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by Deadpool021
Sat Apr 26, 2014 12:22 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
Replies: 1549
Views: 333571

Re: Developments (Post-Lilly Neutral End) - Chapter 39 up 4/

Whoa what a chapter.I really do feel for Lily's situation. Worse case scenario she loses her best friend, is unable to be with Hisao perhaps even downgrade their relationship to mere acquaintances, she doesn't get along with her cousin and her sister and parents are living in another country. She wo...
by Deadpool021
Sun Apr 13, 2014 12:10 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Akira Pseudo-Route [Complete!]
Replies: 914
Views: 396836

Re: Akira Pseudo-Route [Updated as of 4/12]

I can't believe it took me this long to notice but Tetsuo and Mr. Satou are very similar. They both put their business as priority over everything and everyone else. I'm sure Akira at some point probably noticed she was going to end up with someone that is just like her father and is glad their rela...
by Deadpool021
Thu Apr 10, 2014 10:51 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
Replies: 1549
Views: 333571

Re: Developments (Post-Lilly Neutral End) - Chapter 38 up 4/

Nice chapter. Nice read.
I get up from my seat, and I feel Hisao's hand on my arm. "Emi, I..." he starts to say, but I can't wait for him to finish.
I wonder what Hisao was going to say there........
by Deadpool021
Sat Apr 05, 2014 1:56 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Akira Pseudo-Route [Complete!]
Replies: 914
Views: 396836

Re: Akira Pseudo-Route [Updated as of 3/6]

Just a quick update. I haven't died or anything. Writing is going a little slow, as this has been an increasingly difficult chapter to write without throwing a big chunk out in frustration. It doesn't help that there's been quite a bit of drama going on in my personal life, and I've been having tro...
by Deadpool021
Fri Apr 04, 2014 12:55 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Hanako's Story (COMPLETED 18/08/2014)
Replies: 378
Views: 95317

Re: Hanako's Story (UPDATED 03/04/2014)

Really it's just a case of striking a balance, which isn't necessarily an easy thing to do. Some readers have said that I tend to focus too much on the internal monologue and that I need to write Hanako more through her actions than her thoughts, but some readers have likewise said that I'm not doi...
by Deadpool021
Thu Mar 27, 2014 10:23 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
Replies: 1549
Views: 333571

Re: Developments (Post-Lilly Neutral End) - Chapter 37 up 3/

I like how we got to see more of Noriko. I honestly thought that she would only appear on that other chapter and never again. It's nice that you don't let anything go to waste. I can't help but think that all the characters are avoiding a confrontation and eventually it will blow up. Anyways great c...
by Deadpool021
Sat Mar 15, 2014 3:43 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
Replies: 1549
Views: 333571

Re: Developments (Post-Lilly Neutral End) - Chapter 36 up 3/

Good chapter :) . It was nice to have the three of them together again but they were so tense given everything that's happened. It's been said a million times before on this thread but I really can't see any ending where no one gets hurt. I just hope at the very least the friendship's survive.
by Deadpool021
Sun Mar 09, 2014 5:40 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Akira Pseudo-Route [Complete!]
Replies: 914
Views: 396836

Re: Akira Pseudo-Route [Updated as of 3/6]

Nice chapter. I can't wait to for the meeting and the birthday, I keep getting the feeling that something bad is going to happen though.
by Deadpool021
Tue Mar 04, 2014 10:16 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
Replies: 1549
Views: 333571

Re: Developments (Post-Lilly Neutral End) - Chapter 35 up 3/

Every time I read a chapter, I think of a million directions the next chapter can go but you still amaze me in writing something I didn't think about. How do you do that you magnificent bastard? :lol: In all seriousness though, I think you're doing an amazing job Dewelar. You always keep me hooked o...
by Deadpool021
Tue Mar 04, 2014 9:32 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Hanako's Story (COMPLETED 18/08/2014)
Replies: 378
Views: 95317

Re: Hanako's Story (UPDATED 04/03/2014)

I was at work, saw the update and couldn't wait to get home to read it. A little sad that its almost over though :(
by Deadpool021
Tue Feb 18, 2014 10:24 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
Replies: 1549
Views: 333571

Re: Developments (Post-Lilly Neutral End) - Chapter 34 up 2/

Another awesome chapter! I like how we got to see Emi's and Hanako's point of view for the same scene. I am rooting for Lily. I say this because they were together first and really liked each other before she left. Even with all these things happening during her absence, I feel that if Hisao ends up...
by Deadpool021
Tue Feb 04, 2014 11:37 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
Replies: 1549
Views: 333571

Re: Developments (Post-Lilly Neutral End) - Ch 33 added 2/3/

Things are so tense and Lily hasn't even arrived yet! I can't wait to see what Hisao will think/do now that Emi ran out of his room. My guess will be that he will think he messed up, like how he thinks of when Hanako came onto him. If he was going to choose Emi there he might even take a step back d...
by Deadpool021
Tue Feb 04, 2014 10:52 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Akira Pseudo-Route [Complete!]
Replies: 914
Views: 396836

Re: Akira Pseudo-Route [Updated as of 2/4]

Great chapter! I can't wait to see how the big event and her birthday go :D
by Deadpool021
Tue Feb 04, 2014 10:18 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Hanako's Story (COMPLETED 18/08/2014)
Replies: 378
Views: 95317

Re: Hanako's Story (UPDATED 04/02/2014)

You're doing a really good job portraying the story from Hanako's point of view. Keep up the good writing
by Deadpool021
Thu Dec 26, 2013 5:11 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Akira Pseudo-Route [Complete!]
Replies: 914
Views: 396836

Re: Akira Pseudo-Route [Updated as of 12/25]

I'm really enjoying this. Keep up the good writing