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- Thu Aug 11, 2016 3:58 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (Double Update 3/14)
- Replies: 1140
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Re: Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (Updated 8/9)
First hotsprings and next going to the beach? Time for the Saki filler ark ;) Everything is improved with hot springs and beach filler! :lol: I enjoy the challenge of writing scenes that may not include main characters at all. They were few and far between in the VN, but it was always nice whenever...
- Tue Aug 09, 2016 11:43 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (Double Update 3/14)
- Replies: 1140
- Views: 572095
Re: Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (Updated 7/12)
“I...maybe. But I told her it wasn't her fault. I did everything to assure her it wasn't and that it would have happened eventually. I don't know if she ever believed me though.” “It can be really tough,” Chisato says quietly. “Knowing something and believing it are two entirely different things. Yo...
- Tue Aug 09, 2016 11:38 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (Double Update 3/14)
- Replies: 1140
- Views: 572095
Re: Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (Updated 7/12)
A feeling of disbelief hits me for a moment towards her for how nonchalantly she made that comment, but the edge is take off it when I see her unabashed curiosity. “That's where they operated on your heart, right?” “Yeah,” I say, sinking back down into the water. The bubbles at the surface fortunate...
- Tue Aug 09, 2016 11:34 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (Double Update 3/14)
- Replies: 1140
- Views: 572095
Re: Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (Updated 7/12)
What's this? A new chapter within a month of the last one? Yep! I had a lot of free time the last few weeks, so I was able to get one out faster than I usually do! This one's one of the shorter ones however - can't have every single chapter taking up 15+ pages as much as I would like to :lol: Hope y...
- Sat Jul 30, 2016 7:25 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (Double Update 3/14)
- Replies: 1140
- Views: 572095
Re: Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (Updated 7/12)
Next chapter may have art! Not a commission though, so it's up in the air.
- Sat Jul 16, 2016 12:05 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (Double Update 3/14)
- Replies: 1140
- Views: 572095
Re: Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (Updated 7/12)
Ah, sorry. I didn't see the error in what you quoted, that's why I was curious. The original text you quoted didn't say "myself am standing."Mirage_GSM wrote:More a grammar issue than a typo I guess...
Glad you liked it! How was Kenji's personification? That was the hardest part of the chapter for me.
- Thu Jul 14, 2016 3:29 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (Double Update 3/14)
- Replies: 1140
- Views: 572095
Re: Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (Updated 7/12)
Did you quote a typo?Mirage_GSM wrote:Does "myself am standing" sound right to you?Chisato, Mitsuru, and myself are standing around Noriko,
Everything else I wanted to comment on has already been said by others - except I think Hisao was a bit needlessly dense when it came to Saki's violin problems...
- Tue Jul 12, 2016 3:24 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (Double Update 3/14)
- Replies: 1140
- Views: 572095
Re: Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (Updated 7/12)
Only picked up one typo I knew about Saki and Chisato from previous discussions and the photos I've seen in the bad room, Although maybe this is foreshadowing of dark events that occurred in the band room ;) Whoops! Silly gremlins! :lol: I actually start off each chapter with an outline or a checkl...
- Tue Jul 12, 2016 3:19 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (Double Update 3/14)
- Replies: 1140
- Views: 572095
Re: Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (Updated 7/12)
Oh my god, people are still updating stories here!? This is amazing. I haven't gone through all of this yet, but I like what I've read so far! We're still here :D We're a small but dedicated bunch :P Perfect timing mate for you to update, since today I got myself the sort of job I want to do and ge...
- Tue Jul 12, 2016 6:47 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (Double Update 3/14)
- Replies: 1140
- Views: 572095
Re: Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (Updated 5/11)
I'm ten feet away from my door when I notice there's something taped to it. My brows knit as I try to make it out before I end up in front of it, thinking as to what it could possibly be. A new set of rules for the dorms, maybe? Otherwise, I can't think of anything that couldn't just be handed to me...
- Tue Jul 12, 2016 6:41 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (Double Update 3/14)
- Replies: 1140
- Views: 572095
Re: Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (Updated 7/12)
“You sure you don't want to come with us?” Chisato says, turning towards her boyfriend. “How much studying do you have to do?” “Enough to where it worries me,” he answers, tapping a finger against his upper lip in a contemplative motion. “Let me see how confident I am in a week or so. I'll definitel...
- Tue Jul 12, 2016 6:38 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (Double Update 3/14)
- Replies: 1140
- Views: 572095
Re: Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (Updated 7/12)
I knew about Saki and Chisato from previous discussions and the photos I've seen in the band room, but I don't know anything about Mitsuru. “You've been coming to Yamaku since after middle school?” “I have. It's been an...eventful few years,” he says, looking at Chisato out of the corner of his eyes...
- Tue Jul 12, 2016 6:34 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (Double Update 3/14)
- Replies: 1140
- Views: 572095
Re: Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (Updated 7/12)
New chapter! I actually managed to only take two months this time! Fairly dialogue heavy. Was a fun challenge to write this one! With the length of this chapter, Learning To Fly just hit a little over 100,000 words! I never thought I'd get to this milestone! Comments and feedback, as always, appreci...
- Fri Jun 24, 2016 3:02 am
- Forum: Public Discussion
- Topic: The "feels" bazaar.
- Replies: 2254
- Views: 428899
Re: The "feels" bazaar.
Is there something I'm missing when it comes to Hanako? I've just finished her route with the good ending and... well... I'm actually left a bit disappointed. I was really hoping that it would put me on the same level as Lilly's, but I'm actually left far from that. What was it that made you feel s...
- Wed Jun 15, 2016 6:42 pm
- Forum: Public Discussion
- Topic: Random KS Discussion
- Replies: 3060
- Views: 642312
Re: Random KS Discussion
The dude's a world class athlete capable of doing more physically than most able-bodied people, so if they're trying to say he couldn't have done it because he's missing his legs...Rhodri wrote:Ah that is sweet Sharp.
In other news, opinions people?
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