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Hmm, that's a good point. I suppose you could wave that away by saying that either Shizune doesn't know about it (which would make it odd that Kenji does, but...) doesn't want to make an even bigger scene in front of Hisao about it (which is sort of out of character,) or is blatantly not allowed to...

That's purely a POV thing. Clearly if you say who that classmate is, the argument is exposed. I don't really see how mentioning that Hisao is that classmate invalidates the argument at all. The point is still that when putting the routes side by side, Hanako starts improving sooner in her own route...

Actually Hanako improves better/faster when Hisao is on Lilly's route. Not when you compare the two routes side by side at the same moment in time. Hanako's route a few days after her birthday: Has gone into the city of her own a few days earlier, started a romantic relationship with a classmate an...

the implication that Hanako improved even more in Lilly's arc while Hisao was somebody else's problem. We don't know that, though. Hanako's own route ends before Lilly ever even gets back from Scotland. Had the story continued, Hanako might have improved better/faster than she does on Lilly's route...

Atario wrote:Doesn't "giving a _____-job" imply one is imparting sexual pleasure to another with one's _____(s)? So… Hisao giving a nub-job… hmm…

Makes one wonder what you think an odd-job labourer is.

I think it's far more obvious that Kenji x Hisao is the premature ejaculation route. It's obvious. They go up on the roof, share fluids, and at the climax of the moment, Hisao reaches both the highest and lowest points of his existence at Yamaku. And of course, we all know what the last soul-crunchi...

KeiichiO wrote:

someguy1294 wrote:And nub-jobs from Hisao.

I am confused, and intrigued.

Rin has nubs. Or armbits, if you like that sort of thing.

I usually prefer discovery. *snip* Whether the readers like it or not, I'm not sure, but I have some fun with being unpredictable. That's for sure. :) On my end, I do like writing unpredictability that grows out logically from what we already know. Life is like that—people do things for reasons, ev...

The thing that sucks the most about the situation is how good of a friend Misha really is. She's a sweetheart and she deserves to find love, but the thing about that is that you don't always get what you want from exactly who you want it, and she's had to learn that the hard way. Someone should wri...

KeiichiO wrote:

Potato wrote:I think Kenji needed a good end. A real manly picnic.

I actually agree. Kenji deserves some happiness, and someone to keep his mind off of feminist propaganda.

Yes! I wish more people agreed with us.

SpunkySix wrote:Okay, so on a lighter note, it turns out skip mode is kind of hilarious. Feels speed ahead!

It feels like a tale told by Misha.

The thing is, your mileage can vary. I felt like Mean Time to Breakdown was a really opaque title for my story, and the role reversal between Iwanako and Hisao was intended to be a twist, but based on reader responses, everybody who clicked on the link immediately knew what it was going to be about...

You're bringing me into the dark, that's what you're doing. But when you submit to authority, the power of the author, that is what happens at times. I can feel the pain coming. I can feel the waves of hopelessness, but also the inmost will that fights against them. I will not succumb to that which ...

The thing that sucks the most about the situation is how good of a friend Misha really is. She's a sweetheart and she deserves to find love, but the thing about that is that you don't always get what you want from exactly who you want it, and she's had to learn that the hard way. Someone should wri...

I feel like a mix is best. A catchy title that grabs the reader's attention and gives a broad idea of the subject, but doesn't give away the details or full direction, allowing development and surprises that go beyond the name of the story. I'm a fan of this approach. For example, 'Developments' by...