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by Hotkey
Tue Mar 18, 2014 7:55 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Confession Letter (Hanako)
Replies: 9
Views: 2399

Re: Confession Letter (Hanako)

What a nice piece. The ending makes me sad.
by Hotkey
Mon Mar 17, 2014 7:44 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: After the Dream—Hanako's Arc (Complete)
Replies: 74
Views: 26163

Re: After the Dream—Hanako's Arc (Part 1 up 20130317)

Hot darn. Been looking forward to this. I'm enjoying your Hanako narrator.

If you stutter someone's name, should you capitalize the first letter of the stutters? I'm not sure myself, so I'm happy to be informed on the matter, but somehow it seems weird reading "L-lilly" and "H-hisao"!
by Hotkey
Sun Mar 09, 2014 11:04 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: After the Dream—Emi's Arc/Akiko's Story (Complete)
Replies: 77
Views: 27509

Re: After the Dream—Emi's Arc (Part 2 up 20140309)

Loving this build-up. It's gonna hurt so much when...

Your Meiko is most enjoyable, too. I'm always interested in writer's portrayals of her.
by Hotkey
Wed Mar 05, 2014 2:06 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: After the Dream—Lilly's Arc/'Testament' (Complete)
Replies: 109
Views: 39019

Re: After the Dream (PostLilly NeutralEnd) Lilly6 up 2014030

While you take a well-earned break, may I ask for a complete list of character arcs?

So far we've had Shizune and Lilly. Hanako and Emi are still to come. Apparently you have a Misha one saved for last? Looking forward to that. Does Rin have an arc? I'm quite curious about her dissapearance.
by Hotkey
Wed Mar 05, 2014 8:29 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: After the Dream—Lilly's Arc/'Testament' (Complete)
Replies: 109
Views: 39019

Re: After the Dream (PostLilly NeutralEnd) Lilly6 up 2014030

Most enjoyable chapters.

Hideaki and Hanako? Did not see that one coming. Kinda cute! Wait...make that...very cute ^_^!
by Hotkey
Tue Mar 04, 2014 10:39 am
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Hanako's Broken Heart Club
Replies: 4856
Views: 396367

Re: Hanako's Broken Heart Club

Hi Everyone, Something very significant happened to me last night. I’ve known about this thread for a while, but have never had anything to say or talk about before. Mid last year I discovered KS, and a few months after that I started reading fanfiction. The stories were nice, I enjoyed them - even ...
by Hotkey
Sun Mar 02, 2014 11:20 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: After the Dream—Shizune/Hideaki's Arcs (Complete)
Replies: 87
Views: 35363

Re: After the Dream (PostLilly NeutralEnd) Shizune6 up 20140

brythain wrote:It ain't over yet… :)
Yep, I understand we've got a whole host of characters and their respective vignettes to come!

If they're as good as these ones, we're in for a treat (I even enjoyed the Jigoro bit, and I never enjoy scenes with him in them), but I hope they're not all sad ^_^.
by Hotkey
Fri Feb 28, 2014 12:41 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: After the Dream—Shizune/Hideaki's Arcs (Complete)
Replies: 87
Views: 35363

Re: After the Dream (PostLilly NeutralEnd) Shizune4 up 20140

It seems my reward for complimenting you is to be run over with the 18 wheels of feels in the very next chapter. Somehow, I feel a distinctly conflicted sense of both justice and injustice.
by Hotkey
Fri Feb 28, 2014 2:59 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: After the Dream—Shizune/Hideaki's Arcs (Complete)
Replies: 87
Views: 35363

Re: After the Dream (PostLilly NeutralEnd) Shizune3 up 20140

Your writing is very good, I feel. The story is interesting so far, too.

I kind of agree with Helbereth, though. It's so good that I find it hard to grasp the context. You've mentioned this is due to Shizune's PoV and the fragmented/mosaic style of the story, so I'll keep reading.
by Hotkey
Sun Feb 23, 2014 5:27 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: I want to make a Psuedo-Route
Replies: 35
Views: 5049

Re: I want to make a Psuedo-Route

On the contents page for the Suzu route, below the chapters you'll see several one-off stories in the theme of the pseudo-route, but not directly part of the route's timeline. Perhaps write a couple of these for your route idea? You'll get to try out your skills by publishing smaller stories for us ...
by Hotkey
Fri Feb 14, 2014 6:40 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Lustre: A Misaki Kawana Route [Update 11/05/2014]
Replies: 30
Views: 7963

Re: Lustre: A Misaki Kawana Route [Started 14/02/2014]

Yes! Yes! Yes! I always thought she looked cuteinteresting in the 3-3 dev photo! Finally someone is writing a story about her! Can't wait, can't wait!
by Hotkey
Fri Feb 14, 2014 10:11 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Forever Dreaming
Replies: 25
Views: 3785

Re: Forever Dreaming

I had the same reservations others mentioned at first, but your positive attitude is winning me over! The second chapter is a noticeable improvement on the previous one, but there are still some issues with 'I' or the beginning of sentences not being capitalised. In general, I think you'll be fine, ...
by Hotkey
Sun Feb 09, 2014 10:37 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Overdrive (Lilly)
Replies: 29
Views: 8794

Re: Overdrive (Lilly)

Dang, I didn't realize I'd actually stepped over the line with Chapter 4! Mirage warned me about it, but as usual I didn't listen, and he turned out to be correct again. I thought women just played hard-to-get with that "No, please don't!" routine. Alright, I guess 'no' means 'no'. A valuable lesson...
by Hotkey
Sat Feb 08, 2014 1:37 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Overdrive (Lilly)
Replies: 29
Views: 8794

Re: Overdrive (Lilly)

Chapter 11 – PoV: Lilly I'm on my way to the Shanghai. How appropriate. Even more appropriate since it was Emi Ibarazaki who asked me to come here, considering last time. If what happened then occurs again, she - and possibly I - are going to be on the receiving end of whatever the coffee shop equi...
by Hotkey
Sat Feb 08, 2014 1:37 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Overdrive (Lilly)
Replies: 29
Views: 8794

Re: Overdrive (Lilly)

Chapter 10 – PoV: Hisao A weekend of avoiding the roof, the nurse and the track. A weekend of wondering if the woman I think I love thinks she loves me. I almost don't want her to come back for fear that she says 'no'. I called Lilly this morning. Pointless. She was still on the train. It was nice ...