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by brythain
Tue Jul 02, 2019 10:02 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Yamaku Book Club (20191111 Two Old & Colourful Pieces)
Replies: 1806
Views: 250631

Re: Yamaku Book Club (20190701 Saki meets Rika)

I like the interaction and the curious personalities displayed, but something about this one has always... bugged me.
by brythain
Wed Jun 05, 2019 4:25 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: As Long As I Have You (A Lilly x Hisao Fanfiction)
Replies: 8
Views: 1437

Re: As Long As I Have You (A Lilly x Hisao Fanfiction)

Constructive criticism incoming!

Put the text over here. Some long-time readers prefer the text on the forum itself rather than have anything to do with some other domain. :)
by brythain
Tue Jun 04, 2019 11:22 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Ritual Beneath The Stars [One Shot]
Replies: 4
Views: 466

Re: The Ritual Beneath The Stars [One Shot]

Aha, a brand-new take on Aoi and Keiko. Fascinating!
by brythain
Sun Jun 02, 2019 11:00 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Shiina 2
Replies: 11
Views: 875

Re: Shiina 2

There's a lot of emotional content there, usefully filling a gap in the KS timeline. It's good.

However, I thought it was heading yandere-wise. I thought you were going to title it 'The Shiinaing 2'. ;)
by brythain
Sun Jun 02, 2019 2:37 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Crafty's One-Shots (Oct 26th, 2019: Someone Part 2)
Replies: 76
Views: 5946

Re: Crafty's One-Shots (Jun 1st, 2019: Brief Exchanges)

Okay, Crafty, you win. It's the most ridiculous and insane and entertaining tragicomic one-shot in the forums. It's even more topless, or over the top, than Hoitash's stuff.
by brythain
Fri May 31, 2019 9:54 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Alt Dreams [One-Shots] (#61—'Paralysis')
Replies: 283
Views: 80397

Re: Alt Dreams [One-Shots] (#58—'Compromise')

Shizune x Kenji? Bizarre pairings are supposed to be my thing! No but really it's interesting to see them together. Now I'm just imagining how awkward the sex must be...... They're both very focussed individuals with a thing for fast food. I'm quite sure that they're also very tactile and into clos...
by brythain
Fri May 31, 2019 6:17 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Yamaku Book Club (20191111 Two Old & Colourful Pieces)
Replies: 1806
Views: 250631

Re: Yamaku Book Club (Overdrive)

Last time we took a look at a Lilly story. This time for a change of pace, we take a look at a Lilly story that has Emi in it. There's also a very rapey not very likable Hisao (as opposed to a likable rapist?) Oh I remember this one with the creepy Hisao molesting Lilly. It's okay as a text. It's g...
by brythain
Thu May 30, 2019 6:06 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Alt Dreams [One-Shots] (#61—'Paralysis')
Replies: 283
Views: 80397

Alt Dreams [One-Shots] (#58—'Compromise')

This is a sequel to #56—Comfort and is the product of a similar writing challenge. Still not sorry. Compromise As kingfishers catch fire, dragonflies draw flame; As tumbled over rim in roundy wells Stones ring; like each tucked string tells, each hung bell's Bow swung finds tongue to fling out broa...
by brythain
Wed May 29, 2019 2:55 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: After the Dream—Emi's Arc/Akiko's Story (Complete)
Replies: 77
Views: 27317

Interlude (20190529)—What Sunlight Is (Redux)

Do you know what sunlight -is- ? It's February in 2016 as I write this, a broad swathe of light falling into the room behind me. I know that this light is composed from an orchestra of photons. The harmony of that bright music is acted on by everything else that has a voice along the path of the su...
by brythain
Tue May 28, 2019 11:24 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: After the Dream—Hanako's Arc (Complete)
Replies: 74
Views: 25915

Interlude (20190527) 'Our Lady Of Flowers' Redux

"Book Six of Sakura ," she sighs, "will be a long, long journey. At least we can all do it together." "It is true, what you said," I tell her. She sits in the corner of my room, her deep blue and teal gown flowing around her like an armour from the sea. In the half-light, it is hard to tell if this...
by brythain
Mon May 27, 2019 9:25 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Sakura—The Kenji Saga (Book 6 complete 20190527)
Replies: 183
Views: 68704

Sakura—The Kenji Saga (Book 6 ends 20190527)

Editor's Note: This document seems to be a resumption of the main narrative from the records of the General. I have taken the liberty of verifying and editing the text based on corroboration with other sources. (N, Osaka.) Kenji 6: Broken Pieces of a Silent War (2060-64) “You were always a polite y...
by brythain
Wed Apr 17, 2019 12:03 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Alt Dreams [One-Shots] (#61—'Paralysis')
Replies: 283
Views: 80397

Re: Alt Dreams [One-Shots] (#57—'Unwritten Rules')

dewelar wrote:
Tue Apr 16, 2019 9:12 pm
Sure. Of course. I check one of your threads for the first time in ages, and this...THIS is what I find! I...j...qxklrbt...

(descends utterly into angrish for several minutes)

...GAH!

:lol:
I am honoured, senpai! :D
by brythain
Mon Apr 15, 2019 10:15 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Alt Dreams [One-Shots] (#61—'Paralysis')
Replies: 283
Views: 80397

Re: Alt Dreams [One-Shots] (#57—'Unwritten Rules')

Silentcook wrote:
Mon Apr 15, 2019 3:40 am
AAARGH. Sorry Corner, you. Two EONS. :evil:
Very sorry, boss. It happens, as you've noticed, once in a rare while. 8)
Feurox wrote:
Mon Apr 15, 2019 5:49 am
Brythain. That was the best written piece of trash I’ve ever read. I hate love you. :lol: What a way to start my Monday haha
You're very welcome. I aim to please. :)
by brythain
Mon Apr 15, 2019 12:03 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Alt Dreams [One-Shots] (#61—'Paralysis')
Replies: 283
Views: 80397

Alt Dreams [One-Shots] (#57—'Unwritten Rules')

Some things never change. Even in 2007, Hisao might have suffered from such a problem. Unwritten Rules “Haha, you need to calm down, young man, and tell me everything. As Chief Nurse, your wellbeing—and the wellbeing of everyone else here, of course—is my greatest concern!” Hisao looked hunted. His...
by brythain
Sun Apr 14, 2019 7:46 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Unwritten Rules
Replies: 7
Views: 648

Re: Unwritten Rules

Good title, promising beginning... oh, that wasn't the story! :D