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by OutofBlues
Wed Dec 04, 2013 5:43 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
Replies: 1559
Views: 345530

Re: Developments (Post-Lilly Bad End) [Ch 27 up 12/4]

Dammit Hanako! You need to get on that train! Hanako's storyline in the VN was always frustrating for me due to her insecurities and I think you've managed to capture her inner dialog perfectly. Clearly she's got it in her head that sorting things out with Hisao takes priority over everything else, ...
by OutofBlues
Sat Nov 30, 2013 8:55 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: For Want of a Nail - Misha Route (Updated 11/1/19)
Replies: 582
Views: 240519

Re: For Want of a Nail - Misha Route (New Chapter 8/7)

Prof gave the route the title "For Want of a Nail" because it relates to its usage as an idiomatic expression, what does this mean? english is not my first language, you see An old proverb showing how small events can have immense consequences. For want of a nail the shoe was lost. For want of a sh...
by OutofBlues
Sat Nov 30, 2013 6:07 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Blossom - A Miki pseudo-route [Development Halted]
Replies: 191
Views: 48738

Re: Blossom - A Miki pseudo-route [Update 30/11/2013]

Suzu's characterization in this fic has always struck me as "off" because I found Scissorlips' interpretation to be so compelling, but I think after this entry I'm starting to appreciate your characterization as a more balanced individual. Here, Suzu doesn't seem as overwhelmed by her disorder as sh...
by OutofBlues
Sat Nov 30, 2013 4:39 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: After Graduation - A Shizune/Hisao story (post good route)
Replies: 237
Views: 65931

Re: After Graduation - A Shizune/Hisao story (post good rout

As always, sg1, I find myself grinning like a madman by the end of the chapter. There are a few clouds on the horizon with Jiggy, but that should only add another level of hilarity at the expense of our Master of Romance. *Thumbs up*
by OutofBlues
Sat Nov 30, 2013 1:11 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: For Want of a Nail - Misha Route (Updated 11/1/19)
Replies: 582
Views: 240519

Re: For Want of a Nail - Misha Route (New Chapter 8/7)

Riakai wrote:
AnathRaema wrote:
BlackWaltzTheThird wrote:Now it's time to join the waiting game like everyone else. I don't mind, if it's for a story of such quality as this.
Waiting has always been half the fun.
I hate waiting ._.
Waiting is overrated, but for most of these stories it's well worth it.
by OutofBlues
Thu Nov 21, 2013 9:50 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
Replies: 1559
Views: 345530

Re: Developments (Post-Lilly Bad End) [Ch 26 up 11/21]

I think Dewelar gets a great deal of satisfaction out of screwing with our heads. Also, this chapter was enough for me to temporarily turn in my LillyBro card and root for Twintails. Go Emi! Go!
by OutofBlues
Wed Nov 20, 2013 9:20 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: After Graduation - A Shizune/Hisao story (post good route)
Replies: 237
Views: 65931

Re: After Graduation - A Shizune/Hisao story (post good rout

Sometimes you just need to read something to put a grin on your face and this fic brings out the grins by the truckload. Thanks for lightening things up a bit sg1cat.
by OutofBlues
Wed Nov 20, 2013 9:15 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: For Want of a Nail - Misha Route (Updated 11/1/19)
Replies: 582
Views: 240519

Re: For Want of a Nail - Misha Route (New Chapter 8/7)

The most recent chapter is enormous (25 pages/12350 words and counting - versus a total so far of 160 pages/76600 words) with a few major happenings, so going has been slow. I'd like to imagine that I'm almost ready to send it off to my editors, but not making any promises right now. I do want to g...
by OutofBlues
Wed Nov 20, 2013 9:11 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Akira Pseudo-Route [Complete!]
Replies: 914
Views: 405142

Re: Akira Pseudo-Route [Updated as of 11/20]

Mr. Satou actually comes off more of a douche here than in Fluff's Lilly storyline, I didn't think it was possible, but there he is in all his douchey (Is that a word? It should be a word.) glory. I love your story Thanatos, thanks for writing it. I don't recall whether Mr. Satou's physical appearan...
by OutofBlues
Wed Nov 20, 2013 9:04 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
Replies: 1559
Views: 345530

Re: Developments (Post-Lilly Bad End) [Ch 25 up 11/15]

I'm glad I didn't, because a couple of the heavy hitters published chapters within the last 12 hours or so, and I would have felt like one of those little independent movie studios whose new release drops the same weekend as Hunger Games and Iron Man... :D You're scrappy though! Hungry! This story ...
by OutofBlues
Sun Nov 10, 2013 10:03 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
Replies: 1559
Views: 345530

Re: Developments (Post-Lilly Bad End) [Ch 24 up 11/10]

I may be confusing head-canon with events that actually occurred in the VN, but isn't Shizune aware of his condition because she has access to basic medical records for student council duties? Technically that is never said in the VN. It's implied that she knows since she looks worried after bumpin...
by OutofBlues
Sun Nov 10, 2013 9:55 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
Replies: 1559
Views: 345530

Re: Developments (Post-Lilly Bad End) [Ch 24 up 11/10]

I may be confusing head-canon with events that actually occurred in the VN, but isn't Shizune aware of his condition because she has access to basic medical records for student council duties? Anyway, great chapter! I see so much potential conflict in the story you're writing, I can't wait to see wh...
by OutofBlues
Wed Nov 06, 2013 8:59 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Tomorrow's Doom ~ Up: 04/30/16 ~ recommitted to completion.
Replies: 852
Views: 231598

Re: Tomorrow's Doom ~ Up: 11/06/13 ~ C.42 - Unexpected Layov

Awww yeah, early morning Aiko update. Chances of getting anything done at work today have dropped to 0.
by OutofBlues
Mon Nov 04, 2013 1:14 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
Replies: 1559
Views: 345530

Re: Developments (Post-Lilly Bad End) [Ch 23 up 11/3]

Another great chapter. You are really doing a good job of making Emi and Hanako both sympathetic characters. I am catching myself rooting for whomever has the PoV at the moment, and putting them both together for the first time makes it difficult to choose between the two, I hope we see more interac...
by OutofBlues
Wed Oct 09, 2013 8:07 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Akira Pseudo-Route [Complete!]
Replies: 914
Views: 405142

Re: Akira Pseudo-Route [Updated as of 8/31]

Imagine my surprise when I look at the clock and realize that, as of now, the Akira route has been in progress for exactly a year, give or take a few hours. Gonna try and get 5-3 out asap. It's in its final stages. More Akira? I don't know where I got the idea that this route was done with, but I a...