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Ikuno's would become, "Can you be my sweetheart?" And I just realized that Ritsu's would be better as "Can you reach the light at the end of the tunnel?" to remove sight (and therefore implications of blindness, seeing how Lilly's question was phrased) from it. Now, Misaki's, there, any implication...

We can add Rikabro's "Can you open your heart?" for Rika and Scissorlips's "Can you live your dreams?" for Suzu, I suppose.

Does Saki have one? (Besides the non-question quote that appears in Fluffandcrunch's famous fanfic.)

Naomi: "Can you find the perfect fit?" Ritsu: "Is there light at the end of the tunnel?" http://blakesnow.com/wp-content/uploads/sites/2/2013/10/url-1.gif Although the format for all the canon ones is "Can you ...?", but still... for the Ritsu one, "Can you see the light at the end of the tunnel?" ...

How about questions for each one? Molly: "Can you walk in my shoes?" Hmmm. Interesting. Natsume: "Can you see me with different eyes?" Naomi: "Can you find the perfect fit?" Miki: "What is the sound of one hand clapping?" Ritsu: "Is there light at the end of the tunnel?" Ikuno: "Will you be my swee...

Natsume: to share someone else's pain—living with a grouchy person who has a warm heart Naomi: to live peacefully in chaos—learning when a person needs control Misaki: to bend but not break—gaining enough trust to be allowed to carry her gear Miki: you can always lend a hand—doing stuff without maki...

There's a reason Lilly is last in my preference list. Different strokes for different folks I guess. The biggest thing that just kills it for me is that pretty much nobody ever moves on. It's quite rare for someone to end up marrying a high school sweetheart, but for all the rest of the girls to al...

nemz wrote:Read some of this... 'mosaic'? It's an interesting idea structure-wise, but the plot itself is a total letdown. Sorry, but this is soap-opera levels of melodrama and I just can't get into it.

What?! You don't like melodrama with your KS fanfic??

This is the second part of Natsume's arc in my post-Lilly-neutral-end mosaic, ' After the Dream '. Natsume 2: Algebra (T -17) Many things ended for me after my time at Yamaku came to an end. Some came back eventually; most did not. It was the end of high school, after all; people leave the city, th...

A few problems, although they're interesting characters. 1) This is the KS Fanfiction forum, so do try to get them into Yamaku quickly. :) 2) Yamaku normally doesn't take people with psychiatric disorders as their primary concern. 3) Some minor typos e.g. 'ruse', not 'rouse'. 4) Generally, we like t...

The sunlight is pouring into my writing room, this warm summer's day. It's good because my joints feel a lot less stiff, but not so good because it's making me feel a little sleepy despite my morning coffee. "I know exactly how you feel, colleague." "Natsume! I was just thinking about you." She's si...

Oh, something else I just noticed... I track her finger. With eyes functioning at radically different powers, it’s a little difficult, but I get there. That's been the case since birth (or at least being a toddler) for her, given her particular condition, right? My left eye tests at 20/15, my right...

I thought that Rika's characterisation was strong, making her a sad, and (to me at least) not very likeable person. Given the very sparse amount of 1Apr information given, and my own research into her medical condition, I was driven by Rikabro's writing to ponder what else could have been or might h...

I think this is the best one so far.

Lilly might enjoy Papa Sangre or one of many professionally voiced-over text adventures—like this one. There are a (very) few other 'video' games that are blind-friendly. The whole concept tends to go out of the window, not just the box.

I like how you consider this experimentation, yet not Hanako's death, nor the whole Akira/Mutou and Rika x Mutou plots. :lol: Interesting that you're adding a 5th class (the building's certainly big enough, and even has an unused 4th floor), though, as well as alluding to a backstory between Naomi,...