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by Hotkey
Sat Feb 08, 2014 1:36 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Overdrive (Lilly)
Replies: 29
Views: 8771

Re: Overdrive (Lilly)

It must be ten minutes I've been standing here now. I know I told Yuuko I just needed the lavatory, but I feel awkward about walking out there in front of Emi and making a spectacle of myself. Eventually, even my years of experience of sitting still and being well-behaved are tested to their very li...
by Hotkey
Sat Feb 08, 2014 1:36 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Overdrive (Lilly)
Replies: 29
Views: 8771

Re: Overdrive (Lilly)

Chapter 9 – PoV: Lilly "Will you be okay here, Lilly?" "Yes, thank you, Hanako." "Alright… See y-you later." Hanako removes her arm from my shoulder and leaves me outside Hisao's door, upon which I knock. I hear a chair slide back on a carpet, just like the ones in my room. What are obviously a pai...
by Hotkey
Sat Feb 08, 2014 1:36 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Overdrive (Lilly)
Replies: 29
Views: 8771

Re: Overdrive (Lilly)

Ow... There's a USB stick poking me in the back of the neck. "It's lunchtime, Hisao. Wake up." I mumble a response. "I'm...not hungry...Rit...su. I think I'll..." I yawn. "...stay here." "Suit yourself." My head in my arms on my desk, I hear a voice in the distance. "He looks so~ comfortable!" It ge...
by Hotkey
Sat Feb 08, 2014 1:35 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Overdrive (Lilly)
Replies: 29
Views: 8771

Re: Overdrive (Lilly)

Chapter 8 – PoV: Hisao The last few days have been quite possibly the most awkward of my entire life. Avoiding Emi has been both exhausting and an exercise in sneaking around the back of the school and through unpopular hallways to get to and from class. Today is no different. I leave my room nearl...
by Hotkey
Sat Feb 08, 2014 1:35 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Overdrive (Lilly)
Replies: 29
Views: 8771

Re: Overdrive (Lilly)

Chapter 7 – PoV: Lilly We listen to the language tape narrate another sentence into our ears, both of us memorizing the words; Hisao ready to repeat them, and I ready to correct him. It's becoming less and less often that Hisao makes mistakes with his English, an impressive feat considering that th...
by Hotkey
Sat Feb 08, 2014 1:35 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Overdrive (Lilly)
Replies: 29
Views: 8771

Re: Overdrive (Lilly)

Chapter 6 – PoV: Hisao After my date with Lilly, I hit the books in preparation for my upcoming meeting with the Yamaku Science club, aka Mutou, followed by an evening of being yelled at by a now wheelchair-bound Emi. After Lilly told me about her limping, I made her see the nurse, who promptly put...
by Hotkey
Sat Feb 08, 2014 1:34 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Overdrive (Lilly)
Replies: 29
Views: 8771

Re: Overdrive (Lilly)

Chapter 5 – PoV: Lilly Hisao's behaviour yesterday still has me on edge. I'm heading down to the Shanghai for my rendezvous with him, when I hear light footsteps and two distinct high pitched voices approaching from the north east. They're getting closer. Although both the girls have a strange irre...
by Hotkey
Sat Feb 08, 2014 1:34 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Overdrive (Lilly)
Replies: 29
Views: 8771

Re: Overdrive (Lilly)

Chapter 4 – PoV: Hisao I've got butterflies in my stomach. My emotions are so conflicted; it makes me feel terrible. I can't get my mind off Lilly, and I'm seeing her again today. This time will be different. I'm going to make it more than a lesson. She sits with that familiar uptight, perfect post...
by Hotkey
Sat Feb 08, 2014 1:34 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Overdrive (Lilly)
Replies: 29
Views: 8771

Re: Overdrive (Lilly)

Chapter 3 – PoV: Lilly It's five o'clock the next day, which means it's time for Hisao's second English lesson with me. Emi's still busy studying, or so she claims, for her upcoming tests. I reach to the far end of my desk, and grab the bundle of cables. I suspect it will forever be a mystery to me...
by Hotkey
Sat Feb 08, 2014 1:33 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Overdrive (Lilly)
Replies: 29
Views: 8771

Re: Overdrive (Lilly)

Chapter 2 – PoV: Hisao Only three days later I sit in Lilly's room for my first English lesson. I offered to skip it because of her jet lag, but she rather intimidatingly insisted nothing would get in her way. Her overseas visit ended much more prematurely than we all expected. Something's really u...
by Hotkey
Sat Feb 08, 2014 1:33 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Overdrive (Lilly)
Replies: 29
Views: 8771

Re: Overdrive (Lilly)

Chapter 1 – PoV: Lilly "Okay, on the count of three, we both say our results." "One... Two... Three!" "..." "Thirty-two!" With the exception of Emi, we all chuckle lightly and shuffle around. "Ah! Evil! Evil, evil, evil, evil!" "You said it, not me. Still, the fact that you managed an even lower sc...
by Hotkey
Sat Feb 08, 2014 1:33 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Overdrive (Lilly)
Replies: 29
Views: 8771

Overdrive (Lilly)

Overdrive (Lilly) Well, well, well...! I only intended to hit-and-run with one story, but after I received such great advice (and came up with another, IMO, interesting story idea) I've stolen another Range Rover and jammed it through the nearest jewellery shop without anti-ram raid bollards in fro...
by Hotkey
Sun Jan 05, 2014 9:44 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: I Won't Be Back Tonight
Replies: 19
Views: 5477

Re: I Won't Be Back Tonight

In all, the "jelly belly" was the only thing that I even saw as a reason for the hit - and not really a good one. In an intact relationship such a comment might at worst warrant a playful punch When you put it that way, it does seem pretty odd. "...the love of my life has returned from another hard...
by Hotkey
Sat Jan 04, 2014 9:28 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: I Won't Be Back Tonight
Replies: 19
Views: 5477

Re: I Won't Be Back Tonight

Well, the story doesn't really fit after either of Shizune's endings, so I assumed this was using the "alternative Misha route." Hello! That is correct. This was written as an epilogue to a theoretical Misha route, such as ProfAllister's excellent For Want Of A Nail . I didn't want to explicitly me...
by Hotkey
Sat Jan 04, 2014 9:26 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: I Won't Be Back Tonight
Replies: 19
Views: 5477

Re: I Won't Be Back Tonight

Sorry for the delay everyone. I was too scared to open the thread and read the responses, and then there were two power cuts. Interesting story, though there were a few things that puzzled me. Holy macaroni, it's you. While writing I did some research of real estate prices and houses in Japan, along...