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Track team.png Maybe that's why that green-haired girl looks so flustered. Not because she's behind, but because she's the only one who's noticed that they're missing somebody. Have you seen Oddball's experiment where he got us to write from the viewpoints of people like the green-haired girl? It's...

Happy 29th birthday, Lilly Satou!

This is the one and only post Nevice made on the forum... whoever they are. I think Nevice must have been Francophone, based on various clues in the text (e.g. elision of some definite articles). That in turn leads to a rather compressed narrative in which the word 'the' is often missing. That give...

Knight_in_fire wrote: ↑

Thu Feb 01, 2018 9:42 am

Well, and whose character or behavior from KS does she have?

Shizune Hakamichi. And yes, she now earns about three times what I do, while being feared and respected.

Knight_in_fire wrote: ↑

Thu Feb 01, 2018 7:29 am

Both in physical appearance and/or behavior? When yes, what did you do with her further?

Dated her for six years, then married her—almost 25 years now.

Bravo! That is truly excellent, the kind of 'I-wish-I-had-written-it-myself' excellently funny thing. I have never seen this kind of Miki/Emi interaction before. I have never wanted it so bad. Argh: on Saturday, Miki steps out onto the GRAVEL, not the grave. I was very confused for a short while. Ot...

Honest to god, I did like an half an hour of research to see if that detail would make sense. BUT IT DOES. SO I'M FINE. Fanfiction writers' OCD kicks in again! Don't worry - it happens to all of us :lol: (You should see all the notes I made when writing 'Tripping') I remember with pride that after ...

I like the fact that Lilly's eyebrows 'cock up'.

Rest of story also cool.

Too bad it remained the only comment in that thread. Maybe people were too depressed to comment? I think it was a good vignette, but needed editing to make it tighter. The point about vignettes is that they're short and have no spare fat. This one was like a scene from a longer piece (which in a se...

I'm happy. I'm even happy to re-read stories if you feel that's warranted. I'll just keep updating the discussion list, unless you want to take over the thread entirely, which is how I ended up inheriting it. But I'll be around to handle the index updates etc if you want that.

Does Suriko know that Summer's Clover has been turned into a sort of VN?

Excellent. If such a thing were to happen, you'd have... the KS2 everyone is hoping for.

Mirage_GSM wrote: ↑

Mon Jan 15, 2018 11:53 am

Oh and it seems Aura did kill off Niji somewhere in the meantime

And it was all because of -this- story's thread!

This last update in this topic was July so I'm taking over now. Consider this a mutiny. Thank God someone made that decision! :D We will now all read ... Some Lilly Scene by Lulz a very VERY early story back from the days when there wasn't so much "fanfic" as there was "story pitches." So... go rea...

This fragment was extracted from Disk 1 and was part of Fragment 01-39, but now labelled separately as 01-40. It is the second of three contiguous fragments. Formerly thought to be about blueberries with salmon, it is actually something different. Existence of this item, as with the rest, has been ...