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I recently discovered another pitfall I was falling into that I hope I can relate here, so others can avoid it. Fanfiction is inspired by the concept of "what if." At each point in a story, there's an infinite numbers of places you can branch out from: a single line of dialogue, an action, a look, o...

I totally get the art club thing. I had some thoughts on it, along with writing in general, that I can't really put anywhere else so I will here (like about treating Hisao as an OC) When you start with an original (or near enough) character, you can take them anywhere within the confines of that uni...

You guys worked together for years...has this thread revealed things to you about your fellow developers that you didn't know? And if so, what?

Went back and cleaned up some typos and things that I can't believe I missed :oops: Also fixed some more errors, namely two big ones. The first was Hisao mentioning that there are fireworks at the festival, then later expressing surprise when Saki informs him about them later in the chapter. The oth...

Anyway, some time to respond :D Thank you for the feedback so far. I took this chapter in a bit of a different direction and I'm glad it's being received positively. Hisao being dense I tried to use this chapter to show that he was actively trying to move away from being so dense, mostly by realizin...

Peorth wrote:Noticed a typo:
I reach Saki as the chair returns to its original permission with a metallic clunk.
should be 'position', I imagine.

Caught it! Silly little gremlins!

I'm glad I'm not the only one who enjoys seeing Hisao in pain

Saki backs off, her hands sliding back into the water. “You okay?” she asks. I nod stiffly, my face still hot. “Well, you were definitely faster that time, right up until you hit the wall,” she says, in a lighthearted tone. I chuckle at how absurd what she just said was...and it's a crack in the dam...

“Really?” I ask, shocked again. Saki nods, a bit guiltily, as if she knew all along this revelation would have this impact on myself and others. “I haven't been there for the last week at all, and even before then, I was missing out on meetings. Besides,” she offers weakly, “there's nobody to take m...

She nods. “Only for short stretches. I still wear a brace, and I'll probably use the wheelchair off and on for another few days, but I've been trying to get used to the crutches. I haven't had to use any for a few years.” I've been fortunate enough that I've never had to use crutches, so I can't rel...

Alright! So I changed my mind AGAIN and lengthened the first part of the last part (heh) to be a full chapter, with its own title. The last chapter of the act will be coming up fairly quickly compared to my normal update schedule. It seems the new apartment has me bustling with creativity :) The nam...

Sharp-O wrote:Those legs go way higher than I expected them to.

New artwork!

"May I have this dance?"

Change of plans - I know I said this was a long update and it is so far (almost as long as the second part of Electric Daisies) and it's a little over halfway done. I'll be splitting it into two parts like I did with the end of Act 1. Putting the finishing touches on the first part now. Also there w...