Now Reading: After the Dream: Rin's St
All that said, I'm happy that you weren't too infuriated by it all. If I ever write more of this stuff, any improvements will be due to the honest comments of people like you. Wait, wait, you misunderstood. I said it would be infuriating! Rin has extenuating circumstances. More importantly, the sto...
- Sun May 11, 2014 9:36 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Yamaku Book Club (20220124 Dish Washing)
- Replies: 1945
- Views: 573193
Re: Yamaku Book Club (Now Reading: After the Dream: Rin's St
Unfortunately, I don't have time to write my usual 4 paragraph long comment, so I'll have to summarize. With bullet points! -I found it pretty difficult to discern what's going on at several key points, which would normally be pretty aggravating. Rin's storytelling is so disjointed and tangential t...
- Sun May 11, 2014 8:39 pm
- Forum: Public Discussion
- Topic: What if the 6 girls had attended Hisao's high school?
- Replies: 22
- Views: 6264
Re: What if the 6 girls had attended Hisao's high school?
Hanako needs regular council sessions and I'm pretty sure if my public school teachers saw me run out of class when we started group work they'd make a huge deal out of it just to embarrass students so hanako would probably die of a panic attack or go insane. With Shizune in charge of the council… ...
- Sun May 11, 2014 8:36 pm
- Forum: Public Discussion
- Topic: If you could be anyone in katawa shoujo, who would it be?
- Replies: 160
- Views: 43075
Re: If you could be anyone in katawa shoujo, who would it be
I'm already Mutou. Next up, Nurse. He gets to see… errm, never mind. Off to get a cold shower.Munchenhausen wrote:Mutou for sure!
Get to see hot crippled chicks all day and have a TARDIS?
Fucking bonus, mate!
- Sun May 11, 2014 8:33 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Endorphin Rush - An Emilogue (UPDATED 5/10/14)
- Replies: 100
- Views: 25645
Re: Endorphin Rush - An Emilogue (UPDATED 5/10/14)
I think Shizune is the most psychologically interesting There's your problem. Anyone who thinks Shuzune's arc was interesting, or any positive adjective for that matter, is insane and needs immediate care from a psychiatric doctor IMO. :lol: Naw, I do find Shizune's arc interesting as text, because...
- Sun May 11, 2014 11:03 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Endorphin Rush - An Emilogue (UPDATED 5/10/14)
- Replies: 100
- Views: 25645
Re: Endorphin Rush - An Emilogue (UPDATED 5/10/14)
Yours is way too interesting.dewelar wrote:Hey! Are you saying my Emi's not interesting?
- Sun May 11, 2014 11:02 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Lustre: A Misaki Kawana Route [Update 11/05/2014]
- Replies: 30
- Views: 13246
Re: Lustre: A Misaki Kawana Route [Update 11/05/2014]
Extrapolating from the photos of "Yamaku"'s main building, and some comments Hisao makes in the VN, there's five floors, but they're zero-indexed - the entryway is on the first floor, but the first floor is not the ground level. So, the highest numbered floor would be four. (I believe the cafeteria...
- Sun May 11, 2014 9:45 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: After the Dream—Rin's Arc/Miki's Arc (Complete)
- Replies: 115
- Views: 69533
Interlude (20140511)
A fire rises in the dark cool space of my air-conditioned writing room. It's beautiful. She's beautiful. Red-haired Rin? No kidding about that red; her shoulder-length hair is a colour that Tiziano Vecelli would have died for if he were not already dead these four centuries and more. Tonight, she is...
- Sun May 11, 2014 9:21 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Lustre: A Misaki Kawana Route [Update 11/05/2014]
- Replies: 30
- Views: 13246
Re: Lustre: A Misaki Kawana Route [Update 11/05/2014]
That was a very enjoyable read! Feels like it needs a tad more characterisation, but is fine for a first chapter. Minor stuff: 1) 3.3 mol of magnesium hydroxide is almost 200g of the stuff. That's… a lot. 2) Hisao notices three pairs of eyes, but not who the third pair belongs to... 3) Why is there ...
- Sun May 11, 2014 6:55 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: After the Dream—Hanako's Arc (Complete)
- Replies: 74
- Views: 56407
Re: After the Dream—Hanako's Arc (Complete)
You know, I'm still not sure what to make of this author persona in all this but I do kinda like it. Mind you, that's partially because overall your 'After the Dream' world feels a bit surreal anyways with how closely intertwined all the Katawa Shoujo characters' lives are, so it doesn't bother me ...
- Sun May 11, 2014 4:54 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: After the Dream—Hanako's Arc (Complete)
- Replies: 74
- Views: 56407
Interlude (20140511)
The presence that sits at the edge of my desk, just out of the circle of my light, is the one that haunts me the most. She knows it, and she takes pains not to turn the right side of her young face to me unguarded. It's not that she can't use the lovely, unblemished face of her old age; she prefers ...
- Sun May 11, 2014 4:38 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: After the Dream—Rika/Mutou/Akira (Updated 20201109)
- Replies: 107
- Views: 90124
Re: AtD—Mutou's Arc (Part 4 up 20140507)
There’s a rented mini-orchestra on the other side of the grassy space, and it’s playing some Amarfi softly to set the mood—interesting, since I’ve never heard an orchestral version before. Belatedly, ahahaha that's a great inclusion. I really enjoy Mutou's voice, as it were. This whole puzzle of a ...