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It's.... it's not worse... Is, ah, is English your first language? I'm trying not to be insensitive here, but, um, it doesn't sound that way. And I feel like my previous advice was largely wasted. I only read it because it reminds me of Full Life Consequences . That's not something you want to emula...

I don't think anybody wants the responsibility of having to didactically dissect your writing in an effort to guide your improvement, since this would be an unbelievable amount of work. Any participation by the reader would be a form of pure altruism. Pretty much. I just enjoy critiquing things lik...

Damn, that's cold Suzu. I'm as curious as Seiki to find out who she was pre-mysterious event. “Who am I?” I am completely incapable of taking this line seriously ever since watching Scrubs which kind of ruined the effect you were going for. But that's my failing, not yours. And I'm incapable of dis...

Mohn_Jadden wrote:Well then shit, you're gonna have a miniature sun inside you if I ever end this.

Utsuho feels!

Point the mistakes, I'm sure there's a ton of them. https://babblingbrookesblog.files.wordpress.com/2014/02/challenge-accepted.jpg "Point the (out any) mistakes..." Prologue: (Use bold/large font for your chapter heading.) School for the disabled. (Sentence fragment.) I knew that it exist (ed) beca...

Leaty wrote:

Blank Mage wrote:Misha gives an overacted, silent laugh. [I want there to be a world where we get a cute girl, instead~!]

This is now the canon origin for the divergence point in MTtB.

I couldn't very well write an AU one shot without referencing the definitive AU fic, could I?

But... but... these are one-shots, you can't be 'far behind' I meant reading. I still haven't finished the Kenji Saga, let alone your AtD secondary arcs and one shots. Anyway, I was going to put up a more detailed post later, but since that doesn't seem to be happening, I'll just stick to the phone...

Blank Mage: you have no idea how accurate you were about the 'wrote something new' bit; however, I am only one person. Mostly. :) Damn it man, do you know how far behind I am?! You don't! You can't! Because you are a god damn machine! Like SkyNet for fan fics! Now I'm going to angrily read this fic...

I really haven't read enough of Brythrain's stuff. Don't feel too bad. Reading all of his stuff would be like reading a particularly deep and cerebral version of high school War and Peace. He probably wrote something new in the time it took me to make this comment, and read every post on the forum....

brythain wrote:Now that was a pretty reversal. It reminds me of the fourth Library Anniversary piece.

Links where?

A World Much Like Our Own [Misha, have you ever heard of the Infinite Worlds theory?] Misha catches the sign out of the corner of her eye, otherwise occupied trying to balance a pencil on one finger. Mutou left a few moments ago to fetch the transfer student we're getting today, and around us the c...

Ever have an idea you just wanted to write the moment it popped into your head?

brythain wrote:

Solistor wrote:Is cute and fluffy. I like it.

I'm happy! I'm trying to shake my reputation for sad melancholy whatnots.

Sad and Melancholy: 126
Cute and Fluffy: 1

Knowing you, you could probably even that number out in a few months, though.

Well it... it doesn't have any spelling errors.... so that's a start...

Eurobeatjester wrote: I doubt my ability to write convincing lesbian erotica

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