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by monkeywitha6pack
Sun Apr 27, 2014 8:38 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Irreversible
Replies: 20
Views: 2976

Re: Irreversible

I never said I didn't like it, I just said that I would have been much better if I had seen it before I 100% the game
by monkeywitha6pack
Sun Apr 27, 2014 7:20 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Irreversible
Replies: 20
Views: 2976

Re: Irreversible

I think this would work a lot better for people who haven't played before. Most of us here know all about the routes and what happens in them so we all know what the big reveal is before we even start reading. However I feel if back a year ago when I first played it it would have had a greater effec...
by monkeywitha6pack
Fri Apr 25, 2014 3:08 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
Replies: 1549
Views: 293456

Re: Developments (Post-Lilly Neutral End) - Chapter 39 up 4/

I never understand why that's such a beating topic. I mean I can kinda see why but it doesn't bother me that much
by monkeywitha6pack
Thu Apr 24, 2014 2:04 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
Replies: 1549
Views: 293456

Re: Developments (Post-Lilly Neutral End) - Chapter 39 up 4/

great chapter! Things are starting to unravel now
by monkeywitha6pack
Mon Apr 21, 2014 1:55 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Start/Load/Extras
Replies: 7
Views: 1383

Re: Start/Load/Extras

Hm this is very interesting concept. I can think of many possibilities of ways this could go. Welcome to the forum!
by monkeywitha6pack
Sun Apr 20, 2014 4:44 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Steel [We're on the third chapter now!]
Replies: 34
Views: 4424

Re: Steel

My advise is to get a editor. Even if you have decent grammer both you and spell check will miss things. For example English is one of my best subjects and I still make silly mistakes that I miss
by monkeywitha6pack
Sat Apr 19, 2014 4:17 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Steel [We're on the third chapter now!]
Replies: 34
Views: 4424

Re: Steel

After getting around to reading this I think it has great potential. It's to early to tell the characters full personalities but I like them so far. And that you plan on writing it like a vn in the way you say your going to go back to a point and have him end up a different way. Deffinetly keeping a...
by monkeywitha6pack
Fri Apr 18, 2014 9:36 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Here's all of Doomish's old shit
Replies: 130
Views: 31545

Re: Here's all of Doomish's old shit

Yes he made atleast one, it's in the download file, I thinks it's called suzus long night or so thing like that
by monkeywitha6pack
Fri Apr 18, 2014 6:20 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Steel [We're on the third chapter now!]
Replies: 34
Views: 4424

Re: Steel

Pro tip. Instead of making a new thread every part reply to the other one with the new part
by monkeywitha6pack
Wed Apr 16, 2014 4:06 pm
Forum: Fan Works
Topic: Submitting of fan fiction: Episodic vs. whole releases
Replies: 16
Views: 3028

Re: Submitting of fan fiction: Episodic vs. whole releases

Personally I prefer a mix of them both. Finishing writing the whole thing, then releasing it episodically. It makes it so you are gurentied a chapter to post on any givin day and you receive critisim so you can edit parts to fit more with what people point out so you don't write yourself into a hole...
by monkeywitha6pack
Sun Apr 13, 2014 9:56 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Haunting: A Love Story *UPDATED 02/26/2015*
Replies: 124
Views: 41858

Re: The Haunting: A Love Story *UPDATED*

It was a pleasant surprise to see an update to this, in fact I thought it had ended last chapter. Glad I checked the fan fiction section today :D
by monkeywitha6pack
Thu Apr 10, 2014 5:06 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
Replies: 1549
Views: 293456

Re: Developments (Post-Lilly Neutral End) - Chapter 38 up 4/

Some interesting "developments" in this chapter, I can't help but feel that Rin might have some feelings for Hisao after this chapter. Just a gut feeling
by monkeywitha6pack
Sun Apr 06, 2014 3:38 pm
Forum: Fan Works
Topic: Limits of Fanfiction - What is appropriate?
Replies: 140
Views: 25556

Re: Limits of Fanfiction - What is appropriate?

Little things can spiral into large conversations and discussions, heck this thread was started because of one chapter of a story, it's human nature
by monkeywitha6pack
Sat Apr 05, 2014 8:37 pm
Forum: Fan Art
Topic: Reqreation: First steps (Updated: 21-11-2016)
Replies: 172
Views: 32878

Re: Reqreation: First steps (Updated: 5/4)

Good work! Nice to see some of saki, she rarely pops up in fan art nowadays
by monkeywitha6pack
Sat Apr 05, 2014 5:09 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: For Want of a Nail - Misha Route (Updated 11/1/19)
Replies: 575
Views: 206912

Re: For Want of a Nail - Misha Route (April 1 "Update")

I love the joke updates like is one and the sex scene skip a little back, it's a good hokd over till the next chapter and it's entertaining