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Oddball wrote: ↑

Fri Jan 12, 2018 10:02 pm

Kinda sucks if some people aren't getting their stories. Maybe we should ask for anyone whop wants to volunteer to finish them off.

I'd volunteer, if that's acceptable.

Ha, he dreamt it all!

Thanks for being so quick and effective in response!

That's a very Shizune story, much appreciated. In the middle, that sapphire 'S'? I could only think about how much it was worth!

That reads beautifully. Still trying to figure out whose perspective, though...

Certainly interesting and original. I agree that the meta stuff doesn't fit though. I'm also not quite sure what the point of it was. Natsume also strikes me as an incredibly cold individual. Hmm, yeah, I'm a bit rusty (possibly arthritic) from lack of creative endeavour. Natsume's a stiff personal...

I enjoyed this story, neatly dovetailing Yamaku Hisao/Lilly with the four named friends from his earlier life... but where's my Kenji?!

Thanks for writing this; it may inspire me to keep writing! (And Mirage's edits are valuable too. )

300BillionDegrees wrote:Rin & Emi - one is missing its front wheels, the other is missing the rear wheels

Lilly: has headlamps but no fog lights and claims it has a healthy four-wheel drive.

That was one of the interpretations I had in mind, but then - why would "truth" be a gift that Natsume had to give to Naomi instead of vice versa? - how did Natsume learn what "the others" think of her? That line felt more like Naomi was adressing the ghost of Hisao... It's a very creepy effect, a ...

emmjay wrote:You name two cars in a row after KS characters.

And everyone would REALLY love to know which two those are so that we can all fight over what your next car should be named!

Lovely. Miki and domestic bliss are always enjoyable when mixed.

Leaty wrote:Goodness, it's been much too long since I read a Brythain ficlet. It's like coming home to my abuela's soup.

Also, wait. Was this Hisao/Natsume?

Thank you, ma'am! Yes indeed it was Hisao/Natsume, a pairing I occasionally mull over.

Probably not quite what your victim was expecting as a christmas gift :-) Also I thought the meta parts didn't fit the story all that well. As for the end, I'm still not quite sure what is supposed to be happening there. I've several ways of interpreting the last scene but neither of them makes com...

Kibaro wrote:Have a nice day and keep up the good work if you're still doing fics

Quite a while has passed. Natsume glares at me.

"You need to work on true stories, not fake ones."

I think I should take that advice.

Kenji 6: Silent Pieces of a Broken War (2052a—Koji) Begin upload. This is Koji Setou. I am late, and I am in trouble. This year is a terrible year for scholars, and a worse year for field agents. And since I am through little fault of my own both, it is a very bad year indeed. “Target confirmed. Co...