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by brythain
Thu Oct 23, 2014 7:56 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Before Yamaku - the events leading up to KS
Replies: 8
Views: 4724

Re: Before Yamaku - the events leading up to KS

Iwanako here sounds awfully much like Hanako. Otherwise, it's a nice little piece which could have been a lot larger and perhaps more complete, as Mirage_GSM says.
by brythain
Thu Oct 23, 2014 6:57 am
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Random KS Discussion
Replies: 3060
Views: 642491

Re: Random KS Discussion

Ooh. Look what competition just popped up over at Fuwanovel. [ LINK ] Now, this could be fun... Bry, you gonna enter? Still coping with student exam season. Might be possible with inspiration, but I doubt it considering the time limit... unless you're allowed to submit older pre-existing works (it ...
by brythain
Thu Oct 23, 2014 5:45 am
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Random KS Discussion
Replies: 3060
Views: 642491

Re: Random KS Discussion

Ooh. Look what competition just popped up over at Fuwanovel.
by brythain
Wed Oct 22, 2014 3:18 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
Replies: 1559
Views: 565951

Re: Developments (Post-Lilly Neutral End) - Ch.52 posted 10/

With more coffee inside, I'm very happy for Emi. Also, delighted at Meiko having a nice chunk of back-story filled in, although it's a sad one. And wait, is that really Nurse's name? :) The thing is, there are a few more chapters left before the end, according to you... and I cannot help but feel I ...
by brythain
Wed Oct 22, 2014 3:14 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Observations - Oneshot
Replies: 14
Views: 7784

Re: Observations - Oneshot

Sorry to necro this thread more than a year later, but I was mulling a similar idea and some helpful people pointed me here. Aww, excellently done! I'll have to find something else to do now. :) Out of curiosity, what were you planning on doing? I'm intrigued. I've written a complete Mutou epilogue...
by brythain
Tue Oct 21, 2014 9:00 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Waitaminute... Misha HAS to be bisexual.
Replies: 220
Views: 60676

Re: Waitaminute... Misha HAS to be bisexual.

The context was unclear. I had assumed that ogorhan meant that Misha was already over the rejection before Shizune's route. If "eventually" refers to the end of the route or some unspecified point of time afterward, then yes, I am sure she came to terms with it. That's reasonably implicit in the tw...
by brythain
Tue Oct 21, 2014 7:22 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
Replies: 1559
Views: 565951

Re: Developments (Post-Lilly Neutral End) - Ch.52 posted 10/

So THAT is why we've been having so much trouble with Emi Ibarazaki. Her mother was a luscious lush-ess. What back-story. So drama. And Goro too. Dang, I should've had my morning coffee before I started reading. OK, off to breakfast and back again for a re-read. It must be wonderful stuff, I have a ...
by brythain
Tue Oct 21, 2014 3:38 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: After The Dream—MAIN INDEX (and secret Hisao arc)
Replies: 165
Views: 148451

Re: After the Dream—Main Index ('Finality' up 20141016)

Well, here are a few scattershot comments, in lieu of the review that I should really write someday: - I liked the chances that the "non-main characters" (clunky term, but how else do I put it?) had to shine. Particularly Kenji. The kid deserved a break after all he'd been through. (Also, I found i...
by brythain
Mon Oct 20, 2014 9:55 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (Double Update 3/14)
Replies: 1140
Views: 572118

Re: Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (Updated 10/17)

That version of Hisao, I don't see being able to handle or roll with flirtatious situations being thrown at him, like the kind Emi does in the actual game (or Saki does in my writing) Once I realized that and dropped the pretense and treated Hisao like an OC on the same level as Saki, the writing f...
by brythain
Mon Oct 20, 2014 9:17 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: After The Dream—MAIN INDEX (and secret Hisao arc)
Replies: 165
Views: 148451

Re: After the Dream—Main Index ('Finality' up 20141016)

From some random person to the author: I think you're good, and your works rather impressive. You touched my feels. And I see what you did there. Aww, you're no random person. You're the person who wrote 'Shiina' and 'KS-Evangelion (2012)', which I liked. And a lot of odd little pieces too, althoug...
by brythain
Sun Oct 19, 2014 9:50 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: After The Dream—MAIN INDEX (and secret Hisao arc)
Replies: 165
Views: 148451

Re: After the Dream—Main Index ('Finality' up 20141016)

Just wanted to say that I loved this story. I'll have more substantial comments up here in a while, but my initial reaction is simply "Wow". Started last evening, couldn't put it down. I've added it to the "Recommended Fanfics" at TV Tropes for the time being. From a reader to an author, thank you....
by brythain
Sun Oct 19, 2014 9:44 am
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: The Official KS Headcanon Thread
Replies: 2006
Views: 456153

Re: The Official KS Headcanon Thread

Hisao was interested in the Inter Milan soccer team as a foreign fan for a while (which is something that might well count as a disability in and of itself :mrgreen:), long enough to procure an "official" soccer shirt at least. That is now part of his gym/running clothing. :3 Oh dear. Later when I ...
by brythain
Sun Oct 19, 2014 8:16 am
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Random KS Discussion
Replies: 3060
Views: 642491

Re: Random KS Discussion

Ohhhhh I remember that one. It's actually really creepy. Don't they have anything better to do than bet chump change on the love lives of their charges? :lol: Apparently teachers do this quite often :P It's pretty much accepted that examiners do this sort of thing to avoid getting bored. That's how...
by brythain
Sun Oct 19, 2014 8:14 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Observations - Oneshot
Replies: 14
Views: 7784

Re: Observations - Oneshot

Glad you enjoyed it. I do aim to please and I am happy that this piece in particular was so well received. Sorry to necro this thread more than a year later, but I was mulling a similar idea and some helpful people pointed me here. Aww, excellently done! I'll have to find something else to do now. :)
by brythain
Sun Oct 19, 2014 6:01 am
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: The Official KS Headcanon Thread
Replies: 2006
Views: 456153

Re: The Official KS Headcanon Thread

OKAY! MOVING ON! I've recently started thinking Meiko (and by extension Emi) has some foreign blood in her. Not as much as Lilly, but enough to give her and her daughter hair colors that aren't common among the Japanese. Of course, Emi spends enough time outdoors that maybe hers is sun-bleached to ...