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by Hotkey
Mon May 12, 2014 5:33 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Lustre: A Misaki Kawana Route [Update 11/05/2014]
Replies: 30
Views: 7957

Re: Lustre - Chapter One: Hisao Nakai; journalist.

as rest of the space remains empty, Quick fix. I am enjoying this interpretation of Naomi and Natsume. Same here. I'm enjoying N&N's company more than Misaki's at the moment, but I'm sure that will soon change. You know, it wasn't until some weeks (or months) after the first chapter was posted that...
by Hotkey
Fri May 09, 2014 5:11 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Endorphin Rush - An Emilogue (UPDATED 5/10/14)
Replies: 100
Views: 12214

Re: Endorphin Rush - An Emilogue (UPDATED 5/8/14)

I knew this seemed familiar... but I was in a hurry this morning and didn't reread the thread. Well, if a story contains the same mistakes I'm bound to find the same mistakes again, am I not? Yeah, absolutely! I declare you innocent of any wrongdoing. :) I wonder if Johnny reposted his old version ...
by Hotkey
Fri May 09, 2014 3:45 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Endorphin Rush - An Emilogue (UPDATED 5/10/14)
Replies: 100
Views: 12214

Re: Endorphin Rush - An Emilogue (UPDATED 5/8/14)

Dad gives me a noogie and whispers to me. “You did good, son.” This bit really cracks me up. "You dun' gud there, ma boy." *Noogie* *Noogie* *Noogie* It seems really... un-Japanese?! :) Also, I have the strangest sense of deja-vu: Okay, first of all, try to use double spacing to make your text more...
by Hotkey
Sun Apr 27, 2014 11:44 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Irreversible
Replies: 20
Views: 2993

Re: Irreversible

That really was interesting and insightful. It's especially neat to read 'first time' interpretations, real or not, before players' views become moulded by the community.
d2r wrote:strand strong
Quick fix.
by Hotkey
Sat Apr 26, 2014 5:49 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: After the Dream—Misha's Arc/Na-chan's Story (#4 up 20170121)
Replies: 43
Views: 19594

Re: After the Dream—Misha's Arc (Complete)

Yep. Very nice! Ow... my heart. I think it needs a rest. In particular, it was really interesting throughout the arc how Misha told past events as though she were there, but with her older/mature PoV narrative (it even threw me off once or twice, and I had to wait a little while to make sense of it!).
by Hotkey
Thu Apr 24, 2014 8:18 am
Forum: Fan Works
Topic: Post and discuss your writing software set-up!
Replies: 22
Views: 4343

Post and discuss your writing software set-up!

Post and discuss your writing software set-up! This is a Silentcook-approved thread (in concept only, of course), inspired by this post . Meaning - this is a dickie-bow, cigars and port affair. People are welcome to suggest and critic software, but do not proselytize operating systems. Not that I n...
by Hotkey
Sun Apr 20, 2014 1:00 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Steel [We're on the third chapter now!]
Replies: 34
Views: 4451

Re: Steel

All right, well I gave it a read. The characters are kind of interesting, but the lack of polish is really jarring. I don't see anything particularly wrong with your English, but it just reads as though you haven't ever read it through after writing it. There are lots of missing words or dodgy spell...
by Hotkey
Thu Apr 17, 2014 7:09 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: After the Dream—Misha's Arc/Na-chan's Story (#4 up 20170121)
Replies: 43
Views: 19594

Re: After the Dream—Misha's Arc (Part 4 up 20140417)

Evocative...

...and horrifying.

Very realistic how you portrayed rape as an act of power, moreso than sex.
brythain wrote:‘ku-er-veh’
By some coincidence I learnt this word not long ago on a Polish YouTube video, and I remembered the meaning from when I read the comments!
by Hotkey
Sun Apr 13, 2014 9:34 am
Forum: Fan Art
Topic: A very crunchy drawings thread
Replies: 31
Views: 11867

Re: A very crunchy drawings thread

That looks very nice. I don't know nothing 'bout art, but the hair is all nice and interwoven, and the turquoise/aqua eye colour is nice. I assume works with a tablet would be better, but it's interesting to see the pencil sketches - it gives beginners realistic proof of where artists begin and how ...
by Hotkey
Mon Apr 07, 2014 4:10 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Endorphin Rush - An Emilogue (UPDATED 5/10/14)
Replies: 100
Views: 12214

Re: Endorphin Rush - An Emilogue (STILL WELCOMING EDITORS)

Griffon is quite correct. Johnny, there is an abundance of free web space these days, which you can always use to back up your work. http://drive.google.com has document formatting features, and thus is ideally suited to fiction writers. If you're looking for editors, I assume you already have an ac...
by Hotkey
Sat Apr 05, 2014 6:56 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: After the Dream—Rin's Arc/Miki's Arc (Complete)
Replies: 111
Views: 33490

Re: After the Dream—Rin's Arc (Complete)

Yep. Writing from Rin PoV at seven different chronological points throughout her life has to be very difficult, and to me you've handled it meticulously. I was looking forward to Misha's PoV perhaps moreso than the other character's. I know I'm going to read it anyway, so I won't do the routine wher...
by Hotkey
Thu Apr 03, 2014 3:17 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: After the Dream—Rin's Arc/Miki's Arc (Complete)
Replies: 111
Views: 33490

Re: After the Dream—Rin's Arc (Part 5 up 20140403)

I love all these... little details that get carefully woven in. Miki backstory. Not sure how I feel. Meiko the unflappable supermom. Outlives her daughter, finds second love with a doctor, is more of a mother to Rin than her own mother, takes care of the grandkids, keeps a cooool heaaad, a girl in t...
by Hotkey
Sat Mar 22, 2014 11:20 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: After Graduation - A Shizune/Hisao story (post good route)
Replies: 237
Views: 59171

Re: Chapter 21

Cute! Always enjoy a 'Nakai family meets the girlfriend' scenario ^_^. "...you'd have to be a tenacious woman to get our Hisao to motivated." I think there's something not quite right here? I don't know how Misha did it. Aww... the past tense here makes me sad. Shizune and Hisao are moving on ^_^. T...
by Hotkey
Wed Mar 19, 2014 4:28 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: After the Dream—Hanako's Arc (Complete)
Replies: 74
Views: 26125

Re: AtD—Hanako's Arc (Part 4 up 20140319)

I can't remember ever seeing an ugly university campus, and that one is no exception. Are we having a face-off of campus videos? If so, beat my old one! Now that I've had more time to digest this chapter, this line just doesn't sit right with me. “Many t-thanks, small one...” Hanako is the least lik...
by Hotkey
Wed Mar 19, 2014 1:33 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: After the Dream—Hanako's Arc (Complete)
Replies: 74
Views: 26125

Re: After the Dream—Hanako's Arc (Part 4 up 20140319)

Yeah, this Hanako arc almost feels like the saddest of them all to me so far, even surpassing Emi's.