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by brythain
Sun May 10, 2015 9:28 am
Forum: Fan Works
Topic: A Canvas of Stars - a flash fiction story about Rin in space
Replies: 3
Views: 4415

Re: A Canvas of Stars - a flash fiction story about Rin in s

ACTUALLY, you know what the idea reminds me of? It reminds me of 'Palinurus', the short VN from Watercress Studios that just came out for NaNoReNo.
by brythain
Sun May 10, 2015 9:27 am
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Random KS Discussion
Replies: 3060
Views: 642487

Re: Random KS Discussion

Is that so...? Kenji, get the tranquillisers. We've found the feminist leader's husband. Time to bring him in... Thats why you write so much fan fiction, it’s to keep us distracted while the feminists continue their world domination plan! =O Oh no, it's because I have to reveal all their plans with...
by brythain
Sun May 10, 2015 8:47 am
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Random KS Discussion
Replies: 3060
Views: 642487

Re: Random KS Discussion

Unless Brythain's SO IS Shizune, and he is Hisao. Then it is official that HisaoxShizune is canon route :lol: You guys sometimes come awfully close to the truth. Awfully. Or awesomely. Is that so...? Kenji, get the tranquillisers. We've found the feminist leader's husband. Time to bring him in... K...
by brythain
Sun May 10, 2015 8:29 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: On the Other Side of Shattered Glass
Replies: 17
Views: 6348

Re: On the Other Side of Shattered Glass

I wouldn't call Hisao a completely unreasonable arsehole, though he certainly was in this scene. Hisao demonstrates time and time again that he does actually give a damn about Rin and the other characters he interacts with. He also does strike me as normally being quite patient. However, I think he...
by brythain
Sun May 10, 2015 6:52 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: On the Other Side of Shattered Glass
Replies: 17
Views: 6348

Re: On the Other Side of Shattered Glass

Well, it -is- a depressing one-shot as it stands. It's a good psychological perspective on that scene, and of course most of the time it seems as if it leads to a dire fate. The writing is certainly above average, although the sample size is limited. :)
by brythain
Sun May 10, 2015 6:51 am
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Random KS Discussion
Replies: 3060
Views: 642487

Re: Random KS Discussion

Megumeru wrote:
HipsterJoe wrote:
brythain wrote: Shizune got her work done.
Two questions. You refer to your SO as Shizune? And do you do so to her face?
Unless Brythain's SO IS Shizune, and he is Hisao.

Then it is official that HisaoxShizune is canon route :lol:
You guys sometimes come awfully close to the truth. Awfully. Or awesomely.
by brythain
Sun May 10, 2015 3:39 am
Forum: Fan Works
Topic: Blooper Reel
Replies: 1327
Views: 456730

Re: Blooper Reel

emmjay wrote:I like where that first one is going... (Also, the expressions are perfect.)
As for the second one: What the hell brand of modeling glue does he use? I could use glue that strong.
Superglue sticks flesh to hilt-wrapping very well.
by brythain
Sat May 09, 2015 2:47 am
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Random KS Discussion
Replies: 3060
Views: 642487

Re: Random KS Discussion

Or the cheese has finally fully slipped off his cracker. Not quite. Actually, I found myself eating one of [these] at 4.30 am after working for the Man at ungodly hours. With black coffee, which is really good even at that haven of capitalist factory food. A lot of stuff went down throughout the ni...
by brythain
Fri May 08, 2015 11:39 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Alt Dreams [One-Shots] (#71—'Returns')
Replies: 322
Views: 178246

Re: Alt Dreams [One-Shots] (22—'Less Taken') (20150504)

Maybe they set up a detective agency called 'Mr & Mrs S' or something. I wish I got this reference. Kenji arc, maybe? The surname 'Satou' is roughly equivalent in generic popularity to 'Smith' in English. If they were assassins instead, they'd be like [this] . Fortunately, I prefer detectives inste...
by brythain
Fri May 08, 2015 11:07 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Signing - an OC story
Replies: 26
Views: 9516

Re: Signing - an OC story

Please take another fifteen seconds to find a list of Japanese given names and do something about "Azazel" In Japanese it would probably come across as 'Azazeru'. As Silentcook mentioned earlier, do a bit of research, break up your paragraphs so they're easier to read, etc. Respecting the reader al...
by brythain
Fri May 08, 2015 10:52 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Ask!
Replies: 4980
Views: 1482614

Re: Ask!

Razoredge wrote:I don't know if this question was asked, but....

When Hisao enters Yamaku? Which month I mean ^^ Roughly.
We calculated it must be Monday June 4, 2007.
by brythain
Fri May 08, 2015 1:05 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Random KS Discussion
Replies: 3060
Views: 642487

Re: Random KS Discussion

Right now, I'm sitting in a hospital. I was dragged here by Shizune because she needs help providing support for a police case.

I've had to resort to some unusual methods in order to obtain certain resources. This is insane. I could write a whole new story arc.
by brythain
Fri May 08, 2015 2:30 am
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Random KS Discussion
Replies: 3060
Views: 642487

Re: Random KS Discussion

Rhodri wrote:No doubts that Shizune is loving the BBC's coverage of the UK General Election.
Lilly's blue eyes are sparkling. However, Scotland may indeed soon be a completely different country politically.
by brythain
Thu May 07, 2015 2:24 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Kenji's Secret Files (upd 20220525 'RedJack')
Replies: 26
Views: 13945

01-17 Mint Jelly

This fragment was extracted from Disk 1 and is labelled Fragment 01-17. Success with Disk 1 took much longer than success with Disk 3, hence the order of extraction. Apparently, Disk 1 was about food. See below. To: Self Re: Mint Jelly I wake up and I can still taste it. First you order a Margharit...
by brythain
Wed May 06, 2015 11:34 pm
Forum: Fan Art
Topic: GiftRaptor's Fan Art
Replies: 47
Views: 28060

Re: GiftRaptor's Fan Art

I love that Shizune: she actually seems pleasant, thoughtful. The rest are nice too, and I wish I'd seen a Lilly with as much work as went into the rest. Thanks!