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by bhtooefr
Mon Feb 03, 2014 6:37 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Enjoy The Silence (Ch. 10 2014-02-08, complete)
Replies: 80
Views: 30913

Re: Enjoy The Silence (Ch. 8 2014-02-03)

A couple notes. I have now run out of buffer. Chapter 9 isn't in a state where I'm comfortable with posting it yet. I hope to get it in such a state today, but if you don't see a chapter tomorrow morning, I failed. I'd rather it be right than I keep up the release streak. And, yes, I know, this one ...
by bhtooefr
Mon Feb 03, 2014 6:33 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Enjoy The Silence (Ch. 10 2014-02-08, complete)
Replies: 80
Views: 30913

Chapter 8

I hate this class. This professor is the hardest person to follow that I have ever heard, between his thick accent, and his habit of not following the textbook. I’m usually good at paying attention in class, but in this class, the professor’s words just blend together as unintelligible sounds, and ...
by bhtooefr
Sun Feb 02, 2014 10:40 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Enjoy The Silence (Ch. 10 2014-02-08, complete)
Replies: 80
Views: 30913

Re: Enjoy The Silence (Ch. 7 2014-02-02)

dewelar wrote:Anyway, I enjoyed this chapter. I think one piece of this was meant to be a twist a scene in Developments. If so, I am honored *bows*. If not, then...never mind :) .
Heh. ;)

I'm not sure if I actually INTENDED to borrow that, but it became part of my headcanon.
by bhtooefr
Sun Feb 02, 2014 4:59 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Enjoy The Silence (Ch. 10 2014-02-08, complete)
Replies: 80
Views: 30913

Re: Enjoy The Silence (Ch. 7 2014-02-02)

Yes, she did. (Yet somehow, she did resist it.) Let's just say that my headcanon is that Akira bats for both teams, and she wasn't just trying to boost Hanako's self-esteem (I mean, that was certainly part of it) when she said that she looked sexy. Basically, I'm thinking Akira's reaction to seeing ...
by bhtooefr
Sun Feb 02, 2014 9:06 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Enjoy The Silence (Ch. 10 2014-02-08, complete)
Replies: 80
Views: 30913

Re: Enjoy The Silence (Ch. 6 2014-02-01)

Something brown and smelly is getting dangerously close to the fan, and Hisao looks far more terrified than I am. Finally! Hanako's been waiting years for this! I'm so sorry It's not White Day yet. Seriously, though, Hanako won't be getting fecal matter to the face in this story. At least not actua...
by bhtooefr
Sun Feb 02, 2014 8:32 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Enjoy The Silence (Ch. 10 2014-02-08, complete)
Replies: 80
Views: 30913

Chapter 7

Bright... I shut my eyes quickly to stop the assault of the sun's rays. My head feels like it's about to burst, and I feel like I'm sleeping on a recliner. I slowly open my eyes, and see that the last part, in fact, is true. Where am I? Looking further around the room, it looks like a hotel room. S...
by bhtooefr
Sat Feb 01, 2014 8:40 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Ask!
Replies: 4980
Views: 1482552

Re: Ask!

Is Hisao's guess at Hideaki's age (15-16) right, or given that he also got Hideaki's gender wrong, did he get his age wrong (presumably too high of a guess)? If so, how old is Hideaki?
by bhtooefr
Sat Feb 01, 2014 8:33 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Enjoy The Silence (Ch. 10 2014-02-08, complete)
Replies: 80
Views: 30913

Re: Enjoy The Silence (Ch. 6 2014-02-01)

I'll note that this is based on an actual game (Dunst-Gresser, New York 1950). Gisela Kahn Gresser was at the time a two-time US Women's Chess Champion (and eventually would be a nine-time champion), and that year had become one of the first International Woman Masters (and would later be the first ...
by bhtooefr
Sat Feb 01, 2014 5:24 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Enjoy The Silence (Ch. 10 2014-02-08, complete)
Replies: 80
Views: 30913

Chapter 6

“How about a nice game of chess?” As much as I want to follow Akira’s advice, and refuse Hisao… I give in. “S-sure. Y-your room or mine?” Maybe I can talk to him over the game of chess. “I was practicing earlier, so I’ve got my board mostly set up…” His room it is, then. Good, that means that I can ...
by bhtooefr
Fri Jan 31, 2014 6:10 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Enjoy The Silence (Ch. 10 2014-02-08, complete)
Replies: 80
Views: 30913

Re: Enjoy The Silence (Ch. 5 2014-01-31)

I'd just like to note that the line, "And then, part of me wants Shizune to find out, so she breaks up with Hisao…" was not actually inspired by dewelar's comment. It's in the original revision of this chapter, that I did on the 3rd of this month - the day I started writing this story. Oh, and chapt...
by bhtooefr
Fri Jan 31, 2014 5:59 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Enjoy The Silence (Ch. 10 2014-02-08, complete)
Replies: 80
Views: 30913

Chapter 5 (...ceci n'est pas une pipe)

As the music stops, Akira speaks up. “Hey, I’ve gotta go to the little girl’s room. Hanako, do you need to too?” Why would she even ask… Oh, she doesn’t need to go there at all. She wants to talk. “Wh… y… y-yeah, s-sure.” “Sorry, Hisao, guess you’re alone for now without our company, we’ll be back i...
by bhtooefr
Thu Jan 30, 2014 1:35 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Enjoy The Silence (Ch. 10 2014-02-08, complete)
Replies: 80
Views: 30913

Re: Chapter 4 (in which I refer to a non-Depeche Mode song)

dewelar wrote:All indications aside, the only reason I can think of for Hanako inviting Akira along is that, even if only subconsciously, she wants Shizune to find out about her and Hisao. That would by Quite Interesting.
Sometimes a pipe is just a pipe...
by bhtooefr
Thu Jan 30, 2014 6:55 am
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Hanako's Broken Heart Club
Replies: 4863
Views: 1035481

Re: Hanako's Broken Heart Club

Also, if you haven't already, I'd suggest taking advantage of any mental health resources available to you. Best would be if you have insurance that covers mental health treatment, and can afford it, but if you can't... It sounds like you're currently in 12th grade and in the US? There may be some m...
by bhtooefr
Thu Jan 30, 2014 5:40 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Enjoy The Silence (Ch. 10 2014-02-08, complete)
Replies: 80
Views: 30913

Chapter 4 (in which I refer to a non-Depeche Mode song)

I get to my dorm room right as Hisao calls. "Hey, Hisao, what's up?" "Just going to the store, I need to restock on a few things, if you know what I mean. And I'll get some for your room, I know you're running low, too." I blush at the thought of what exactly he's restocking. "Need me to pick up any...
by bhtooefr
Wed Jan 29, 2014 1:03 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Tomorrow's Doom ~ Up: 04/30/16 ~ recommitted to completion.
Replies: 853
Views: 369538

Re: Tomorrow's Doom ~ Up: 01/28/14 ~ C.43 - Mental Block

Literally, if I receive a call from a blocked number, my phone just says "UNKNOWN".