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It's nice to see another Rika pseudo-route attempted. It flows well so far. I have a few complaints, though, because the fluency of your writing masks some problems... :) 1. Rika has reddish irises in her eyes, not blue. You can see this from the art provided in the AFD original post . 2. You keep o...

Hi Mirage,

I've managed to respond to the QuietlySomething's prompt, in the piece called 'Festival'. I think it gets slotted in before 'Cripple Your Enthusiasm' in your list in the first post.

Thanks, and enjoy!

"It's been a while, author-san." My head jerks up from where it had come to rest, next to a stale, dried-out coffee mug. Two dissimilar eyes gaze at me, almost unreadable, touched at the edges with humour as dry as my evaporated coffee. "Er, yes. I've been busy! Sorry!" "In my long experience—" I lo...

I really enjoyed this! And thanks for going out of your way to write for the prompt; I thought it was a shame that it seemed it would never see the light of day. You added a lot of little touches that I thought added atmosphere really well- the way Shizune's speech is all broken up from Lilly's per...

This one's also written for the 2017 Secret Santa project initiated by ProfAllister. Victim: QuietlySomething Prompt: My prompt is a fic about Shizune and Lilly from their early Student Council days, trying to work together to organize a project or festival (or something to that effect). Festival L...

StilesLong wrote: ↑

Wed Feb 21, 2018 12:59 am

Can we have, moving forward, some sort of notice that says, "hey guys, this is pre-whatever canon"?

I'll try to do that. But I think pre-2012 you can make allowances, post-2012 or so there is no excuse for breaking canon. What do you think?

Now, the first thing that got my attention was the author - famous for Closure . I remember Closure too, and it was an excellent read. Just enough pathos and raw emotion and human interest to sink a ship in tears. But it came three years or so after this one, and so is a lot more polished. This one...

Kenji 6: A War in Pieces (2052b—Akiko) As I write this, it is still late 2064 and I am living for the time being with ‘Aunty’ Misha, my late father’s choice of guardian for my brother and me. We have just had our usual ice-cream, something that she loves and which makes her a little plump—but only ...

Mirage_GSM wrote: ↑

Wed Feb 14, 2018 5:50 am

I'd start with the "secret half-brother" Emi questions the existence of and have him be Mutou.

Oh, thank the VN-gods that I didn't think of going that way!

And that might not have been too bad if the characters had been KS characters, but since they are basically OCs who coincidentally share names with KS characters, it is. It seems to be the author's intention, and that auctorial intention is fairly well-established by the range of the author's writi...

Oddball wrote: ↑

Sat Feb 10, 2018 2:59 pm

It's somewhat hard to picture Lilly nearly being 30.

It's a good mental exercise. I've managed to get her up into her 80s, remember?

When all you do is state a contrary claim without evidence, all I have to do to rebut it is say the opposite. No, that just leaves two unsupported claims. For example: 'Pink unicorns exist' vs 'pink unicorns don't exist'. Neither rebuts the other, since there is evidence for neither. Weak posts all...

Has the OP ever actually played the route? The direct text within it discredits the claims made. And without the route text there is no basis for the discussion to begin with. None of the text in it discredits the claims made. For every text, it is possible to make claims not directly addressed by ...

Oddball wrote: ↑

Thu Feb 08, 2018 7:43 am

I guess it's just easier being offended than actually thinking.

... and really? the worst thing you've ever read? Hisao is a predator who attacked her? Are you people trying to make yourself sound as ridiculous as possible?

Ha, I guess we can chalk all that up to inexperience.

Downix wrote: ↑

Thu Feb 08, 2018 3:51 am

Mirage_GSM wrote: ↑

Wed Feb 07, 2018 11:16 am

Downix wrote: ↑

Wed Feb 07, 2018 2:39 am

Don't worry, that's not because of you. It's just because Monopoly is a shitty game

Them's fighting words!!

I think all your quotes are in the wrong order.