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by brythain
Mon May 12, 2014 1:00 am
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: What if the 6 girls had attended Hisao's high school?
Replies: 22
Views: 6264

Re: What if the 6 girls had attended Hisao's high school?

But also the least likely to function in a normal high school. It's perfectly possible her caretakers didn't even take treatability into account when offering to enroll her at Yamaku. They simply felt that a normal high school would damage her further. I've always wondered where she went in between...
by brythain
Mon May 12, 2014 12:57 am
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Hisao's Hair
Replies: 14
Views: 4773

Re: Hisao's Hair

by brythain
Sun May 11, 2014 11:50 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: After the Dream—Rika/Mutou/Akira (Updated 20201109)
Replies: 107
Views: 90124

AtD—Akira's Arc (Part 3 up 20140512)

This is the third part of Akira Satou's arc from my post-Lilly-neutral-end mosaic, ' After the Dream '. In that continuity, it takes place in 2018. It intersects Mutou's arc here and part of Emi's story here . Caveat: Mutou's account of events and Akira's are parallel but have discrepancies. But on...
by brythain
Sun May 11, 2014 10:09 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Yamaku Book Club (20220124 Dish Washing)
Replies: 1945
Views: 573193

Re: Yamaku Book Club (Now Reading: After the Dream: Rin's St

All that said, I'm happy that you weren't too infuriated by it all. If I ever write more of this stuff, any improvements will be due to the honest comments of people like you. Wait, wait, you misunderstood. I said it would be infuriating! Rin has extenuating circumstances. More importantly, the sto...
by brythain
Sun May 11, 2014 9:36 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Yamaku Book Club (20220124 Dish Washing)
Replies: 1945
Views: 573193

Re: Yamaku Book Club (Now Reading: After the Dream: Rin's St

Unfortunately, I don't have time to write my usual 4 paragraph long comment, so I'll have to summarize. With bullet points! -I found it pretty difficult to discern what's going on at several key points, which would normally be pretty aggravating. Rin's storytelling is so disjointed and tangential t...
by brythain
Sun May 11, 2014 8:39 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: What if the 6 girls had attended Hisao's high school?
Replies: 22
Views: 6264

Re: What if the 6 girls had attended Hisao's high school?

Hanako needs regular council sessions and I'm pretty sure if my public school teachers saw me run out of class when we started group work they'd make a huge deal out of it just to embarrass students so hanako would probably die of a panic attack or go insane. With Shizune in charge of the council… ...
by brythain
Sun May 11, 2014 8:36 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: If you could be anyone in katawa shoujo, who would it be?
Replies: 160
Views: 43075

Re: If you could be anyone in katawa shoujo, who would it be

Munchenhausen wrote:Mutou for sure!

Get to see hot crippled chicks all day and have a TARDIS?
Fucking bonus, mate!
I'm already Mutou. Next up, Nurse. He gets to see… errm, never mind. Off to get a cold shower.
by brythain
Sun May 11, 2014 8:33 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Endorphin Rush - An Emilogue (UPDATED 5/10/14)
Replies: 100
Views: 25645

Re: Endorphin Rush - An Emilogue (UPDATED 5/10/14)

I think Shizune is the most psychologically interesting There's your problem. Anyone who thinks Shuzune's arc was interesting, or any positive adjective for that matter, is insane and needs immediate care from a psychiatric doctor IMO. :lol: Naw, I do find Shizune's arc interesting as text, because...
by brythain
Sun May 11, 2014 11:03 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Endorphin Rush - An Emilogue (UPDATED 5/10/14)
Replies: 100
Views: 25645

Re: Endorphin Rush - An Emilogue (UPDATED 5/10/14)

dewelar wrote:Hey! Are you saying my Emi's not interesting :wink:?
Yours is way too interesting. :D
by brythain
Sun May 11, 2014 11:02 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Lustre: A Misaki Kawana Route [Update 11/05/2014]
Replies: 30
Views: 13246

Re: Lustre: A Misaki Kawana Route [Update 11/05/2014]

Extrapolating from the photos of "Yamaku"'s main building, and some comments Hisao makes in the VN, there's five floors, but they're zero-indexed - the entryway is on the first floor, but the first floor is not the ground level. So, the highest numbered floor would be four. (I believe the cafeteria...
by brythain
Sun May 11, 2014 9:45 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: After the Dream—Rin's Arc/Miki's Arc (Complete)
Replies: 115
Views: 69533

Interlude (20140511)

A fire rises in the dark cool space of my air-conditioned writing room. It's beautiful. She's beautiful. Red-haired Rin? No kidding about that red; her shoulder-length hair is a colour that Tiziano Vecelli would have died for if he were not already dead these four centuries and more. Tonight, she is...
by brythain
Sun May 11, 2014 9:21 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Lustre: A Misaki Kawana Route [Update 11/05/2014]
Replies: 30
Views: 13246

Re: Lustre: A Misaki Kawana Route [Update 11/05/2014]

That was a very enjoyable read! Feels like it needs a tad more characterisation, but is fine for a first chapter. Minor stuff: 1) 3.3 mol of magnesium hydroxide is almost 200g of the stuff. That's… a lot. 2) Hisao notices three pairs of eyes, but not who the third pair belongs to... 3) Why is there ...
by brythain
Sun May 11, 2014 6:55 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: After the Dream—Hanako's Arc (Complete)
Replies: 74
Views: 56407

Re: After the Dream—Hanako's Arc (Complete)

You know, I'm still not sure what to make of this author persona in all this but I do kinda like it. Mind you, that's partially because overall your 'After the Dream' world feels a bit surreal anyways with how closely intertwined all the Katawa Shoujo characters' lives are, so it doesn't bother me ...
by brythain
Sun May 11, 2014 4:54 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: After the Dream—Hanako's Arc (Complete)
Replies: 74
Views: 56407

Interlude (20140511)

The presence that sits at the edge of my desk, just out of the circle of my light, is the one that haunts me the most. She knows it, and she takes pains not to turn the right side of her young face to me unguarded. It's not that she can't use the lovely, unblemished face of her old age; she prefers ...
by brythain
Sun May 11, 2014 4:38 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: After the Dream—Rika/Mutou/Akira (Updated 20201109)
Replies: 107
Views: 90124

Re: AtD—Mutou's Arc (Part 4 up 20140507)

There’s a rented mini-orchestra on the other side of the grassy space, and it’s playing some Amarfi softly to set the mood—interesting, since I’ve never heard an orchestral version before. Belatedly, ahahaha that's a great inclusion. I really enjoy Mutou's voice, as it were. This whole puzzle of a ...